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By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ANON - ANON on May 06, 2021

    Intriguingly, I hope the story of Mildew/Astrid will not end, but I want more.


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  • From ANON - ANON on May 05, 2021

    Oh, I want more from Mildew/Astrid. Keep up the good work!


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  • From migahiru on May 05, 2021

    The magnificent 10 chapter. I have been reading your story for a long time and I really hope that it will not end.

    I had an idea what if Mildew cast a spell on Astrid's Loki stone again the next night. But this time, the hypnotized Lars will also play a role in the end, seeing his daughter copulating with Mildew and Lars as a cheerful utterance:

    "Astrid, dear! I'm proud of you!”  Or something like that

    Naturally, Lars was under the influence and his thoughts were controlled by Mildew. Astrid by this time already gets an orgasm from fucking with an old man and enjoyed it. Also, the mind of the real Astrid fades in favor of her second part-a whore. And all the more so because she no longer remembers Hiccup, but wants more oral sex and attention from her rapist.

     


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  • From ANON - on April 29, 2021

    Loved the new chapter!


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  • From ninesenshi on April 24, 2021

    Chap10, very hot, good anal. Hope to read more soon. Maybe he should fuck her dragon also, since Astrid and her are so close. Could be a good bonding experience. I hope you are feeling better.

    PS I hope this ends with Astrid firmly owned by Mildew.  No `rescue' nonsense


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  • From ANON - on April 23, 2021

    Another great chapter, and you finally put in an anal scene, nice. Keep up the good work. 
     

    Maybe you should put in a scene where Astrid has sex with Hiccup, and when she has sex with Mildew again, she realizes she gets more satisfied with mildew. So mildew can use that fact to his advantage to break her.

    it would be better if the dream was real, where Astrid and Hiccup are married and Astrid cheats on him with Mildew, to satisfy her needs that Hiccup can't. But Astrid would have Hiccup's children. She only uses Mildew to relieve her itch.


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  • From ANON - on April 22, 2021

    really enjoyed chp 9. Hope for more to come 


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  • From ANON - on March 31, 2021

    Cant wait for the next update!


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  • From ANON - Adonisaquarian on March 29, 2021

    Hey Merlin.. Any chance of an update for Wrong Night Wrong Man your Castle story ?

    really loved that fic. 


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  • From ninesenshi on March 18, 2021

    Chap9, good chap, enjoyable.  Hopefully we'll read a lot more of Astrid being fucked, eventually in the butt as well.  Maybe that will break her.

    Most of the words speak of too much plot, but hopefully it will be sexy. I'd like her to get knocked up and read some preggo sex. Dragon sex would also be fun.  Hope to read more soon.


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  • From ANON - on March 15, 2021

    FINALLY lol


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  • From ANON - on March 13, 2021

    Talk about keeping us in suspense. Been waiting for a new chapter after the last. But after a while, you came up with an amazing chapter. And this time, you write about Astrid losing her virginity to Mildew. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter, and very curious about what the hints will come about in the story. 

    Side question: how long are they going to have sex, because in the chapter, you put something about a "Hofferson Quest", how many days is Mildew going to break in Astrid before they return to Berk? Because it would be very interesting if Astrid's mind broke after a few sessions and she can only think about getting pleasure from only Mildew, even after getting married to Hiccup. 


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  • From ANON - on March 10, 2021

    Really diggin the last two chapters. can't wait for more to come


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  • From ninesenshi on March 04, 2021

    Chap8, good to see another part.  Maybe he can fuck the dragon also, that should mess with Astrid.  Looking forward to more


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  • From ANON - Shado on February 28, 2021

    Very good chapter i'm very excited to see where astrid and mildew are going? 


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