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Reviews for Playmates

By : beeftony
  • From KakerotBardockson on July 15, 2017

    I love this story and hope you update it soon. BTW could you have Ron spank Shego at some point, depending on how you go with it it could be hot or funny as hell


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  • From NarutosBrat on June 06, 2015
    While I'm not going to argue that Robin is probably a much better fighter than Ron, it still bothers me that you make it seem like he's totally useless, despite the fact that he did step up during the invasion (and plenty of times when Monkey Fist, and Yamanouchi was involved), and Shego saw it happen. Or are you disregarding the end of the series completely?

    Seriously, you'd think they'd remember his name after saving the world, right? Hell, you'd think Kim, of all people, might say something about it. He is her 'best friend' after all.
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  • From NarutosBrat on June 06, 2015
    This is definitely nitpicking, and in no way really detracts from your story being enjoyable, but it's kind of like a nagging itch to some people who've had to study stuff like this for one reason or another. Just a hysterectomy isn't going to do squat for Ovarian cancer. If the cancer is in the ovaries, then just removing the uterus isn't really fixing the problem. Even if done together, oophorectomy (removal of ovaries) and hysterectomy (removal of uterus) are still considered two different procedures. I apologize if this part of my review annoys you, but not saying something felt like being repeatedly poked in the head by someone's finger.

    Umm, maybe it was just me, but the mention of Ron's nose turning brown kind of ruined the moment when I was reading it. Even if it was just a euphemism, or innuendo, I actually had to skip to the dialogue afterwards, because I just couldn't read that oral part anymore.

    By the way, if you feel the need to respond to either this, or my other review, I'm on ffDOTnet, same username.
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  • From NarutosBrat on May 12, 2010
    “I don’t think the Naco is my favorite food anymore,”- This is easily my favorite line in this story so far.

    “See what happens when you take a chance?”- I'm thinking that this sums up the whole of this story quite nicely.
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  • From Zarrthtion on November 14, 2009
    plz you gotta write more this story is very nice in the way of RonGo and i love any good KP fic
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  • From Zachariah on February 09, 2009
    I hope you make more. The chemistry between the two of them is interesting which is very difficult to pull off. I just hope the shego character stays in charge. Keep writing and reading.
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  • From bigherb81 on October 28, 2007
    Diggin the story so far my friend I do like the fact that you did decide to keep Shego in her usual bitchy and angry character. Love changes you but it doesn't make you a pussy. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters
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  • From kenjiro on October 25, 2007
    Hell Yeah, that is way to cool.
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  • From flyer23 on October 23, 2007
    I don't care what shego say,there slow starting a relationship.And i can wait to see kim reaction from all this when she out.I see anger,yelling,jelloing and a big throw down with her and shego.But then again they choice to end there relationship together that's what he keep telling himself.
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  • From skeeve on October 01, 2007
    I loved the banter between the two lovers. It is something both of them do naturally in the show, but to see it in this context is great! I cant wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From rcwilliams on September 28, 2007
    Great story so far.. hoping to see more.
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  • From bigherb81 on September 27, 2007
    Great story like how it's shaping up so far and I can't wait to see where you decide to go with it. As far as takin to the whole consequence and out of fantasy I just have to say "I don't know darkened your soul, but may god have mercy on it." Will Ferrel Good Cop Baby Cop. To each his own though I'd like to see what you have planned. Surprise me.
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  • From zafer on September 27, 2007
    Keep up the great work.
    Looking forward to more of your PWP (porn WITH plot)

    *chuckles to self*
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  • From skeeve on September 26, 2007
    Great story so far. I love the relationship your building between the two characters, and can see all sorts of mayhem happening. Youre writing style is very good and I like the way I can so easily visualize the action. Some authors dont seem to have this ability. I eagerly look forward to seeing where you take this.
    Skeeve
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  • From zardoz76 on September 24, 2007
    Ejoying the story very much. Hope you can still continue.
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