MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!! WELCOME BACK, ma it is great to see this chapter, and hear from you. Thanks for a tender chapter, the discussion about Twilight was excellent, and the can't say "I don't love you" is endearing for them. 

I'm just so happy seeing this and enjoying it. Thank you.

Woo! Its back. Thanks for the update.

I'm glad to see you back here, and writing once more in this story, I was afraid that you were leaving it unfinished, which would've been quite a shame indeed. 

I'm somewhat anxious to see the plot advance a little though, and I must confess that this chapter, while entertaining, felt really, really unnecesary or to say the least, filler-y. 

Still, you've also made quite a lot of sense in some of your comments here, especially regarding Twilight itself, and not that I think about it, it makes sense that Lucy would want to share a story, as she seems, like Lincoln, to have inherited Rita's love for writing. 

Still, as filler-y as this chapter felt, it was still, incredible and well written, I hope to see more of you here as well. And hopefully, that you also receive more attention and good reviews for your hard work.

Thank you for the effort and the story, they're greatly appreciated.

So happy to see another chapter up.  I was honestly afraid this had become a dead story.

Loving the story 

Will there be an update soon ??

Maybe the girls who have and will have sex with Lincoln should buy some lingerie, I can imagine Lynn wearing red lingerie while Lucy wears black, they could wear it when laying on their sides on the bed facing Lincoln because they want to have a threesome. Just an idea

Made my day to see this had been updated

Short compared to the last few chapters but overall nice to see more

 I love it

comment for chapter 11

(“Now I kinda feel left out,” Luna realized.

Lincoln gave her a hug. “You have a girlfriend and I wouldn’t want to come between you, but if you’re ever single and in need, I’ll always be there for you.”

“Thanks Bro,” Luna said. “I doubt I’ll ever take you up on it, but I appreciate the offer.”)

I feel like somehow she is going to take up the offer, and her girlfriend will be involved, they'll all just wake up in his bed after a concert and sam will probably scream" oh god I slept with Lincoln," then Luna would sleepily say "We all have, now go back to sleep... also you now have superpowers."

First off, Another great chapter as usual and I see your having fun with this story too! And damn Luan and the girls being blunt like a baseball bat to the head! I was laughing at how poor Luna was getting goob smacked with what was going on. 

I actually thought that Lisa could get that building pretty easy, heck she could get the land around and the road as her private drive way if she asked with pupy dog eyes to the right people. (lol) But I'm not surprised that they are all excited about their own bathrooms, I grew up with two siblings so yeah private heaven when you get the time alone in there.

Oh boy, so Luna flipped her bed...Okay slightly freaking out now with nerves or anticipation I don't know. Okay we're still on the Luna and Sam thing, like i've said before her character isn't fleshed out yet so, she's shaped by the authors who right her, and we'll probably see what happens next if Luna gets pregnant/super powers by osmosis...Man that felt weird typing that. 

Well good or bad we get to see happens next. I love this story. Keep up the great work as always, thank you for the great work. Excelsior!!!

You are only getting better friend like the world building

the wait is the TUBE(chapter 13) noncannon to this or is that really where the story is going or what? For the record, if that doesn't play into the story you should say that becouse omake is something I had to look up and I'm only half sure what it means. This is why we need a proper comment system on this site. 

Chapter 13

Oh boy this omake, fits the story so well, and absorbs you into it with the sister play by play... It was a wonderful chapter, if it wasn't a omake, I would have had no complants about it being canon, heck the ending had me laughing myself silly with what Leni did. 

I'm glad you threw in Luna a lot of people get on soap boxes with the L is Love episode, and then I get screamed at when I point we NEVER found out what happened with Luna and Sam.

Heck we don't know if the letter was signed with Luna's name or if they got together. Worst is we don't know Sam's character or traits.... Just her image. Luckily a lot of people give Sam a nice personality in their stories they write, while others make her into a two faced selfish bitch that dogs should chase out of town, but this is your story. 

So if you want to bring in Sam and Luna with Lincoln at the same time, MORE POWER to you, and again another wonderful story with a gripping chapter. I enjoyed it greatly and makes me wonder what other omakes you have cooking? 

Thank you and have a great day. Keep up the great writing!!!

You Sir, Are Evil! I would love to see this chapter evolve into it's own thing! Gotta admit, I got sad when I thought you were putting an end to the rest of it. But reading the familie's reactions to the fanfic so far was hilarious (especially Lori's deadpans). I'm game for whatever other fan fiction you decide to do fam!