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Reviews for Last Chance

By : ShadowSlayer
  • From AlwaysWonderWho on June 14, 2007
    I absolutely adore this C:
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  • From DarkRockman on February 28, 2007
    After reading this story twice, I must applaud you. I really wanted to kick Jim for what he did, but he got what was coming to him. Angsty!Odd really is hard to write, because it's so out of character for him, but I think you managed wonderfully, and Ulrich... Ulrich is Ulrich. I ventured into this section looking for Yumi x Ulrich, actually, but I'm glad I looked into this, because I've found a rare gem.

    I just have a few minor issues. What part, exactly, did Xana play in all this? Did he manipulate Jim into his actions, or did he happen upon a good opportunity and take it? And after, we didn't even see at least Yumi and Jeremie going to Lyoko to deactivate a tower, because surely Xana would have had to activate a tower in order to lock Yumi and Jeremie in.

    Also, jumping POVs is quite... wonky. One to another to another... it just sounds unwieldy. It worked out fine in this, after I understood, but I was confused for just a moment when you switched from first to third. So, perhaps a bit of warning would be nice.

    All in all, this story is very good. I've bookmarked it and plan to visit again in the near future.
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  • From ANON - I'm in Bishie Heaven on October 06, 2006
    Awww..I really liked that. It seems that it's so hard to find a good yaoi Code Lyoko story! ^-^ Thanks for uploading this!


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  • From ANON - Gilgrissom on August 17, 2006
    Cool, great ending to this story. So, when you said it was only the beginning, does that mean you will write a sequel? Cause I do have an Idea.
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  • From Reviewer on August 08, 2006
    This has got to be one of the most well written stories I have ever read! I could go on but there is no need to!

    Keep writing!

    A 10 out of 10
    10/10

    Sincerely,
    The Reviewer


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  • From ANON - M on December 30, 2005
    this is really good!
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  • From crystaladept on November 02, 2005
    *feels embarassed that she hasn't reveiwed.* Erm... I've been reading this story since almost the beginning, and I must say that I love it. I agree with one of the reveiws about a sequel with Jim coming back for revenge. That'd be great. If you like, before you post anything else on ff.net or aff.net, you can send it to me via e-mail and I could beta it for you. But that's only if you want. Otherwise, don't give up. I'll continue reading so long as you continue posting.

    Crystal Adept

    (Heh heh heh... look... I was actually logged in for a reveiw. lol.)
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  • From ANON - Luperus on October 25, 2005
    Dude, who the hell is NemuX? O_o

    Sirchnotlih: I think someone hacked the account or took advantage of a glitch, that is not the author as for chapter 8 the author changes to NemuX and is not Shadowslayer.
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  • From ANON - sirchnotlih on October 25, 2005
    Just wondering man but, are you ok? I really enjoyed this fic nut if you wanna be a dick and tell everyone off, go ahead, but the next time you even write something, you better watch out.
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  • From ANON - happiness on October 16, 2005
    sounds fun, lol! well, at least you updated. :-)
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  • From ANON - senachan141 on October 14, 2005
    I still can't believe I haven't reviewed this story.I think
    I've read it like five times or something like that.
    Very very nice.For some reason,i'm interested in rape
    fics.And I read dolly's review:dude,flamers only encourage
    people to write more.The flames are there to tell
    a writer what he or she has done wrong so they
    can use that to fix it.Very disrespectful,bitch.And
    what the hell does how she has it on the computer
    have anything to do with it?Seriously,I love the story though.
    I'm going to flame you to help roast Jim over an open fire.
    You should write a sequel to this about how Jim breaks
    out of jail and returns to get revenge!!By the way,i'm twelve years old.
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  • From ANON - watev on September 22, 2005
    nice i loved it
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  • From ANON - Missa on August 04, 2005
    I just couldn't handle Ulrich getting raped, I think reading through Odd's was enough, but wow, what a fic. It's not the end...
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  • From ANON - Vladimir on July 12, 2005
    Very well-constructed, with a use of suspense and drama I generally don't see in these stories. The parts involving the police showed particular care. I'm assuming there will be a Chapter 8? I'll check back for it.
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  • From ANON - bobbyneko on July 07, 2005
    excellently written. poor odd...and ulrich... i'm glad that this was a serious fic ^^;
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