Another great chapter lol but how much longer do we need to wait for lucys turn lol

Chapter was nice, still can’t wait for more

I hope Lucy gets her turn soon

Is it bad that I was hoping for a threesome in this chapter? But seriously I loved this slice of life chapter, cool that Lana knows we're watching, nice referance to Deathbattle mentioning Wade and Pinkie. 

Lynn and the swag, oh boy I can honestly see that happening, plus Lola's acting oh god I just wanted to pick her up and hug her. Honestly I love your story's current pace and setting. 

I'm eager for Luna's and Luan's turns with Lincoln, also maybe Lincoln can barrow some of his dad's old cloths until Lisa can fabricate some indestructible boxers. lol

So until next time, thank you for another wonderful chapter and can't wait for more. 

It's disturbing, but I enjoy it.I would have never thought of this. Does Lisa ever reveal what she knows? 

I'll like your story it is a good read keep it coming I hate to see a story this good go away because you didn't get enough reviews

The story so is very good you have excellent pacing, do build very well and the grammar is on the spot. Overall I do enjoy the fic so far and hope to see more.

P.S lincoln favorite position is probably the mating press 

I love how Lucy is waiting to make her move instead of attacking right away it will make her more horny

Howdy, I would like to say that the start of your story is pretty good and already with Lynn and Lincon flirting like this is "fun" and I'm eager for more. Sorry about Luan and Benny but she was too good for him. (Just mine and Lincoln's personal opinions.) 

Nice slice of life between Lincoln and Clyde, and breaking and entering... snickers for fun and profit! God that just screams Loud House craziness.

I'm positive that Lisa watches over her older siblings as 6-8 year old guardian scientist (she ain"t no angel but she's pretty darn cool too.) especially for her big brother.

So he's changing huh, hopefully not to much, i would understand his reflexes and body becoming stronger and durable too a degree, but hopefully nothing like needing whole people to sustain himself for physical changes... but if he gets a little bigger standing soldier I won't complain.

So Lynn is the first and hopefully not the last of Lincoln's harem. Yeah family bonds do help shape who we are and many things about us, food, cloths, and people we like for examples. Luckily they have Lisa to help if any future Louds are born, nobody wants a mutated baby living in pain in its short life when it was born from love.

Okay I'm making myself sad now, better change subjects, porn, snickers, and hopefully who's next. I'm hoping Luna and Leni get pulled in cause their some of my favorite Louds, and yes I believe Luna is bisexual, not homosexual, heck we never saw what happened between her and Sam. For all we know Sam was disgusted with her  or indifferent with the love letter. After all they never went back to it no good news, no bad...just the quite. Besides Lincoln loves his rock and roll queen and would treat her as such. 

Leni I know would literally jump Lincoln if she had to use him as a human mannequin, well if he's got pheromones for his sisters and NOT his mom (leave Lynn Sr his perfect girl). Looking forward to more, keep up the great work.

Sorry about the lack of review thus far. I totally forgot that there was a review function.

Anyway, loving the story thus far. A little slower with the workup to the actual sex than I usually like in my stories but in this story it works very well.

No obvious spelling or grammar mistakes that I can find thus far after reading through and backing the story up to my hard drive using LibreOffice which is another very big plus.

I registered this account so I could tell you that I adore this story, and it's physically impossible for you to update fast enough to satisfy me.

...It didn't kill me, but now there's a gaping hole in my chest. I should probably get that looked at.

Really good so far havent come across one thats had this good of a story for awile definitely found it funny what videos Lisa was looking at and cant wait for lucy to make her move 

cant wait for more