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By : englishwitch2003
  • From ANON - blueskies on September 13, 2005
    That was SO FREAKING EXCELLENT!!!
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  • From ANON - Ava on September 12, 2005
    I love the story, please continue. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - ??? on August 24, 2005
    Write a chapter or story about dash doing well something to make his dick even bigger than tony's so he can have sex with his sis. I was thinking how and all i could come up with is that he steals something from a lab or something idk you can figure out something please write it?
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  • From ANON - ??? on August 24, 2005
    super powered person being good......hah. If I had powers i'd be evil. And not in a greedy way either in a kill people for the fun of it kind of sadistic way so ha. Otherwise good story.
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on August 15, 2005
    I bet Tony is going to be horny and no other girl will give him the prefect fuck like violet did. So he is going to come crawling back begging for her to go out with him again... *giggles* please e-mail me when you update this is like a amazing story that I can't get enough of!!
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  • From Macelf on August 03, 2005
    I just got this in email, and I just responded to said email. Get the DVD, check out the extras. A true geek would have done so by now. I'm 21 and a pre-law major - I don't make statements without evidence to back them up. Also, check out the Incredibles section of fanfiction.net. Every author there will tell you the same thing. You are neither mean nor bitter, simply uninformed. Hope you understand this after reading the email I sent.

    Beyond all that, I do hope to read more soon.
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  • From Macelf on August 01, 2005
    Great as usual. Just wanted to point out that Stratagirl and dynaguy are dead, tho.
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  • From ANON - ??? on July 17, 2005
    Its really good including the new chapter(5). Although i'd like to see dash again you only made him 4 inches so if you do then make him bigger.(you'll cum up with something)
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  • From ANON - alex on July 13, 2005
    all you need is a nude picture of violet to complete the visual story
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  • From ANON - Rob on July 12, 2005
    I love it! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - LuffySP on June 28, 2005
    I was impressed. I never thought of Violet as a slut. I think it was a good story... except you repeated the same phrases too much. You said "her pussy was begging to be fucked" at least 20 times. You could've used another phrase. But it was very good. You managed to describe the trials and tribulations of a horny teenage girl in search of sex to a 't'. Good job. I'd like to hear more Violet stories from you.
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  • From ANON - B and J on June 25, 2005
    Well. after completing this oddyuesy of hedonism im must say we are a little desipointed.

    Some points id like to make, sex wise, they never did anything but pussy and tits, foreplay, then vaginal sex. Noo matter who its with or where it is its still boring. Have anal, gangbangs, Bndage, At least for godsake ass in oral.

    Id also like to point out that the phrase "Fuck me t'ill i scream" was over used. We are annoyed by that, it killed our wood, No one kills or wood and lives
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  • From ANON - Pheonix on June 15, 2005
    You've got to continue this! There's no way this should end. Continue it or make a sequel! As a veteran lemon fanfiction reader, there's no way I can let you make as big a faux pas as you did by leaving the reader in a cliff hanging moment. Please, if you can find it in your heart, take my advice.
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  • From hondafan on April 30, 2005
    Hey that was a nice story keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Wow on April 25, 2005
    That was amazing, a great piece of work.
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