Reviews for Mabel Movie Madness

BY : Jayrich


  • From nukerat on November 05, 2020

    damn these little creeps just don't know when to quit.



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  • From GeorgeGlass on July 07, 2019

    I recently read this again, and I have a couple more comments:

    --If Wendy is at college, then this story takes place sometime in the future, but it isn't clear how far in the future. How old are the other characters? More to the point, what is Pacifica's body like now that puberty has hit? These are the important details. :)
    --Also, I liked "take matters into her own thighs," and that Pacifica doesn't know what an ice pack is.



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  • From DebbieCync on March 20, 2019

    *blinks and looks at drink*



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  • From GeorgeGlass on January 21, 2019

    Nice bit of unexpected hotness between Dipper and Pacifica, made hotter by the fact that they did it with Mabel in the room. Are more chapters in the works?



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  • From nukerat on June 05, 2018

    reaaaaaaally hoping Franz won't get what he wanted



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  • From The all seeing eye on June 05, 2018

    this will be intresting!



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