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Reviews for Broken One

By : Vittlee
  • From ANON - on July 22, 2016

    this is great and so emotional, but are there any more, i really want to know what happens?


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  • From ANON - JRC on October 12, 2013
    I just wanted to tell you how great I think this story is. I know you probably have no intention of continuing it, but I thought I'd give persuading you a try anyway. Please pick it back up :)
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  • From NarutosBrat on May 05, 2010
    like seriously, are you going to update this?
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  • From johnrie18 on April 27, 2008
    This is a very dark story, but interesting. I do hope you plan to update again at a later date.
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  • From barkere5 on September 13, 2007
    Hey Man when are you going to put up more chapters. I think this is a really really cool story. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From bigherb81 on April 22, 2007
    This is a darkly twisted story and it is great. I mean Ron on a downward spiral Bonnie w/ an incest fantasy about her daddy and projecting those fantasies on Ron. I really hope you keep going w/ this story and finish it because I can't wait to see what you do next.
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  • From Yustax on March 18, 2007
    Finally some update is gettin better now ron have 2 sluts
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  • From jacx on February 24, 2007
    Awesome Story!!!!! need more
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  • From ANON - D4rK on December 24, 2006
    Yeah i knew that this fic wouldnt dissapoint me i love the fics where ron turns into a killer
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  • From ANON - hgl on December 23, 2006
    Hope to read more soon. It's interesting.
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  • From ANON - BrianDarksoul on December 22, 2006
    Read upto Chap 3.
    Now THAT ois one seriouslly Dark Ron.
    Booyahahaha Motherfuckers!

    The possible family is going to be in the BAD place. I hope Rom fucks Anne and makes Kim watch then tortures them after Kim confessess. I reckon anne could be Ron's pet abd Bonnie as well as Shego his comffort sources. sorta like 2 face....
    From the movie Leather(Shego) Lace(Bonnie) both loving Ron.
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on December 21, 2006
    a seriously messsed up fic, that's so deep i can't stop reading it. good job.
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  • From ANON - youli on December 21, 2006
    Hope to read more soon
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  • From ANON - ronfan on December 21, 2006
    I really don't like ron & bonnie killing. But like the sex parts of kim&bonnie chapters.
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  • From ANON - Star of Morning on December 21, 2006
    Wow. Sick. Dark. And unapologetic.

    More!
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