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Reviews for Undertow

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - Iya on December 25, 2011
    UPDATE PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - Me...who else on October 22, 2010
    Update now please!!! This is great!
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  • From ANON - Rayna on October 14, 2010
    I love it! Full of angst, angst, and angst! Can't wait to see how Zuko proves to Katara he knows about love and seducing.
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  • From Harbor on October 09, 2010
    What a awesome story so far. I am waiting for more. I do not know how you can stand it not updating immediately! This is awesome
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  • From ANON - Coreena on October 07, 2010
    Definately continue this. The thought of Zuko and Katara alone on an island with stife and love between them just makes me giddy with anticipation. Excellent work so far. ~Coreena~
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  • From AdamIam on October 06, 2010
    I enjoyed ever word of this. I love the way these two play off each other. I feelt he way you write and I think it is marvelous. I am so glad that you have returned to writing and I hope you update soon. This is going to be an awesome story.
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on October 04, 2010
    This is going to be sooooo GOOD. I love it already!! I love the way they play off each other's pain just becasue they can't admit feelings. GReat chapter Keep them coming
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  • From Summersand on October 04, 2010
    This is excellent. this is strong and wonderful writing. I just love how these interact under your direction. You have a definate flair that I just love! I will be looking for more chapters in the near weeks.
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  • From ANON - Ky on October 04, 2010
    Loving this !!

    Awesome writing, I have a new addiction in the Avatar fandom. I love the premise. I do not think I have ever read a story where Katara has done something as this. I love how they argue and can't wait until they let down the defenses.This story is fanstatic!
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  • From ANON - Ky on October 02, 2010
    Loving this so far.
    Katara as a runaway almost bride and she ends up at the one island with Zuko.Priceless. Excellent work please continue
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  • From Granite on October 01, 2010
    To read your marvelous work again makes me shiver with excitement at your return to us. I actually think more about your work than mine and that sometimes causes writer's block but I do not care. I love your stuff.

    I agree with FAB and her take on the Blue Lagoon getaway only with the Avatar looming. I do not know how she will react seeing that out of all the islands on the ocean she ends up at the one Zuko has claimed. AWESOME! What will aang do if he finds them because you know he is going to look. Willhe do something un Avatar- like.The possibilities are endless here. I can hardly wait for you next installment.
    I love your work!

    P.S. I see your editing your stories. Should we expect updates? I am watching and waiting. Stone2fire
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on October 01, 2010
    Excellent!.

    Please continue this I can already see and feel the greatness it has. I Love the premise and the writing.
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  • From RedWine on September 30, 2010
    Reely well done! I am having thoughts of the Blue Lagoon type and I am loving it. I want to read more of this. You are a terrific writer. FAB
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  • From Whiteneko16 on September 30, 2010
    Very very good. I would really like to read more. The plot line you're setting up will most deffenatly be an interesting one. I can't wait to see in which direction you take it. Update soon please. ^.^.
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