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Reviews for Domestic Disturbance

By : StarShineMB
  • From ANON - Mari on September 20, 2011
    This has got to be one of the absolute BEST Optimus/Starscream stories that I have ever read. I just finished all thirty some odd chapters and all I can say is wow, just WOW. You're a brilliant writer. Plot, characterization, supense factor, all were just amazing. You did a fantastic job from beginning to end. Thank you so much for sharing your talent! I'm definitely bookmarking this story to read again. I can't wait to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Gaa on July 09, 2010
    So, I never review stuff. Like, ever. But this was sort of the fanfiction to end all fanfiction when it comes to TF, now. I enjoyed every second of this, and if a sequal ever crops up you can bet I'll read that too.

    Seriously. This is brilliant. Thank you for writing it.
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  • From CatDeChanis on February 16, 2010
    Been watching this for a while. Awesome end. Are you going to do a sequel? I'd like to see what Optimus does to Megatron when he finds out just what Starscream traded his freedom for,
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  • From ANON - reader on January 10, 2010
    The premise was interesting, and so was the fic, up until about chapter 21 or so, after which illogical situations started to crop up and the characters started making decisions for which the reasoning seemed senseless and designed solely to provide for drama and the lengthening of the story. Drama's all well and good, but so's logic. The fic was entertaining, but was quite jarring to have to go, "Huh? Wha?" every few paragraphs or so.
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  • From ANON - blackshiro on January 06, 2010
    The end? Nooooooes! ;____; I loved this story! It was sooo good! I really hope you'll write many more awesome fics like that! :*
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  • From ANON - DTE on January 06, 2010
    I never was a big fan of transformers's fics, but this story has me converted, you can now consider me a fan. I loved everything about this story, EVERYTHING! And I seriously hope you decide to write a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Krauzer on December 25, 2009
    Oh pretty interesting story you've gor here. I really like how you described the relationship between Megatron and Starscream. I'd like to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - shangrila on December 20, 2009
    Oh wow, this story is sooo, sooo good! I really love it! It's well written, interesting and the p0rn is awesome :D MORE!
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  • From blackshiro on December 07, 2009
    Awwwww it almost looks like everything is good and dandy between Megs and Starscream but..... we know better don't we :/ Good chapter, waiting for more ;3
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  • From blackshiro on November 26, 2009
    Great chapter! I really like this love/hate relationship between Megatron and Screamer. It's pretty sad that they ended this way :/
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  • From blackshiro on November 15, 2009
    Yaaaay thank you for the new chapter! :D Hope to see more soon! ^_____^
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  • From mistressofyaoi on November 14, 2009
    oh why couldnt scrfeamer reach those nice sharp objects and detach megatrons voice atleast hehe

    good chapter glad to see the updates rolling again ^^
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  • From fadingdreams on November 10, 2009
    ....update?

    Its been so long I almost forgot about this story!!!
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  • From mistressofyaoi on October 26, 2009
    I'm a little unclear with the ending of this chapter was starscream laughing on the surgical table?
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  • From nekogirl1 on October 23, 2009
    Yay for updates! Love hearing about the brothers too.

    Sorry bout the hold-ups, I know those can be pretty scary! Hopefully they get caught soon!
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