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Reviews for Revelations of Destiny

By : Kellendros
  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2010
    Interesting group of agents Betty's working with.

    Curious about Agent Gallows' missing AV rig. Kim and Shego were too busy tending to the pale-skinned woman's wounds to even notice the rig, let alone take or destroy it. Something else is going on here, that's for sure.

    Going a little off topic, I know there was no mention of her here, but does GJ not know of Corscan or Kim's involvement with the woman over the past few months? I would figure that they had at least some knowledge about that.

    Anyway, things are definitely getting heavy.

    Terrific chapter! Awaiting the next one with anticipation.
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  • From ANON - michael on April 07, 2010
    Awesome story. I read this over the course of 2 days and I am really hooked. Good character development and plot and general all around naughtiness. Cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Tomo on March 25, 2010
    I can't tell you how excited I was to see that this story had updated. It is easily one of my favourite fanfictions. I'm looking forward to see what you do next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2010
    Awesome.

    AWESOME.

    THIS CHAPTER IS FUCKING --yes, pun intended :P-- AWSOME!!!

    Now, I catch the double meaning of the title. Meaning One - This event has been, indeed, a long time coming. We, your faithful readers, have been waiting for this moment since C-33; 36 chapters building. And, for me, it has been well. Worth. The. Wait! :D

    And Meaning Two... well, there's no need to really elaborate. It just took the ladies a long, looonnng time! ;) Again, worth the wait.

    And the "69" pun... I got it... at the very end... after you explained it. :P

    Fantastic chapter, LK! Looking forward to the next one.

    Thank you so much for the KIGO!
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  • From ANON - classic cowboy on March 06, 2010
    I know I've told you before, but I have to say that I am a huge fan of K/R, that's usually what I write and what I read. I very seldom read anything Kigo.

    BUT

    all I can say to this particular chapter. two simple, simple words...
    Holy. Shit.

    that was awesome.
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  • From skoshi4 on March 06, 2010
    Sooo the girls FINALLY did it. You made Kim's little romp with Corscan look positively restrained.
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  • From Zarrthtion on February 07, 2010
    Ok i've read this damn thing like 7 times and i still love it i just can't wait for more its a great Fic and among My top 10 Fics on this site its still Number one in the KP section by far PLZZZZZ!!!!! write more
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  • From skoshi4 on December 05, 2009
    Wooy. GJ's using explosive bullets now? Definitely not cricket.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2009
    Now that's a revelation: Shego, despite the impossible odds, is falling in love with Kim. I half-expected to happen. This will definitely make things more interesting.

    Talk about an ordeal. Both Kim and Shego were able to make it back to the hotel, and though it's not 100% certain, it looks like Shego may pull through without a trip to the hospital. Her powers never cease to amaze.

    Meanwhile, the GJ agents are probably going to start searching Paris for Shego. And if the agent that got his arm blown off survived, that will make matters worse, as he's seen Kim Possible's face.

    And for now, it looks like telling Ron her secret is now fallen to the bottom of Kim's list for now, her main focus on Shego's health.

    Good chapter, LK.
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  • From ANON - graypheonix on December 05, 2009
    Hmmm, I do like the idea for Sheego's regeneration, it works like a massively accelerated metabolism, though it's not perfect either, so a good doctor is needed for any patch-ups. In spite of that, it seems to work, and it's a fairly decent concept. Hell, I feel like I want to steal it myself.

    Otherwise, it's a little awkward, but that comes from pushing through a chapter so fast (and short) but it doesn't matter if it gets the point across. All this chapter was for was just transition and showing a few vital points, compressed as much as possible. So, not half bad.

    Still, continue to update, will ya? Definitely look forward to the next update, maybe 2 updates before the new year, but I doubt it will be that much. Otherwise, kickass. Update again soon, will ya? Ja ne.
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  • From PurpleLizard on December 05, 2009
    Wow. I haven't finished it yet, but... wow.
    In three words, damn, bloody, brilliant.
    I can't write more, cuz I haven't even caught up yet. But I didn't want to wait.
    This is the kind of story I hope to one day write.
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  • From ANON - graypheonix on December 02, 2009
    okay, that is, damn. Seriously, this downright sucks! Still, need to read more, update again soon, ja ne,.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 02, 2009
    [Screams] I should have seen that coming! You did the same thing before with Alice Cooper concert; Shego and Kim have a fun evening of Rock and Roll, only for it to end with them having to fight Motor Ed and his bikers! But more about that later.

    From the beginning - the bathroom scene... ah, no, on second thought, not even going to touch that one. :p

    On the balcony, Kim confessed that she's missing Corscan, which is understandable. The sex aside, Corscan did teach Kim many things to help her become the girl she is now, making the woman an important person in Kim's life. And Shego was actually understanding about the whole thing. Finished off with an affectionate hug... a touching moment.

    I also found Kim's little speech somewhat touching. She had a chance to blow off some sexual steam with an old "friend", and yet she refused because she is determined to first work things out between her and Shego.

    I don't see why Kim got so defensive about the hot bathroom sex thing. After all, she's been open with Shego about things that are a little more... intense?... so HBS doesn't seem like much. [Sighs] Yet, it was enough for Kim to "punish" Shego for pushing it.

    All in all, Shego actually enjoyed her punishment, to a degree. I sure as hell did! :D

    But alas, once again all good things come to an end. And now the bad ones begin. Shego getting into a fight with Global Justice agents, getting shot - though it definitely could have been worse had Kim not jumped in. Then, the agent turns the gun on Kim, with the intent of putting one right between her eyes, and Shego firing off a couple green energy blasts at the man. And finally... CLIFFHANGER!!!

    Well, despite the nasty turn of events, I'm not too worried. I'm betting that Shego's energy bolts will reach the agent before he pulls the trigger. And I also get the feeling that, given the circumstances, his fate will be not be as fortunate as his comrades.

    Great chapter, Lord Kellenros! Awaiting the next one!
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  • From ANON - classiccowboy on December 02, 2009
    not quite what I was expecting but still some good character development and another cliffhanger.

    I'm still biting at the bit wanting to know how many gaskets Ron blows when he finds out Kim's moved from one villian to another.

    on top of that now I gotta know how they get out of this one. Keep it up and update soon!
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  • From skoshi4 on November 28, 2009
    Well, look who's back! That was a surprise, looks like Corscan was really holding back after all when she fought with Kim.
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