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Reviews for Last Chance

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  • From ANON - VoodooDoll on January 23, 2005
    I forgot to meantion that you better update soon! I just loved this story and can't wait to read more of it. You are an excellent writer.
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  • From ANON - VoodooDoll on January 23, 2005
    Evil Xana. Poor Ulrich. I'm gonna cry. This was so well written. I like the way you have Ulrich and Odd react differently during their 'experiences'. It's very good.

    VoodooDoll
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  • From ANON - VoodooDoll on January 23, 2005
    I agree completely with Odd. What in the world is Ulrich thinking! Poor Ulrich. I hope help gets there in time. Great chapter, great detail.

    VoodooDoll
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  • From ANON - VoodooDoll on January 23, 2005
    That was so sweet! Too bad they were disrupted. Good description as usual. Great chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.

    VoodooDoll
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  • From ANON - VoodooDoll on January 23, 2005
    And the truth comes out! I wonder how Ulrich will react to that. I'd probably freak out and hunt the guy down and kill em. Poor Odd. Great description as usual. I love how you express their feelings.

    VoodooDoll
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  • From ANON - VoodooDoll on January 23, 2005
    Aww, I'm gonna cry. That is so sad. Wonderful description of the emotions and everything. I love how his friends reacted to his 'disapearance' as well. It's not like they automaticly knew there was something wrong. Very realistic!

    VoodooDoll
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  • From ANON - VoodooDoll on January 23, 2005
    Wow, that's one descriptive rape scene. I liked it. Very well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dustin on January 16, 2005
    This one ROCKED!!!! Just like the rest keep up the good work.... You get a Golden Star Sticker one more and you get a cookie.
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotilih on January 14, 2005
    Very good!

    5 out of 5!
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  • From ANON - Effacer (too lazy to log in) on January 12, 2005
    Yes! You updated again! But this time, I'll give you an F...

    For fantastic, duh! Everything is so planned out... I knew XANA had to do something with this. Golly darn, I hope Ulrich gets out of this alright, though he's been asking for it. I got so happy when I saw you update again... yay!

    Though I have a question: is XANA controlling Jim or the door lock? I'm pretty sure that even Jim isn't that inherently evil. Oh well. More plot for me, then!
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  • From ObsessedAnimeFan on January 09, 2005
    This story really is great! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAAASSSEEE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
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  • From ANON - papermaster on December 30, 2004
    I loved the new chapter, and i hope Ulrick gets out of it ok.Cant wait until the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dustin on December 28, 2004
    Oh no Ulrich I hope the police get there..... I must say you did leave the story at a good cliff hanger cause you have no idea how far it's going to go... I'm very pleased with your work please continue and soon.
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  • From ANON - Lin-Lang on December 27, 2004
    Ooooooooooooooooooo!!! Awsome story!!! Great sex scenes, very wonderful description of the character's feelings!!! I loved it!!! It is one of the best stories i've read so far!!!
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  • From on December 27, 2004
    You've done it again. I simply can't wait to read more! I was looking forward to this story being updated all Christmas vacation, and now I'm happy! Your slash rocks, doll! Seems like Ulrich's in deep shit now, heeheh...

    Guess who I am! *evil grin* It's okay if you don't wanna have my babies.

    You'd better update, because I want to read more and if I don't I'll go ballistic!
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