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By : Kellendros

From ANON - Raven6 on September 05, 2007
i just recently discovered this story and i was pleasently suprised by it. i am not quite sure where you are going with this story but so far i have enjoyed the build up. it has a certain level of believablity to it the i think gives it an extra oomph. can't wait to see the "date' that kim has coming up.
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From SupaNerd on September 05, 2007
The nerd says an excellent chapter all around. Now to the questions, Drakken escaping from prision with a Shego-esqe level of competintcy? WTF! Is he a plant, a fake villian sent in to train Kim, or am I talking/thinking out of my ass? And nice touch with Jounior talking for hair care products, le goop anyone I know, if I remember a refrence mentioned afew times in one episode, I'm a nerd. And lockin' the bedroom door, gonna have to if you're gonna wake up "moist" and you want to avoid unpleasent and awkward conversations. The part about Corscan anticipating her needs (food, water and what not), well I'd say seems like a setup, but then we already know that, but damn it a set up to what, besides the obvious HLS. Any clues Lord K? And now she fells no anger or outrage while thinking about the "setup" (the fight) and a small part of her admits that she likes Corscan (progress) but the larger part want to slap her silly, very well done. Major DENIAL, at least untill the end of the chapter. The dream and her overactive imagination, with a mention of Shego in there, nice. And although Kim did't get alot of sleep it seems as if her lethargy is more due to the lack of 'food', or is it the water or lack there of? Don't let them steal her bodily fluids! And not telling Mo or Ron, ok she eventually tells Mo but what happens when Ron finds out and about how long she kept it from him? Hope he's understanding. But what I'm waiting for is the 'super breakdown', not just the single tear before she goes to sleep after waking up with her hand in her pants, or 'nearly' crying in the locker room showers, I'm talking about a throwing things through windows scream a thon. And I think it's gonna happen after Corscan has her 'day' with Kim. And why doesn't Kim picture Monique in her 'dream ladies' montage? Oooo, and nice touch with the Mrs Dr P not home cause at work thing, and isn't Kim just a great daughter? And why did she owe the tweebs one? Using the internet and what I presume is most likely a check list to see if shes gay? So Kim!

Lord Kellendros, please please oh for their protection of our bodily fluids, release the nex chapter soon, like Thursday soon. Please. Also, story rules, you rock, keep it up. YEAH! Peace Out.
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From ANON - Cyraxr on September 05, 2007
Ha Ha Ha Ha. I love the ending of this chapter that was truly funny. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Shego.
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From mouserr on September 05, 2007
scenes domestic ... you know the only thing that i found surprising was that Kim was the only one doing anything housework wise ... i mean the tweebs, while somewhat insane and energetic, are capable of pushing a vacuum or gathering up laundry if not actually doing the laundry (wouldn't trust them with any chemical not even detergent lol ) still it was a very nice peek inside casa Possible and seeing how things went.

also really liked that you put Ann's work into a more proper perspective ... top quality surgeons of any profession lead pretty harsh lives but when dealing with the brain/nervous system surgeries tend to be excruciating and that is rarely touched on, not is the impact such operations have on the family life especially when both parents have jobs with long shifts or differing schedules (both Dr.s could find themselves on erratic schedules considering that space programs sometimes have to meet critical deadlines and some launch windows come at odd periods) you've actually made a believably dynamic family out of them in this

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From immortal7 on September 05, 2007
thedepression was handled nicely.the stronger the denial the stronger the attraction. At least that how it iw with me. i noticed in all the catloging of pretty girls in the school she never noticed Mon or maybe i jsut missed it. the Tweebs will have a field day if they find her internet history and such and such. and finally a nice way to end it. The search and the gradual starting of acceptance on the host enity that is Kim possible seem to be actually normal for the abnormal teen can't wait for more on the change and how Drakken fits in to this. now i know you said this wasn't a kigo story just had Kigo in it but will that be after the Mon talk and confession or before because i stil think they make a cute couple and scratch earlier thought about Drakken this is before so the Drama so that means he must be starting the diablo incident if you handle the continualty sighltyly the same. Just had a nice thought of Shego taking Kim to her Prom. any way i can't wait to see Corscan next apperence. is she just a woman of lust or a looker of love? Sorry about the babbling i think i had to much soda tonight. post soon later
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From PureEvilOne on September 05, 2007
Another wonderful update. Nice to see the teen inside the hero and her relationship with her family. Loved the way she is handling ctisis. Her denial phase was well executed. I look forwardto see how she handles acceptance.
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From ANON - battlestar on September 05, 2007
A semi-normal day in the life of. Doing chores, homework, help your mom out, trying to discover more about yourself. It's the little stuff in life that can make it so intresting, would you say.

Can't wait for your next chapter.
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From ANON - Cyraxr on September 04, 2007
Hmm interesting how did Drakken get himself out of jail? Update soon please. Signed a fan of Shego.
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From ANON - thoughts13 on September 03, 2007
Hey, I'm glad I decided to follow this. Shego will show up soon, I'm guessing. Can't wait. Keep up the good work/.
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From mouserr on September 02, 2007
springing leaks in more ways than 1 going off the start of the chapter ... nagging thoughts get to her all day driving her batty then what does she find at home? something else to send her loopy ... loving the way you've portrayed the family life at Casa Possible so far ... nice details on how the household functions and the more realistic portrayal of Mrs. P is a great touch

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From immortal7 on September 02, 2007
first thing first the alert worked. now on to the mess that is Kim possible.i see that one little kiss opened pandoras box. i wonder how long until she starts forgeting where she is when she admires the beauty of other woman around her. and on that note i alwasys thoguht gays were blessed and cursed they can have shower time with the objects of their desires and i can't oh well. Also I wonder how long till Kim relises that it was her slight adrenaline rushes that never let her realise she liked woman alot longer than just recently. the subconsious a beautiful thing. moving on the crate of water caused a great reaction. what else oh i know it has to be said. it good to see that denial is not just a river in egypt but also a small stream in Kim possibles head.She should listen to her own motto better she can do anything even be a lesbian. well thats my ramblign and two cents post soon alter.
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From SupaNerd on September 01, 2007
Ahhh, Kim is awakening to a whole new world of possiblities. Heh heh, sorry, I couldn't help my self! I hope we soon get to see how Kim handels accepting that she likes the ladies and I do wonder what her fear (as shown by the "instant turnoff" {IMO} when she pictured Corscan while "showering") is based on; fear of being any more 'different' than she already is, or a subconsious fear of what her parents or friends would think? I hope we find out soon! And Kims anger at Corscans 'presumption', it makes me ponnder at what Kims going to say when she finnaly admits how she feels, "how could I not see it?". Oh and the shower scene, awesome, truly awesome, kinda makes you wonder why Kims so blind. And Drakken escaping on his own, (insert dramatic sound effect here), a future plot thread me thinks, or is this just me looking for things that arn't there, again? And the WATER, oh the water, are those Russians trying to steal our preciuos bodily fluids? Or is it just Corscan? Now, as always, this chapter ROCKS! I hope we (your fans) get the next one soon, please. And as always Lord Kellendros, continue to entertain and delight us with your words of wonder! LATER GATOR!
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From PureEvilOne on September 01, 2007
A day in the life a teen heroine who is questioning sexuality. Well handled. Nice to see how her mind works. Are you goig to be referenciing specific episodes of the show?
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From ANON - Cyraxr on September 01, 2007
Wow another wonderful chapter in the books. Signed a fan of Shego.
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From mouserr on August 31, 2007
and now for the mindfuck ... Kim knows what Corscan wants and while her body and a quiet serene part of her brain knows and is in agreement the rest of her is mighty pissed ... doubtful itll get any better over the course of the next few days as its likely to fester and annoy the hell outta her till she snaps one way or the other ... internal debate over honoring her word or breaking the deal because its unsavory, in her opinion, i would recommend if at all possible stay the hell outta her way until its settled or she might break you

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