Reviews for Avatar Kink FicsBy : IconicPants |
Great set of fics.
1) Sakka was interesting - both female but still the same character.
2) Teaching Mai deep throat was hot and I would love to see the session where she's introduced to anal. Given her proclivities for pain, I think that would be especially fun all around.
3) It was a nice view into the trio travelling together - and especially loved Ty Lee's new pressure point in the 3rd one. It'd be interesting to see a follow up with a) a nice acting Azula (to Ty Lee, at least) who is increasingly confused and frustrated about it, and b) maybe Ty Lee overusing the new trick and suffering consequences in the end?
4) The submissive side of Suki was a surprise - especially her lack of self confidence and the denigratory self talk. Yue's presence was fun and I love that Sokka finally gets to consummate his love with her and the new moon aspect was a great way for her to visit him. I especially appreciated that it's all fun and play during, but that Yue took care to bring Suki back to equilibrium after. A half Sokka demi-god is just a crazy thought.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Will we see a continuation of this story involving Mai getting fucked in the ass, oh and she see's herself getting fucked in a full nelson with a standing full body mirror before making a fucked silly look, (eyes rolled up mouth open and tongue out) especially caused by Zuko adding humiliation from telling her how much of a slut Mai looks like and when the three hand maidens come back to replace the rug Zuko ordered her to tell the three how much she loves being his human cocksleeve and mean it with her heart, Mai barely does in between moans and wearing the fucked silly look then the two cum at the same time but not before Mai humiliates herself again by begging for permission to cum. After that she is mentally knocked out from the pleasure but Zuko can keep using her body making Mai physically continue to moan but is unaware Zuko continues to use her body exactly like a cocksleeve making the three maidens hope their boyfriends use them like that when seeing them later or they don't have boyfriends but want to be used like Mai by Zuko and I have an idea for that foursome while Mai is still in fucked silly face and mentally unconscious state but that can be in another chapter after this one
I'd think it would be interesting to see Azula as a futa cuckqueen who likes to watch her girlfriends Ty Lee and Toph getting fucked
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