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By : ItwasMerlin
  • From Dlydragon on July 16, 2023

    Hello, I wanted to know when you were going to update the story, if you feel that it is taking too long you can rush things, have Astrid confront mildew when she finds out that heather was fucked by him, and have mildew intelligently ask her if she is jealous, and then Approaching Astrid, she begins to kiss her neck, telling her that if she is not jealous then she will reject him at that moment and she would never touch her again, but for Astrid to remain silent because she knows that deep down she wants it and at that moment turn her neck allowing her to kiss mildew more, and right there mildew doesn't delay him any longer and takes her to bed where he will finally fuck her completely and she gladly accepts it, completely blocking out any hint of guilt, letting the old man have her once and for all


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  • From ninesenshi on February 19, 2023

    Chap19 very sexy, glad to see you posting again.  I'd like to see more Valka, including her getting knocked up.  Also can Mildew have sex with Astrid's dragon?  That seems like a good way to get in her head...


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  • From ANON - Danny on October 05, 2022

    Please update :(


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  • From ANON - on October 05, 2022

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  • From ANON - Peter on September 09, 2022

    Hello, I wanted to know if you still intend to update the story, you left us with the intrigue. I want to see how astrid ends up submitting to mildew and how the old man will enjoy that triumph of having the beautiful blonde at his disposal at her own wish.


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  • From ANON - Dragonfly on August 13, 2022

    hello, I hope you are better now, a family loss is one of the worst things that can happen, I patiently wait for the next chapter, if you do not plan to abandon this one, of course. Would you dare to give an approximate date for the next chapter? 

    greetings and good luck.


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  • From ANON - Jimbo on July 27, 2022

    Hey Merlin, good to see you're not giving up. Can't wait for the new chapter, I'd love more Astrid arseplay, maybe dress Astrid up as a maid / cheerleader. Would love to see Heather involved, and a chapter where Mildew fucks Astrid within close proximity to Hiccup would be great. Hope this jogs your mind, really want a new chapter ASAP


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  • From ANON - Merlin on July 15, 2022

    Hi guys merlin here 

    Little update this story has not been abandoned. Unfortunately a family member passed so the mood go write this type of thing isn't exactly high at the moment. Thank you so much for the support though.  

    Please leave ideas or email them to me on merlinitwas@gmail.com to maybe spark my brain . 

     

    Sorry about the wait


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  • From ANON - on July 14, 2022

    We need that update🙏🏽


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  • From ANON - on July 04, 2022

    Merlin, 

    can you at least give us a preview on what is going to happen next?


    like, will Mildew go after Heather? Astrid goes to his hut to ride him again? Or Mildew has sex with everyone; Ruffnut, Valka, Astrid? Astrid mind breaks and goes willingly and secretly?


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  • From ANON - Arsetrid on June 21, 2022

    Don't tell me you've given up


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  • From ANON - on June 13, 2022

    Any news on an update?


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  • From ANON - ZB on June 01, 2022

    Please don't give up on this story it's so good 


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  • From ANON - on May 30, 2022

    When Astrid finally submit to Mildew, are you going to make Mildew's fantasy in chapter 5 real?


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  • From ANON - ! on May 28, 2022

    Please say next chapter is coming soon 


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