Reviews for Mabel Movie MadnessBy : Jayrich |
damn these little creeps just don't know when to quit.
I recently read this again, and I have a couple more comments:
--If Wendy is at college, then this story takes place sometime in the future, but it isn't clear how far in the future. How old are the other characters? More to the point, what is Pacifica's body like now that puberty has hit? These are the important details. :)
--Also, I liked "take matters into her own thighs," and that Pacifica doesn't know what an ice pack is.
*blinks and looks at drink*
Nice bit of unexpected hotness between Dipper and Pacifica, made hotter by the fact that they did it with Mabel in the room. Are more chapters in the works?
reaaaaaaally hoping Franz won't get what he wanted
this will be intresting!
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