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By : Kellendros

From ANON - Josh84 on December 20, 2007
Oh, great! Now the Tweebs know about Shego. Those two had better be careful; the way they've been acting lately has already made Kim a little suspicious. Sooner or later, she's going to find out that they know her secret, and when that happens... Ahem. Anyway, at least they haven't told anyone yet, but their dialogue in this chapter gives me the impression that they are up to something.

Good chapter. A little shorter than the others, but good nonetheless. Keep it up.

I wish you a Merry Christmas!
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From ANON - Josh84 on December 09, 2007
Good chapter. You know, since the last chapter, I tried to predict what the letter would say. I was close. It seems that Corscan knew Kim all too well, knowing that Kim would try to find her; and with Wade and Shego helping her out, Kim just might pull it off.

I still find it funny how Shego still feels uncomfortable about Kim's new attitude. In most Kigo fics, the roles are reversed. Not that Shego doesn't act that way in this story, but it seems that Kim one-ups her every now and then. :) It makes the story all the more interesting.

It kinda tanks that we now will have to wait for weeks at a time for future chapters, but, as you have proven so many times, it will definitely be worth the wait. Of that, I have no doubt. Keep up the great work.
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From ANON - me on December 08, 2007
Another great chapter as always. One could argue that it was a bit slow, but it intored another mystry, and although we arn't running out of any, more is always welcome. I hope you can keep track of all the twists and turns yourself. So I'll wait for your next chapter, the suspense isn't as great when shego wasn't there, but its still pretty big ^^ lates.
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From PureEvilOne on December 08, 2007
32. Excellent change of pace with Kim being the more sexually one in a kigo ship.
33-36. Terriffic KiGo interactiion. Shego's past and Kim's reaction to it were handled great. Shego's take on Kim/corscan was brilliant. I loro seeing what Corscan is up to and if Kigo can find her.

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From ANON - me on December 03, 2007
Wow, while I waited fro this chapter and I found the foreshadowing in the past chapter really well done, I feel like you dangled a cookie in front of my face and ate it a split second before I could. You might as well have stopped me right before the top of the hill on a roller coaster. And so I dangle, waiting for the rush I know is sure to come, but the silence is deafening.
Excellent chapter, and the thing about corscan being like Shego? very well played ^^
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From ANON - Josh84 on December 03, 2007
This is one of the few fics that I have read where Shego has actually killed. It's a little disturbing, but then again, like she said, it's not like she goes around randomly killing people. There was always a reason for her actions. For curiousity's sake, I do hope that we'll get to find out what exactly the Heartbreaker did to Shego that led her killing him.

I think its great that Kim still want to explore her developing relationship with Shego after all that she heard. But, then again, she did keep seeing Corscan after seeing that recording of her killing all those people.

Now this is a strange development. The entire CI facility deserted and emptied, all that is left are a few bags and a note to Kim.

This was a great way to start the week. Excellent chapter. Looking forward to what happens next.
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From ANON - Caffine on December 03, 2007
*reading,reading,reading....faceplant on the cliffie*

Damn you evil cliffy!!

Another excellent chapter!
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From beeftony on December 03, 2007
Oh, dude, you can't end it like that! YOU JUST CAN'T END IT LIKE THAT!!!

Well, actually you can, but that doesn't mean I have to like it.... ;)

Anyway, magnificent chapter and I just love the new revelations. Your attention to detail is clear right from the start, as I learned at least five things about helicopters that I didn't know before. And the bathroom thing.... "This is your fault, Possible!" lol

I loved Shego's commentary on Kim's story; she's certainly different from Monique in that she comments rather than commiserates, but that's a good thing as far as I'm concerned. Kim could use a perspective from someone who knows more about the dark side of life than she does.

Hey, you weren't kidding when you said this was going to be a non-conventional KiGo story; usually she's apparently too moral to kill even though she's evil, which would make no freaking sense when applied to the tone of this story, so I'm glad that you went a different route. Seriously though, she's lost count?! Then again, I suppose it would be more alarming if she did keep track, so....

What I like best about the whole thing is that, as Kim put it, Shego doesn't play by any rules but her own. There are things in this world that she considers to be truly wrong, and even though she's on the side of evil, she won't tolerate them. Everyone that she's been paid to kill or wanted to kill had it coming as far as I'm concerned, and she was morally justified, if not necessarily "right." But then again, what does Shego care about what other people say is "right?"

Excellent chapter and I can't wait for the final pre-written one. It'll be tough waiting for you to write them, but then I suppose I don't have any room to talk.... ;)

beeftony
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From ANON - me on November 29, 2007
Well I had a feeling that Shego knew about the way, that thing you did with her powers becoming more intense was a really good idea. I hope that she grows farther in her skill levels. This is going to turn into a conspiracy thing,considering everything Shego said about Corscan. I loved Kim's reaction to it. Great chapter, and I look forward to teh confrontation!
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From ANON - Caffine on November 29, 2007
Yay for upcoming hard questions! An improved Shego and a possibly pissed off Possible (no pun intended) should provide Corscan w/ just a little bit of a problem. Even Kim in full "I want answers NOW" mode is scary *shudder at mental image*
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From ANON - Josh84 on November 28, 2007
Needless to say, another terrific chapter.

I like this new development with Shego's powers. With them, Shego was alway a dangerous adversary, but now, thanks to her training, she's practically a force of nature!

After hearing all that happened during the fight between Shego and Corscan, Kim was able to hold her temper, just barely. I gotta say, I'm impressed. I found it funny how Kim got aggravated by the fact that not only does Shego heal much faster than normal, but also by the fact that the villainess was able to get stronger in under half the time it took Kim. That must really stick in her craw.

Yet as fast as Shego can heal, Corscan was able to heal up in just two days. Even though the explanation was plausable, it's still unbelievable. But, then again, that's one of things that makes the woman so mysterious and interesting.

Keep it up, man!
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From beeftony on November 28, 2007
This has got to be my favorite chapter so far, where all the tension that's been building up over the last several chapters reaches its zenith and then dissipates just as quickly. I just love the way you used Shego in this chapter. She just has a way of cutting through all the crap and getting straight to the point. It's one of the many things I admire about her character.

As always it's the little things that make this such an enjoyable read for me. I like that Kim had enough foresight to call Monique to tell her where she'd be going; it shows that she's learning to trust her allies more. Also, I couldn't help but smile at the way you totally went against the cliche of Shego indulging in the occasional drink. She probably set a few bars on fire before figuring that one out. ;) And the "Mad Max" reference was classic. :lol:

Kim and Shego's conversation feels more like hammering out a contract, which I'm grateful for as most KiGo stories I've read just have them jumping in headfirst without really thinking about it. Here they set the terms right from the beginning. It's a welcome change of pace from the stories where they just up and decide to jump into bed with each other.

Speaking of which, I love love LOVE Shego's sexual hang-up. Love it! And hate it at the same time since it precludes any possibility of what I want to see happening any time soon. Still, I can't help but marvel at your amazing read on her character. You have a gift, my friend. :)

I'll agree with everyone else here that the hardwood floors joke was hilarious. That's another one of those little things that sets your work a step above all the rest.

So now Shego knows what Kim's been studying, and she's none too happy about it. I would suspect that someone of her caliber would know about [The Way], and I can't wait to see the confrontation with Corscan.

Later! :D
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From ANON - mkire on November 28, 2007
Kellendros, RoD is good stuff, i'm liking the part i've read so far, which is up to chapter 15, and will continue to read it. Thank you for publishing your work of art.
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From ANON - Caffine on November 26, 2007
Wow. This is the first new "epic" I've picked up in a long time. And it is truly epic. I found myself reading almost non-stop and completely enjoying all of it. Aside from the very, very few spelling errors, I've been extremely impressed with the plot. I can't wait for the story to continue!
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From ANON - T on November 25, 2007
This is sooo good! can't wait for the next chapter!
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