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Reviews for Screams in the Dark

By : Ria
  • From ANON - Lady_Jolly on September 27, 2005
    That....what a damn bastard!!!!!!!! I hate him. How can ohhhh my gosh I can't believe that man!!!! What a jack ass anyways you've writen this story so well!! and it's so sadly realistic (it's sad that it actually happend is the world). I usually really avoid rape stories and even now I still avoid them but i read yours because well I'm not sure why I do read it but it has helped me understand somethings. And keep going I hope there will be more soon

    Lady Jolly
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  • From ANON - Jacobangel on September 26, 2005
    I have to admit I was kinda skeptical that a fanfic about a cartoon could be anything but lame; but man, this one was really well written and realistic. I hate that Ron's parents reacted they way they did, but I guess a lot of people react that way to male rape, and rape in general. I hope Kim's parents will be there for him. I can't wait for more chapters to be written.
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  • From ANON - crumbobulus (too lazy to log in) on September 25, 2005
    Wow... you answered all those reviews... you don't have to answer this or anything though... ;-)
    This story has been a favorite of mine for a while, because its so interesting. I have to admit that the first thing I thought of while reading that chapter was my friends dads reaction to my friend being gay. The dad actually woke my friend up and yelled at him "I've given you pleanty of time to turn stop being gay!" The point being, most people aren't very open to gay situations, even forced ones...
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  • From ANON - Emily on September 25, 2005
    Thx 4 e-mailing me! good chapter- but his dad really iz an asshole, God he's more of a fucker than anything else!!!!! update soon kay'?
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  • From BrianChattillon on September 25, 2005
    *Sharpening a rust encrusted butchers knife determinedlly*
    Oh don't mind me...I'm harmless
    *The knife Bears the name Ron's Dad*

    Trust me...Toatally Harmless..Yesssss I'm in my HAPPY PLACE NOW MOMMY!

    *witches can be seen upon Brian's brow*
    An I shall Send Ron's Dad into a HAPPY PLACE now to
    *Laughs in a lost sick kind of way*

    HAPPY HAPPY JOY JOY I'M GUNNA KILL RON'S FATHERS ARROGANCE LOOK MAAA NO HANDS!



    *Breathes deeply*

    Sorry I am just a TAD emotional Forgive me ok?

    a good well thought out chapter. as you can guess I am NOT liking Ron's dad at the moment
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  • From ANON - Ryan on September 25, 2005
    Oh hell no. He did NOT just do that. After that I wouldn't even let Ron go back home, parents or not, that is NO way to treat the situation. Hopefully Mrs. Stoppable will be more rational.
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  • From ANON - P.C. on September 25, 2005
    Sad chapter...I thought Kim's conversation with her parents wasn't very emotional. I think you should've put a little more detail in her conversation.
    I like how you made Ron's parents(or his father) unemotional towards his rape. It makes it more angsty for future chapters.
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  • From ANON - Arin on September 24, 2005
    WOW. Just, WOW. This is an absolutely awesome story that held me transfixed. Fantastic, please continue it soon.
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  • From ANON - L-sama on September 13, 2005
    Sorry ot took so long to reviwew!

    Loved this chapter!

    The way you write Drakken and Shego is very, very good.

    Please, keep it up!


    Oh - and btw, I just have one small question... is this going to be a M/F fic, or a M/M, F/F fic? Either works, just curious! lol!
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  • From ANON - Cynthia Krenshaw on August 30, 2005
    I was a victim of a violent rape at age 14. Rape stories aren't generally my fortee, but this one is an exception. You're addressing alot of issues that not many people touch, and you're doing an excellent job of it. I am intrested to see how much of the aftermath you deal with. This is a very well written story with a good plot and very realistic reactions. Definatly a story for survivors, so far. Can't wait to read more.


    CK

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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 25, 2005
    update soon, i wanna know what happens next
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  • From ANON - Emi on July 20, 2005
    I ment WOW as in "Wow that was so good i don't have nething 2 say." Keep going! can u e-mail me when you update? horselover1313@cox.net Thanks! ^^ (This chapter was really good 2- i loved how u made D and Shego meet)
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  • From ANON - Lady Jolly on July 09, 2005
    I've read this story so far and I can't exactly say I like it but they way you write it. You've done a great job. I just have such a hatred towards rape and the thing they just did to Ron I....this makes me wonder why people do this but I know the answer just can't help to keep asking it. I'm glad that there is someone there for Kim and Ron and I never really thought Shego and Drakken as such villians and please do write more and update more. I'd love to read more though I do hope the rapist get rightly served justice.

    Lady Jolly
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  • From ANON - Midnight on July 05, 2005
    :D I was frequently checking back, then I lost computer access for a while...still, glad to see you'd posted two more chapters since my last visit. Great work as usual.
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 10, 2005
    Nice chapter! I like how you wrote the way Shego and Drakken met.o^_^o It was sad of course, but I like that Drakken came to her rescue...even though she didn't need it.
    I can't wait to see what happens to Kim and Ron in the next chapter!
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