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Reviews for Revelations of Destiny

By : Kellendros
  • From ANON - Josh84 on July 05, 2008
    Not much I can think to say, other than this was another great chapter.

    Got to learn more about Shego and her past, which is always interesting. It just amazes me how much she's sharing with Kim, at least so soon. And Kim's doing well with controlling her reactions, not wanting to set the green woman off or push her away.

    Okay, going off topic now; thanks for mentioning my deviantArt page. More fanart is one the way. I've just been getting sidetracked lately.

    Again, great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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  • From firelarc on July 04, 2008
    wow nice thing about the tan.
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  • From ANON - dragonwings7373 on June 06, 2008
    One of the best storys ive red so far, and also one of teh most well written storys too. I cant wait to see what will ahppen next UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! =)
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  • From ANON - Josh84 on June 02, 2008
    Damn, damn... DAMN! That is some home Shego's got! That's my dream home--No, scratch that, even in my wildest dreams, my home would look nothing like this one. It may not be a private island home like Seniors have, but it just as good if not better. It's certainly big enough. If you weren't already in the kind of shape that Kim and Shego are in now, you'd get there quick traveling all through that house... if you want to even call it that! =P

    And the gym was, as Kim put it, just amazing! It's, in my opinion, even better than Corscan's gym!

    Outstanding chapter, Lord Kellendros! As always, very descriptive and very detailed. Some very funny moments. Loved the little moment with the cat. Hilarious. :) Looking forward to how things turn out with Kim and Shego now living together. And I'm looking forward to finding out why this place seems familiar to Kim.
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  • From ANON - me on June 02, 2008
    great chapter, you really have a knack for description, one thing tat made me lol was your description of the fruit trees as giant bonsai, an oxymoron if I ever saw one. Your last sentance was tricky, before immersing herself in..relaxing! I love it. this place must freaking huge though, bet you'd like to live there eh?
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  • From PureEvilOne on May 19, 2008
    The KimShego arc of this story is shaping up nicely. As always the use of the characters is excellent. The more reference it the more I want a full history of Lynn and Corscan. Keep uo the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Akanama on May 16, 2008
    Damn this is one hell of a story. I'm intently looking forward to more. Please Please keep it up.
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  • From Wispr on May 09, 2008
    Poor Kim, really does seem like Corscan did something to her mentally. From how Kim was acting at the beginning of the story she was showing classic symptoms of someone suffering sexual abuse. You are doing a fantastic job of portraying how sick Corscan is and her ability in twisting Kim's mental outlook.

    Wispr
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  • From Wispr on May 08, 2008
    Another chilling chapter. Your writing really captures the horror of what Kim will have to submit to. It's very apparent that Kim must by under some kind of influence, you don't accept gifts from some one who is manipulating/forcing you into an intimate encounter. I"ll be back later to read more, just can't handle to much at one time.

    Nasty but very good story.

    Wispr
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  • From ANON - Newbee on May 08, 2008
    I fucking love this story!!!
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  • From ANON - Josh84 on May 07, 2008
    So, she finally did it. Kim made the decision to move in with Shego and see how things turn out. I can tell the next few chapters are definitely going to be interesting.

    "I don’t want you spending too much time with any of those European boys, you understand?" If James only knew! :p ;)

    One mistake I noticed -- ...Kim was relived to see Shego slouch down... -- "relieved."

    Another great chapter, LK. And congratulations! Your story has now reached 50 chapters... and it's still going! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, and the start of Kim and Shego's new living arrangements. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - me on May 07, 2008
    Yay, 9 liked this chapter alot.
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  • From ANON - me on May 07, 2008
    That was wicked, wade is so cool. I bet he has a dozen ps3s hooked up to make a supercomputer. they can do that. I just hope wade found something awesome.
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  • From ANON - me on May 07, 2008
    That was really brilliant, the dance scene was awesome, i swear it took like 15 pages. And Shego's new flipping and stuff was really nice, more of that is what I want to see. Oh idea! how bout a giant game of tag, parkour wise? that'd be something alright ^^ Great chapter as always ^^
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  • From ratoncita on May 03, 2008
    you evil tease

    you leave me woundering what Kim is going to do the you add all this strangeness with wade

    I hat you and like you so much right now.,I can't wait to see what happens
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