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By : MysticLady3
  • From roflcopta on October 12, 2007
    really good so far.
    I'd like to see a sequel.... if you get around to it.

    Overall really enjoyable, but how about making Jimmy and Cindy get vengeance on Nick?
    Just throwing it out there,,,perhaps put it in the sequel.

    Keep writing,

    4.5/5 Stars!~
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  • From Generalnazor on May 21, 2007
    It was ok.
    Not the best ive ever seen.
    lotts of potental though.
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  • From skeeve on April 13, 2007
    Great addition to your story, you're building it up nicely. I cant wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - bourneo on January 01, 2007
    Wonderful story! Your characters are well written and the story line is compelling. You could expand this story into several more chapters easly. A revenge chapter, for the way Nick treated Cindy. A continuation into Cindy and Jimmy's new explorations of each other. Or maybe Jimmy using time travel so he could start things earlier with Ciny, possibly to save her from herself.
    I hope you will continue with these chapters.
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  • From ANON - John on August 08, 2006
    Cool fic! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - unnotest person on July 30, 2006
    are you going to add another chapter? if so please tell me when its posted thanks!
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  • From ANON - Eddie on July 27, 2006
    I really liked your story it had a great plot but there were alot of spelling mistakes. I give it two thumbs up but you should go back and fix the spelling errors. I look forward to reading the next chapter, if there is one.
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  • From ANON - kryl on July 25, 2006
    Hey good story, try to finish it. :)
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