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Reviews for Screams in the Dark

By : Ria
  • From BrianChattillon on June 10, 2005
    I'm just glad that Ron is getting help as well as kim.
    Myself I have YET to write a Ron/Shego, ther muse and plot bunnies for that ship havent bashed me in the head and demanded to write.
    Howevber certain anceint grek gods have, and let me tell you it'sd driving me nutso. So many fandom muses nipping into my psyche demanding this that and the other it's rediculous....

    Anyhow....... A most enigmatic chapter I could actually feel the humanity within Drew as he was indeed showing his most sterling traits as a human being in this one, Serious Dedicated and straight to the point of bliuntness. Seldom has this trait of Drews shone and not as brightlly as now
    I am proud to have read this story in it's fourth chapter. I wait for more paitentlly(Just for reference I don't CONDONE trape, even if my stories seem like that. It's fanfiction for a reason not fanfact, if it was People would be running from me and muttring about the crazy dark minded redhead near psycho walking up the street)

    I wish you well in your stories and will continue reading, Just gimmie a buzz when you write a H/C R/S fuic I need my Rongo!(Ron/Shego) authors on ffn got me Hooked on Rongo and Ron/Bonnie and Beast-Boy/ Raven fanfics *Sighs and trudges back into dream filled fantasies of Shinji Ikari/Rei Ayanami*
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  • From ANON - Emi on June 08, 2005
    Wow... I just read the whole thing... and well... poor ron is all i really have to say...
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 05, 2005
    This is a really great story! For some reason, I like male rape so I really like this. The only problem I have is that Drakken & Shego are WAY too ooc. Please please PLEASE update this soon!
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  • From ANON - e.j on June 01, 2005
    poor ron...i can't beleive that he was raped...n poor kim too...i'm quite surprised dat shego n drakken helped...mayb someday they'll turn into da good guys...wonder what will the stoppables n possibles reactions b when they learned about what happen 2 ron...anyway keep up the good work...hope u'll updated it soon...
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  • From ANON - Buritani on May 25, 2005
    ooooh, you left us on a cliffhanger, clever, the suspense is building
    I think it's cool how shego and Drakken are being nice to them, but I was wondering, maybe, in the next chapter, could you have a little information showing why they are being nice to Kim and Ron?
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  • From ANON - Rai on May 25, 2005
    very nice job. im not a big fan of kim posisble, but this was really good.
    i cant wait for the next one.

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  • From BrianChattillon on May 24, 2005
    I hope those rapists die!
    A very intuitive third chapter. Drakken and Shego should at least consider going into offering their services for councilling Ron and Kim indeed (Sue me I am a sucker for Shego/Ron/ Kim/Ron situations and good old fasioned H/C romance)

    I look forward to more
    The dark depraved lemming
    BrianDarksoul(No I am not a smuirf or Barney)
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  • From ANON - Classic Cowboy on May 24, 2005
    wow, I didn't think this would be updated. this is a very dramatic piece, especially on a site that's known best for pointless smut. I'm liking this so far and I hope you update again soon
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  • From ANON - Buritani on May 13, 2005
    oh my god! poor Ron! what they did to him was horrible! I think it's so kawaii that Kim cares about him so much though, and that Shego and Drakken are helping them, I'm really interested in seeing what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Crumbobulus on April 22, 2005
    I have to admit that this was one of the most orginal things that I've read on this site. It was really sad about Ron and how he's tramatized (can't spell...) and all... He's even scared of his own name. Good Job...
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  • From ANON - Bekll on February 15, 2005
    I seriously feel like crying right now. that was disturbing, but so well written to make me feel horror, sickness, anger, despair, and extreme sadness for Ron. Well done so far! Please update!

    *thinks Ron's parents aren't THAT absent-minded*

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  • From ANON - Tsumi on January 08, 2005


    Hi!

    To be honest I´m quite speechless right now. This is one of the most brutal and saddest Fics I´ve ever read, because you wrote it in a very realistic way. I could imagine all the things, it was like a movie being played in my head. I love Ron and to see how he´s hurt so much is really sad. The pour one... ;___;
    I´d like to read another chapter as well, but *please* don´t set up an happy ending with an "everything-is-so-great"-atmosphere!
    Writing rape means an amount of responsibility. When you let a character be raped once, he will never´be the same again. But I read a lot of fan fics with characters being raped in one chapter and enjoing to have sex in the next- and this is more than unrealistic.
    Okay, I hope you see my point XD

    Bye,

    Tsumi
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  • From ANON - papermaster on December 31, 2004
    I realy loved it.Poor Ron.Damn those bastards.Well i hope you do another chapter,and if you do please e-mail me about it.Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Jiyuu no Megami on December 04, 2004
    Oh...My...GOD! Tat wuz so messed up! Ron did not deserve tat!!!!!! I seriously thought tat they would do tat to Kim instead. No one deserves tat. tat wuz unexpected. and Shego and Drakken to be their saviors and being tat understanding, not impossible but unexpecting from them. plz update!!!

    *~ Jiyuu no Megami
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  • From ANON - L-sama on November 28, 2004
    Ohhhhh this is good. PLEASE give us another chapter!
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