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Reviews for Broken One

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  • From ANON - vendo on December 20, 2006
    yeesh, i didn't mean like this, but well written anyway! GOD! i mean like holy crap man this is some DARK shit! Don't forget Shego and Kim's mom!

    GO RON!
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  • From ANON - Ray Foster on December 20, 2006
    Jesus H Christ...you are in need of some serious help.

    Ron definitely went off the deep end. Cop killing with his hands and feet. Kidnapping. Forcing Bonnie to become a killer. All because of Kim's inability to tell the truth. It was not the first time than lying got Kim in trouble (First Season #21 - Halloween). But this time the consequences go up exponentally.

    Great dialogue. An enemy of my enemy is my friend until proven otherwise...I have to remember that line.

    Great dark fiction...Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - RI100014 on December 20, 2006
    You are one screwed up motherfucker!! Damn, I like. Too fucked up to be real or even slightly fictional but who gives a damn. Ill read the next chapter when i feel the need to hate the world. Right now I just don't give a fuck.

    Till next time....adios.
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  • From ANON - D4rK on December 20, 2006
    Damn nice fic, pls tell me that he is not death, he survive somehow and then he will go rampage to all fucking middleton
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  • From ANON - turok1 on December 19, 2006
    interesting would like to see more of this story
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