Reviews for RashōmonsterBy : GeorgeGlass |
Enjoyable - would love to see the repercussions that devolve out of it.
Would Wasabi and Gogo see each other in a new light?
Would Hiro's monster seed take root in Karmi?
Hmmm....?
Thanks for writing and sharing!
The story feels trippy but in a sexily great way
That was an amazing finale. I love Karmi being such a little slut, it really doesn't feel like an exageration of how hard she crushed on Hiro in the show. Also, I actually really empathized with Karmi about not being able to turn off her brain and just be in the moment and felt glad for her when she did.
Also, big dick surprise anal? Yes please. The only thing missing was some good ol' cumflation. Bit of a shame that this is the final chapter. The plugging her holes bit got me thinking about Karmi having a Hiro surprise nine months later. Great story GG, loved every bit of it.
I'm guessing chapter 3 is going to be everyone involved in the story getting their grove on. Looking forward to reading it.
Looking back at chapter 1, is Fred's mother really going to bed, or more likely going to have sex with Mr. Heathcliff?
Go Hiro, rock Karmi's world. Great job so far by the way.
Yeah boy, second chapter! Finally we get the deets on what went down in the lab! I'm surprised there wasn't more physical evidence of Wasabeast, ie a massive pool of cum after he and Go Go got done, though perhaps Karmi took a sample and that's what she wants to talk to Captain Cutie about. Absolutely loved how you used Honey Lemon for the humor of this chapter while perfectly maintaining her character. I tell you though, what I wouldn't give for a chapter of those two mastubating side by side. I'm really looking forward to see where the story goes from here.
So if everyone lied to Professor Granville, I wonder what really happened in the lab? Whatever happened, I'm sure it's as spicy as Karmi's fantasy and masturbation session going on next door.
I've been looking forward to reading this since I saw you mention it. The scene with Karmi was a nice surprise as well as the potential inclusion of a Wasabeast, but I have suspicions that may be part of the lies being told. Everyone feels wonderfully incharacter and I am amused that Karmi's smut is only marginally better than her regular fanfiction. Can't wait to read more!
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