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Reviews for Domestic Disturbance

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  • From fadingdreams on August 17, 2009
    Maybe update before we all die from the suspense !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From blackshiro on August 06, 2009
    It was a real pleasure to read you story, it's very well written and interesting :) I definitely can't wait for more so please update soon!
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  • From mistressofyaoi on August 06, 2009
    megatron you cold hearted bastard!
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  • From shozurei24 on August 05, 2009
    Poor Starscream. Leaving Optimus must have been the hardest thing he'd ever done. I hope this story has a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - Sakaiya on August 05, 2009
    Omg, I've been checking your fic everyday to see if there's an update and if it was as great as the last. This one was.... it was simply the best. The way teh characters acted and reacted in this chapter. I can't say I perfectly understand anybody 100% especially Megatron but i'm definately hooked and will be awaiting more.
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  • From Trelynne on August 05, 2009
    Aww man! TT____TT this made me cry.. it really did.. good chapter! thankyou for the update i hope this ends well. I feel sooo bad for Prime and Screamer now..
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  • From yukikoangel on August 03, 2009
    I think I'm half going mad re-reading this until the next chapter!
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  • From lakuniko on July 31, 2009
    Ususlly I dont like Megatron/Starscream pairing. because abusive relationship between them. somehow I really like your story.
    your writing really great.
    very in charactors and believable.
    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Sakaiya on July 28, 2009
    Can I just say, your writing is awesome. I didn't really read transformers fiction at all and yours just blew me out of the water. And you update so quickly! A trait thats truly rare these days. The only thing I can say is that I wished there was a tiny bit more about how Rachet took to the whole story and just how understanding he is. But other than that, it was an awesome chapter.
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  • From butterflies1974 on July 27, 2009
    I am so glad that Starscream told Prime. This story is brilliant and I do have to admit that I look forward to it very much. This story is written with such an emotion that even the traditional 'bad' bot is a figure that is someone you begin to care about. Thank you for a brilliant story and I look forward to more. This story is a delight to read.
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  • From ANON - MikoTenma on July 27, 2009
    Read the next chapter but you should know that you put it into the wrong story. YOu put it in you one shot Change. Might want to fix that. Love the story, look towards every new chapter.
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  • From Trelynne on July 23, 2009
    Woot! Another chapter! And bigger WOOT! Ratchet you are the best! Thankyou so much for the chapter! i am so happy! very very happy ^_^
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  • From butterflies1974 on July 22, 2009
    I love this story. It is so well written that I hate for the chapter to end. Wow...I feel so sorry for starscream...and Prime is awesome in this story, thank you for a great read.
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  • From mistressofyaoi on July 22, 2009
    oh poor starscream, though i cant help but worry whats going t happend to skywarp and thundercracker without starscream there to protect them
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  • From ANON - Bro on July 22, 2009
    I can't stop reading! This is great!
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