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By : harry102
  • From ANON - Adriana on May 07, 2015
    Please, tell me that you will continue....
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  • From DrunkenScotsman on September 12, 2012
    I just found this gem while trawling for something to read. You, sir or madam, have a real gift for writing erotic scenes - the handjobs were extra hot, and that's hard to do. Further, despite the fact that Jonny and Jessie were going at it like rabbits, the scenes never felt repetitive (which could have easily been the case).

    I'm pretty sure Jessie was my first cartoon crush (either her or Rogue from the X-Men Animated Series anyway), so it was great to read such a delicious erotic fic about her and Jonny. You wrote them really well, too - pretty much all of their dialogue and inner monologue fit right in w/ how they acted in the show, constantly dancing around the fact that they were totally perfect for one another, flirting and teasing and generally having great chemistry together. Race's dialogue was spot-on too; I could practically hear his voice actor in my mental ear with what you wrote.

    Bravo on an excellent story. I hope you're still working on it, but even if not, it's still one of the best I've read on this site.
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  • From zucca on September 11, 2010
    I love this story so much a i really hope that you continue to write it. Please say you will
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  • From mysterman10000 on September 04, 2010
    As always, your work is something to be aspired to. And I'm glad to see that your still alive. I hope this means that your going to update your other story as well. Please do.
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  • From WhiteOrchid886 on July 22, 2010
    Oh my God, I can't tell you how shocked I was that this story finally had an update and I am so overjoyed that it does! The chapter is just as good if not better than previous ones. You're on a creative role, keep going with it, and see this story through to the end. I would love to know how this ends. Great work and wonderful to read your stuff again!
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  • From on April 17, 2010
    please tell you you will up date this!
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  • From davejohn on May 30, 2009
    WOW!!! This is the story that makes a guy wanna take a cold shower after reading almost every fuckin' chapter! If you haven't guessed, I more than liked this story. It is a Four alarm sizzling hot story! Pleeeeese keep this party going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2009
    AMAZING story can't wait for more rom harry102 seriously this was top notch, almost as good as love is strong. please for the love of god finish love is strong
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  • From AletaRois on February 27, 2008
    Oh, man, you really need to update this!
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  • From firemaiden04 on September 30, 2007
    Very, very hot. Extraordinary visualization skills, especially with the speech.
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  • From TimeLord on July 24, 2007
    This fic is awesome. The way it's written is tasteful and equally compelling. I really enjoy reading all your JQ fics, and I wish you would add more chapters to this story as it is very good. I must say it is my favorite.
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  • From Amarin on May 24, 2007
    Glad to see you continued this; Jonny and Jessie seem to have a real problem being on the same page at the same time. Hope they manage to meet up soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2006
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    It's clear that you really love this story, which I'm sure the author appreciates, but you've got it all wrong. If you read in detail, there's mention of Jonny climaxing every time they have sex. It's just done tastefully (i.e. "he exploded inside her" or "he finished a moment later."). The bodily function that follows is insinuated and does not need to be described in detail. There are also appropriate mentions of "clean up" throughout the story. It's very realistic in that sense. Impressively so in my opinion because most stories just throw that aside for all the sex stuff. Now I agree that the amount of sex is unrealistic, but this is fiction and ADULT fiction at that. You'd be on fanfiction.net if you didn't wanna read more adult content and so would I. Love the story and your others, Harry. I think all your reviewers love them too, but I still wanted to defend anyway! Update soon and have fun writting!
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  • From ANON - Mike on December 20, 2006
    Good point White-Orchid. I forgot that. It seems, that the story has 2 incorrect matters. Dond get me frong Harry, This story is realy great. Both incorrect matters are on Jonny. First, he seems to be "drycumming", because in some cases, there is no "physical mess" left behind. And 16 times... (my girlfriend counted that). As a best of my knoweledge, the timeline is about litle over 24 hour. Quite... impressive performance from Jonny, altough not possible.
    Still waiting and hoping for epiloque. Great job, update this one, or start with the new one, would you.
    Oh, and White-Orchid, thanks for pointing that one out. You are rigth, btw. Men do ejaculate every time with orcasm, with one exeption. If, after really wild nigth... men can get orcasm without ejaculation, because there would be nothing left. (After 6 or 7 times or so...)
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  • From ANON - momiji_k on December 18, 2006
    That was great. I really enjoyed their closeness and their connection to one another. But wow, that is a lot of love-making! It must be nice to be young like that. ^_-

    I would love to see a follow up to this.
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