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By : CordeliaLeCroix

From InsomniacOwl on January 30, 2018
Aaaaaah! You updated and finished it! I'm so happy you did! This is one of the best A:tLA fics on the internet, and I was worried that it was abandoned. I really appreciate you coming forward and finishing it, and while I'm saddened by some of the developments, I'm still left with a very strong and satisfied feeling of reading a really good fic.
I don't know if you'll even see this, but I hope any future works you set out to do are successful. I feel that OT3s are rarely done with the level of consideration for each member's feelings that you have put into this fic, and that your talents will go on to other excellent works.

I wish you the best of luck, and thank you for a thoroughly engaging and excellently told tale of a triumvirate that worked hard to make things work out.

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From ANON - Douglas on April 22, 2016
So, AtLA these last ten odd years has filled a void in Many different peoples scattered around the world... a void we were not really aware of, or of How this or that thread, like Nuclear fission, touched someone, stirred them, and they in turn created another thread of visions and sounds and sensations... GODS! As I write this there are many stories here on AFF.org, both words and And images across www.deviantart.com/ , Yahoogroups and shippers, and over Forty THOUSAND stories on FF.net Alone!!!
I'm on a few groups, of which none are connected to AtLA. Sure, I've been coming here (AFF) some 16 Years to read fanfics {BtVS/AtS, Stargate(s), some StarTrek, and other doodads}, but you all know the saying; 'Out of sight, Out of Mind'. I caught a couple eps out of order from S1, followed consistently S2, and comsumed S3!... and then came Korra!!! Opps, I digress. It wasn't til 2009 or 10 I realized `heeey, Avatar Fanfic??` One of the ones I made a note of Remembering I made a comment about it was "Toph always Tops", and others after going back and looking stuff over. Azula/Katara, Azula/TyLee, Katara/Toph, Zuko/Katara, Zuko,Toph, its either Straight or something FF for me. Fine, there are exceptions to that `straight` thing... if its handled right. DAMN, NO Pun Intended, as I just realized What I wrote! haahhahahahahaha.
Your "The Siege of Katara". I don't know why its only now I'm reading it, but I am. And even now, I misspeak.
I started this on Wednesday evening? and would make it through a couple chps before finding myself drifting. Of course, I suffer a case of the sniffles on my days off. Thursday was maybe 3 hours and change and I made it to 4, a nap, then to 5, a hot shower to clear my head, and then on to getting stuff done for the day, in addition to trying to read more. Oh, and we lost "Prince" yesterday??!!?!. In the evening I called in sick for Friday. I was feeling better this morning so went through 8 and 9, and saw your first line for 10, and the following paragraph, and just stopped. Had to. I backed out enough to read the `reviews`, well, some of them. Had to be careful of spoilers, and opps, wait, went back to the Titles page and Read the last note for this, these 18 chps. W I P. Shit. Ah, but reread this one review right now.
And Now is when You all might realize 'He hasn't even finished the story yet, but he's posting a review?'
Yes. I am. This morning I reread 7, read 8, read 9, hit 10... And now realize its been FIVE years since anything else?? All that came before is just setup, preamble.
First, the bad. No, its all little bads: a few mistakes in grammar or spelling, maybe using a different word here or there to draw the image, or italic'd to convey inflection... nothing having a second -beta to edit it further... Man, it sounds like I'm giving a Lot of grief, but here is the punchline.

After all is said and done... I'm Still going to read 10 - 18. And, maybe, I'll put something else down then, too. But right now, I have to say this. We all know the characters, and we know All the characters. The sex in some parts is right fine (1 & 2).... in others (8 & 9) its goooooood. But... The words exchanged between Mai and Katara in 3. What did Katara do to Azula in 4? Zuko and Azula... draw their lines in 6. How they rescued Katara in 7. There are others. How You use these characters in Your story? The ebb and pull of our wants, as compared to our Needs, whats really inside everyone, Once we let someone Else inside ourself, or we give of ourself. When we give our submission. Not when its taken. There is a part of one, it fits with another. It is asked for, and given. It is offered... and it is claimed and protected. Cherished, like nothing else. HOW you portray your characters, how they connect to each other, no, how your Katara and Mai and Zuko connect to each other, irregardless of minor faults, CAN be Awarded one simple word.
` Quality `.

Thank you very much for your words and your efforts to bring an image to life. Hows that for a review?
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From dgr92 on February 14, 2016
I am hoping there will soon be more! I can't wait for Mai, Katara and Zuko to reunite. I also am looking forward to seeing the girls travel on their own for a bit before finally reuniting with him.
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From ANON - LittleKitten on October 21, 2015
Oh my god, I love this fan fiction so so much. There really isn't a lot of well written avatar fanfics out there and this one has got to be one of my favorites.
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From Beelz on May 21, 2014
Blargh this stories actually pretty good, I really like it but I just don't know about that scene at the end of chapter 13. I know its one of the most iconic moments from the show and it really stands out and thats why you put i in, but it just feels so forced. Honestly looking at the story, hell even the previous sections of the same chapter it just seems so forced.
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From ANON - Insomniac Owl on January 03, 2013
As it's been over 2 years since you last updated, and what with Legend of Korra's first season having aired, I'm afraid that this may be as much as we're getting from your brilliant fic. I hope this isn't the case, as you spun a great tale of Zuko, Mai and Katara, and added your own touches to make the characters, story and situation interesting and addictive. Back when this fic was still being updated, I eagerly looked forward to updates, as it's a great read and one of the best Avatar: The Last Airbender fics on the site.

I hope that you'll one day update this again, but as it stands, it's still 18 excellent chapters of a threesome that made things both difficult and work for our beloved cast. Thanks for the brilliant fic, and keep writing!
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From Hildebrant on October 09, 2011
Great stuff. I wish there was an option to alert me of when the next chapter will be updated because this story has just that on top of the sex. A Story. I love how you've rewritten the characters and the plot to make this all the more believable. keep it up and please update soon
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From Scorpinac on September 27, 2010
Nice to see those two coming back together, and that Zuko now knows his mother's been located, and that Ursa is approving of the somewhat complicated relationship. And Aang's moved on to On'Ji, huh? Okay, though he may want to work on keeping her attention away from the Fire Lord, just saying. Well, until chapter 19, then. Laters.
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From Scorpinac on September 13, 2010
And you're back! And Katara didn't lose her baby, hurray! What happened to Azula's, on the other hand...chills, just chills... Well done! Nice touch that some of the Fire Nation doesn't want to give up the war, it'll be interesting to see how that pans out. Must admit I'm rather curious as to why Katara's reluctant to return to the capital, though. Well, until chapter 18, then. Laters.
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From kimpo212 on July 07, 2010
OMG! PLEASE I NEED MORE, this is the best story I've read- I am so hooked, thrilled, turned on, and anxious to read what happens next. My favorite parts were the threesomes and twosomes with Zutara ^_^. Put in a very classy, and sophisticated way, your my favorite author.
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From Scorpinac on March 08, 2010
And it seems I was right, you do have much more story to tell us beyond the end of the series. I do hope Katara didn't loose the baby, that'd be so sad... And I'm surprised Azula was able to move as easily as she did, or sense she can't have dropped hers yet, can she? I'm pretty sure she had a few months to go, too. All that said, nice work, and I look forward, if a little trepidatiously, to your Book 4! Until then. Laters.
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From Somatose on March 06, 2010
An interesting plotline and an easy read. Keep up the hard work!
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From Scorpinac on March 06, 2010
Well, I suppose that is one way for Hakoda to find out, at least he's taking it well. I am getting worried about Mai and Ty Lee, though. And the four episode finale is up next, it'll be interesting to see what you do with that, and somehow I don't think you're going to end there, are you? Well, until chapter 15, then. Laters.
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From Scorpinac on March 02, 2010
Well, it just keeps getting more and more interesting, doesn't it. I can't wait to see how Ty Lee and Mai escape being pit slaves(I'm actually subtly reminded of the first twenty to thirty minutes of Conan The Barbarian). And just what in hell did Azula do to Hama? I mean, I had no great love for the old woman, but still! And I like the small change with the Southern Raiders switching sides. And it's nice the rest of the gang know about Zuko and Katara, now, but I must profess to still looking forward to Hakoda's reaction when he finds out! Hehehehe... Well, until chapter 15/episodes 17-?. Laters.
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From Scorpinac on February 22, 2010
Well, that went about as well as expected, except she forgot to tell him he's gonna be a daddy. I look forward to that moment. And I believe that On Ji is the same age as Aang, so she should have said twelve or thirteen years, not fourteen. Just saying. Well, until chapter 14 and episodes 13-15, then. Laters.
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