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By : Kellendros
  • From ANON - me on November 25, 2007
    Oh snap! I knew Shego knew about [The Way]....I srsly can't wait to see how the next one goes!!!!
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  • From ANON - Josh84 on November 25, 2007
    For awhile there, I thought that the Kigo was going to finally begin, but alas, that's been put on hold - again. I was a little surprised when it was Shego that stopped it, but after she explained a little about her past, it actually made sense.

    Now Shego says it's time to pay a visit to Corscan. Hmm-hmm. I anxious to see how that goes, especially when Kim learns that it won't be the first time Shego and Corscan have met. I'm also looking forward to what Shego knows of - (all italicized)[The Way].

    Good job. Awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From beeftony on November 23, 2007
    Meant to review this earlier, but real life got in the way. Since most of the stuff has already been said I'll just focus on the things that haven't been mentioned.

    For instance, I found it quite hilarious and also incredibly fitting that Shego would fully indulge in her fantasies about Kim rather than try to deny them, perhaps in the interest of working them out of her system so she doesn't have to deal with them anymore. Shego is a very emotional creature, and she always vents her frustrations rather than letting them bottle up inside her. Again, very in-character.

    As a corrolary to that, I couldn't help laughing out loud when you revealed the true reason she's so distraught over these feelings: they aren't just her typical shallow fantasies. Instead, she's falling in love. That passage perfectly mirrors everything Corscan described love as being in Chapter 22. Or at least the first inklings of what could likely grow into love. And even though Shego wasn't a part of that conversation, she knows what's happening and it totally devastates her because she realizes that this is one problem she can't run away from, because it will continue to haunt her until she deals with it.

    Again, great chapter and I can't wait for the next. Enough with the solo scenes! Give us more KiGo already! :D
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  • From ANON - me on November 21, 2007
    Wow! That was pretty intense, my favourite part was when she dried off using her powers. Not to say I didn't enjoy all the other stuff and the epiphany at the end...just I want to be able to dry off without a towel!
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 21, 2007
    Okay. Now that we've seen both Shego and Kim deal with this new found revelation (of destiny, perhaps?) on their own.... how or more importantly WHEN will they deal with it together? Hmm?

    This chapter was very intense and I found it funny that Shego thought there might be something medically wrong with her to be feeling such a way. I was even more surprised at the 'chance' Shego gave to Kim when pleasuring herself. With those results confirming what she was too afraid to admit to outright, her abuse of the (poor, unsuspecting) wall was completely believable in the next step of admittance.

    All the emotions that Kim and Shego have gone through and are going through sound like the 7 stages of grief. Which hopefully will not be what they feel when they finally get together... right? Please!


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  • From PureEvilOne on November 21, 2007
    Good chapter. It was interesting seeing Shego get in touch with herself. I look foward to more.
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  • From ANON - Lady Physics: High IQ Dominatrix on November 21, 2007
    Now THIS (See: Ch. 29-32) is what the folks -even back in the cheap seats- came here to see!

    I was getting a tad listless before Ch. 29 (See: Losing Interest... rapidly). Now? Not so much. At Ch. 32 the diametrical opposites make their way about fixed orbits towards a super collision -Damn, Physics is Sexy- the results of which shall spawn new matter... or so it is hoped (unless something or someone comes along to "cock it up!"). Only time and chapters will tell what is to become of Us all; of who stays and who goes.

    KiGo: Goes 'All the Way to 11.'


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  • From ANON - Josh84 on November 21, 2007
    Well, Shego certainly didn't have any problems pleasuring herself with Kim on her mind. Yet she had the real thing on top of her several hours ago, and she freaked out and ran away. What's the deal? When will the confusion end?

    Anyway, terrific chapter - as always. :) Looking forward to what happens next, especially with Shego taking "one of the hardest steps" she's ever had to take in her life.
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  • From PureEvilOne on November 18, 2007
    29_ Good figh great ending it with a kiss.
    30- Good to see more how you see Shego's mind works.
    31- wonderfuly balancened chapter.
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  • From beeftony on November 18, 2007
    I must say I love these psychoanalysis chapters even more than some of the action chapters, because they cast a new perspective on the events that have transpired and give words to what you've been implying the entire time. You have a very good read on Kim's character, which I love because it happens to coincide with my own.

    Now I see what you mean about not wanting to read any KiGo stories until you finished this, because I've seen a lot of this stuff before. However, I like your version the best simply because, despite having ALL of the evidence in front of her, Kim still can't decide what to do. It's just like in Chapter 12 where she was debating with herself over whether or not she was Gay (it's because of this story that I capitalize that word now...). You also present the facts in a fresh, logical manner that make sense within the context of the story as well as the canon to some extent. It's all well thought out, without any wishful thinking.

    For instance, I like the way you presented the fact that Shego holds back, because honestly, there's NO WAY someone of Kim's skills (before Corscan started training her anyway) could have lasted against her. NO FUCKING WAY. But that doesn't make her generous. Shego expects Kim to [i]prove[/i] that she's worthy of the handicap she gives her, so that she can become good enough to one day face her on her level. If Kim can't do that... well it's her own fault for not trying.

    I like how you used Monique in this chapter. Sometimes I just get this mental image of her in a leather chair, with glasses and a pinstripe suit, holding a notepad and saying, "Let's start with your mother...."

    LOL

    In all seriousness, though, she does strike me as the kind of person who knows how to read people. Maybe not as well as Corscan, but the girl's got an eye for these sorts of things and she makes her opinion on the situation known. Why she'd choose to be a Psychiatrist (a medical doctor who focuses mainly on pharmaceutical treatments for mental disorders) rather than a Therapist is beyond me, but may have to do with the fact that you're portraying her as a very smart cookie who wouldn't settle for anything less than an M.D., even though a PhD is often just as good. But maybe I'm reading too much into this. ;)

    All in all, great chapter and I can't wait to see the inevitable (second) confrontation between Kim and Shego. :D

    beeftony
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  • From ANON - Josh84 on November 18, 2007
    This just wasn't Kim's day. Thanks to the fight with Shego, she had to cancel her time with Corscan; and Shego ran off before Kim could "get off"; and to top it all off, she couldn't bring herself to self-satisfy herself. Kim knows that she wants Shego, and-thanks to a little help from Monique-she knows the reason why, but yet she can't act on those feelings. That's where I'm confused. Then again, I don't have that much knowledge about stuff like this. And let's not forget Shego, wherever she is. No doubt she's thinking more on this like Kim.

    One things for sure, I'm definitely looking forward to Kim and Shego's next encounter, and the drama that unfolds with it!

    Another bon-diggity job, man! Keep it up!
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  • From tecate on November 18, 2007
    Yea! We got to crawl deep into Kimmie’s thoughts with this chapter. So nice to see her NOT have a major freak out about the Shego incident since SHE started it. I love how once again Mo came to the rescue of being the ever knowing voice of reason. All around amazing chapter. I really like getting to know how the characters are thinking and feeling and this chapter delivered and then some!

    Now I just need Kim and Shego to confront each other about their new sitch! Oh and when Kim tells C about all this I think it is going to ROCK too so I’m not sure WHAT I am looking forward to more. The KiGo I guess… And I suppose the V is going to become Kimmie’s new stress reliever… Yummm pills! Why do I want to see Kimmie lose it so bad? I guess it is true about the good girls… we love watching them fall!

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  • From ANON - Rose on November 17, 2007
    Woot! Let the Kigo begin! I look forward to Kim and Shego's next encounter. I'm also very curious about the woman who confronted Corscan. Sounded like an old flame. I love Monique and Kims talks. I look forward to the next update and don't forget to bring on the KiGo! Pretty please with a cherry on top?!
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  • From ANON - me on November 15, 2007
    Wow! That was pretty intense, and I liked it! Very nice Shego -centric chapter, although it was full of half thoughts and she kept getting cut off while thinking, it somehow really made sense. A definite difference from your previous chapters, not the making sense part, that was there, but this choppy style of writing. Very nice!
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  • From ANON - Motor Ed on November 15, 2007
    Long time reader, first time reviewer (because I simply can't take it anymore):

    Hey Hollywood, I would suggest you talk with someone from the MotoGP Circuit or any of the other SuperBike Racing Circuits along with a Physics Book or Physics Professor; your Motorcycle physics/reality needs some adjustment.

    1) At 160 mph (+ 60 mph avg. traffic) makes for a 220 mph force vector coming at each other head on! There is no time to react or swerve = Shego Grease Stain. She would be dead (even if she had full faculties and weren't in the throes of passion riding her magic Sybian with two wheels). At 160 mph people go straight, they don't turn or swerve or "quickly dart back and forth" (you don't "quickly" do shit at 160 mph except crash and die). At 160, you'd have drag racing on a closed track, NOT giant slalom on the freeway or anywhere else.

    2) Even at sane speeds around 45 mph, goggles or a helmet are a must. The wind is too great, your eyes water shut. 160 mph? Yeah, right.

    3) Sport bikes or SuperSport Bikes don't jump! Period. They don't launch or jump over anything! They are designed to hug the road, to ride asphalt at speed... not insanity. They aren't motorcross! (Even if a motorcross bike could acheive these speeds, IT couldn't do it)

    4) (See: No Jumping) At 160 mph, not only would the bike NOT "jump" the divider or ditch; but even if Shego were Jesus Christ and Evel Knievel all rolled into one, you'd never land it (not the right suspension, and) at that velocity the 3D kinematic forces from both tires would go ape shit, destroying both bike and rider on landing.

    Now if anyone's tempted to think you could manage all this in a car, well, you Sirs or Ladies, are retarded (and I hope they revoke your license real soon. So when you do manage to kill yourself in an act of Darwinian stupidity, hopefully it will only be you your killing and not some innocent couple or family). Even at freeway speeds you'd be a corpse (considering they could find enough of you to bury), let alone 160 mph!

    Also, Dude, Seriously! You had 900 pages of Kim getting it on with the Tiger-Psycho over 15 chapters and Kim and Shego get chapters the length of a match book? Dude, Seriously!
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