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Reviews for Domestic Disturbance

By : StarShineMB
  • From Crossfire120576 on October 23, 2009
    Heya!!
    I am SOOOOOOOO sorry to hear about the dangerous situations you have been finding yourself in at work. That is absolutely horrid!! I will keep you in my prayers(if you don't mind)! Please be careful, though. I don't know you from Adam or Eve but I do not wish ill on anybody. Plus, on a purely selfish note, it would really suck to not know how this ends!
    Take as much time as you need between chappies, hun! Don't over exert yerself on MY behalf, although I KNOW I am NOT the only one reading this. Make sure yer feeling as good as you can and take care of you!! Yer more important then the story any day!! Thanks for the update and it was really good!! I really look forward to the next chappie and as always keep up the excellent work!! Bye for now!!



    Transform and Roll Out!!
    Cross_fire1205@yahoo.com aka
    Jaime
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  • From fadingdreams on October 22, 2009
    Your filler chapters are still damn entertaining and fit the story well so no worries.

    Shitty about getting robbed. Thats enough stress to give you an ulcer. Buy a can of bear guard and keep it in your pocket. Not dog spray..Bear gaurd. It it potent stuff. I had to spray a dude trying to break into my house and it stopped him dead and disabled him till the cops came.
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  • From blackshiro on October 22, 2009
    Awwww well, RL comes first :/ Good chapter, it's always great to see you updating this story. Can't wait for more! :D Takce care hun' and update asap ^___^
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  • From Trelynne on October 13, 2009
    TT___TT TC and Skywarp I LOVE YOU!! you both are wonderful seekers! Helping Starscream it is so loving and caring ^^ *hearts* anyway thank you thank you thank you for the chapter!! ^__^ i loved it very much!
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  • From ANON - Bro. on October 11, 2009
    Absolutely AWESOME! I love it, I can't wait to read what happens next. Poor Starscream.
    Oh, by the way, You are amazing!
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  • From blackshiro on October 11, 2009
    Oh my, this story is so good! After every new chapter i just can't wait to see more! It's so heartbreaking that OP and Star can't be together awwww ;_____; Please update soon! :]


    Awwww i really hope that you'll make a happy ending for this story...please! *__*
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  • From mistressofyaoi on October 11, 2009
    oh they were so cruel to prime only to be enlightened by starscream beautiful this is yaoi fanfics at its best
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  • From nekogirl1 on October 05, 2009
    An update!!! Wow, Prime just barely made it out, nice twist wiht the other seekers. Hopefully they can save Screamer...after lots more action & angst though!
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  • From blackshiro on October 03, 2009
    Oh my fuc*ing god, Thundercracker yes!!! I sooo luv you rigt now TC! :D You were an asshole Megs so you don't deserve to molest Prime :P Baby i was SO waiting for this chapter, it was very exciting and i definitely need more!:D Update soon please :3
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  • From mistressofyaoi on October 02, 2009
    ad its thundercracker and skywarp to the resue yes! oh brilliant, oh i cant wait till the next chapter keep them coming!
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  • From Trelynne on October 01, 2009
    THANK YOU! I was screaming at Megs the whole time i was reading the first part XD! YAY for wing mates *hearts* And thank you thank you thank you sooo much for the chapter! ^_^ i cant wait to see what happens! you have me craving moooooore ^^ and again, THANK YOU!
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  • From Crossfire120576 on October 01, 2009
    OMG!! OMG!! You are AWESOME!! I was about to give up hope on this story!! Then THIS!! I adore you!! I don't believe we are TOTALLY out of the woods, though! But, it seems this may not be all gloom and doom! I am AVIDLY awaiting the next chapter now! I thought the worst was SURE to happen, especially around the middle of THIS chappie! Thank you!! Thank you!! Thank you AGAIN!
    Technically speaking, this is a very well written chapter. Your spelling was great and as was your punctuation and your grammar is excellent. You really have a feel for your characters, too. You have their personalities down to a science. Keep up the great work and update soon!! I am waiting with baited breath!! Bye for now!!

    Transform and Roll Out!!
    Cross_fire1205@yahoo.com aka
    Jaime
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  • From Trelynne on September 22, 2009
    Thank you for the chapter! I beg you, please no MxP T.T i no want Megs to get his claws on Prime, i know he would do horrible things and make Starscream suffer and watch. I would rather see Prime captured, ends up with Starscream in need of medical care/repairs then kill Megs XD I know i am horrible and random.
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  • From blackshiro on September 21, 2009
    Waaaah poor Starscream! ;___; Megatron you asshole, you were a really bad 'con so i vote for no Prime touching for you!!! >.< Heh OP will be so pissed if Megs decide to tell him what he did to Star D: I hope Optimus will kick his ass! More! :3
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  • From mistressofyaoi on September 19, 2009
    hmm i think you should lety megs get prime althouggh realistically i dont want that to happend story wise it makes sense
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