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Reviews for Ben Tan

By : Clayton
  • From ANON - Jaimas on May 17, 2016
    I feel...a tad cheated. But you do have a point. Only complaint I got is that you need to space out your lines, the words kinda blend into each other.
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  • From ANON - NotSoWrong on May 06, 2014
    You need to watch the episode "Camp Fear" again. The birthday they are arguing about is six months away. Thus, it can't happen during the official 'one summer' of the original series.
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  • From ANON - Bone Darth on April 04, 2010
    This was great.

    ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
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  • From ANON - Dennison Edwards on March 25, 2009
    That was best story I ever read.Grandpa Max taking Ben and Gwen to a nude beach to fun in a hotter summer day,Gwen was so embarissing being with her cousin and grandpa totally naked on the beach and going skinny dipping or swimming at beach shore but she got over it for a while and she really having fun Ben and Grandpa Max. Besides I never been to a nude beach myself but I love to go there one day this summer that'll be cool.
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  • From PhoenixAscendant on February 27, 2009
    You said that you were evil for not putting sex into this story. I think that it was perfectly fine without it. In fact, with how young they are, they would not be seriously considering sex at all, so for how far things progressed between the two of them, I think that this is a very well written piece if literature, and a cute story all around. Well done.

    PA
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  • From ANON - moviebuff on June 25, 2008
    this was really good fic you talnet
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  • From ANON - Sven Dular on May 01, 2008
    Very good! Very good indeed! I would love to see more Ben 10 fics from you.
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  • From Bishonen on April 23, 2008
    You are truly a lord of evil and i have sent my army of Samurai Flesh Eating Pandas to slay you and prevent you from enacting any other crimes against the pervert nation but aside from that this was a great story very well written cute and romantic it seemed like they really had a relationship. But damn it that ending was so unfair

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Jarkota on April 14, 2008
    Not bad. Not bad at all. Gives voice to the tension we all seem to see between Ben and Gwen without going into pornographic detail. No sex here, but at least THIS fic didn't involve horses (those who've read some of Clayton's KP works know what I'm talking about). :p
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  • From ANON - Thomas on April 14, 2008
    evil evil writer lol i so wanted to see more than a kiss outta that lol
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  • From ANON - Pyramid-kun on April 10, 2008
    I have to say, this is written excellently for an adult fanfic...not like a lot I've seen in this section that jumps straight to the sex. You have very good writing skills...no grammatical errors whatsoever, and the characters aren't out of character. In fact, this looks like a regular Ben 10 episode( with a hint of naughtiness). Kudos to you, my friend, this is what adult fanfiction is all about! A balance of Plot, character, and sex. I really do hope you take your time writing this excellent piece...I support you all the way to the finish!

    Oh yes, almost forgot...You really are evil...leaving me sexually frustrated... ~_~;
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  • From Mirrorhanyou on April 07, 2008
    wow I love this story, it really captures their characters. If you can I'd definately suggest continuing it.

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  • From GhostwriterMO on April 06, 2008
    Pretty good build up I like it. Since Ben 10 alien force is set 5 years in the future that would make them 16 right? Until the mean time they can at least sneak around behind their families back and kiss and cuddle. So it would be a little cute. I wonder how Gwen would kiss and hug Ben in some of his alien forms? Keep up the great work.
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  • From skeeve on April 04, 2008
    Excellent Story! This story is well written and entertaining, and yes the ending did catch me by surprise. I hope you do more stories, even a continuation of this one, (it doesn't need to be pornographic). Good Luck with your future endeavors.
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  • From ANON - ntfoemy on April 04, 2008
    I have to say this wasn't half bad. I liked how you didn't go straight to Ben and Gwen having sex. like you said they are too young. Although I thought that they still were 10. Gwen was planning her birthday like three months ahead of time. You managed to keep it level without going overboard with their thoughts. I liked it, and good job
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