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By : englishwitch2003
  • From ANON - felix teh cat on April 24, 2005
    i just thought you should know how much i enjoyed this... i thought your writing was amazing and i loved the situations she was put in, esp. walking around the neighborhood naked :)
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  • From ANON - Dark on April 19, 2005
    PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!it got me horny........quit laughing at me!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Ficcy on April 05, 2005
    The story itself is pretty much flawless, but your paragraphs are way too long. Keep in mind that a paragraph is a single thought, not several similar thoughts mashed together.
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  • From ANON - some dude on March 30, 2005
    This is a really great story...making Violet a total nyphomaniac was a great decision.
    I dont like the fact that you had to end it after four chapters...please make a sequal to this or at least continue this story...I want to read more

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  • From ANON - sarah h on March 29, 2005
    If a girl ever orgasmed as violently as you make Violet orgasm I'd say she had brain damage. You've got her nearly having seizures every single time.
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  • From ANON - Hiei81 on March 29, 2005
    I realy liked it! Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Maniac Polar Bear on March 26, 2005
    Honestly, what? I mean I've seen explorations of a characters sexuallity, but your Violet is just horny. Like Debbie does Dallas horney. Beneath a your veneer of sophistication, this is really just PWP with a P. If you plan on continueing this (and I'm not sure how you possibly could), please throw some actuall thought behind all the fucking. Seriously, she oinks her brother, and theres, like, an inch of regret? Jesus titty fucking Christ
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  • From ANON - ... on March 12, 2005
    Very nice, i myself didn't really like the second chapter, but you saved it when you said that Vi didn't like it. Nice fic...TOMMY!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2005
    Wow, I never thought about THAT stretching power, when I told you too make her spy on her parents. Very well done, even if the adult scene was a little bit short. Violet is really a nasty girl, isn't she?
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  • From ANON - Jess on February 06, 2005
    I think you should make another shower seen where violet goes to tommy in the shower and he fianlly sees her.
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  • From ANON - ??? on January 19, 2005
    u should do another with dash
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2005
    Maybe you could let her seduce Tommy in an empty room in school? Or watch her parents in bed invisible?

    Kinda good story so far, even the incest part.
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  • From BloodyPaxton on December 21, 2004
    I love you on so,so many levels!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2004
    Continue? Hell, yes continue this story please.
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  • From ANON - Clay on December 02, 2004
    A fine story with a girl who has the power we all dreamed of. Which is rather strange, because I just picked up Peter S. Beagle's "Tasmin" today and the first bit is about girl wishing she was invisible. I'd love to read more. The possibilities are endless.

    I especially loved the scene where she's trying to maneuver around people and make her feet sound less audible. I like feet though. :-d

    We need more of these stories, DAMNIT!
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