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Reviews for Slow Heat

By : Spleef
  • From ANON - Ryoko on June 30, 2012
    Dammit Aang. Lol, Zuko's so cute when he's jealous. And I like Chit Sang, he's pretty chill.
    Haha, update. 8] You gotta.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on June 27, 2012
    keep up the awesome and brilliant work cant wait to read more that was soooo good!
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  • From ANON - Ryoko on June 27, 2012
    I just love the way you portray these characters. Each and every one of 'em. Ahh, people like you make me so glad that we have fanfiction. Please continue, this stuff is gold.
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  • From ANON - MMM on June 27, 2012
    I just wanted to mention that I enjoyed reading about Toph and Zuko's training sessions. Even though this is a Zuko/Katara story, I greatly appreciate the characterization of side characters in relation to future plot development. Chapter two was very detailed and entertaining IMO.
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  • From ANON - Ryoko on June 21, 2012
    Oh my god. You're writing is exquisite! I mean, not just the dialogue, but everything! Everyone's spot-on in character! You are extremely talented.

    Aw, man. I wish I could write a longer review, but I'm too stunned for words. Having you just might/may be the huge reason why Zutara wins. They're just too good together!

    *evil laugh* Moar sex scenes. 8D
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  • From ANON - Madame Thome' on June 08, 2012
    Maybe just maybe his friendship with her brother Sokka will help in restoring balance in their relationship. His dream is so sweet and he is so kind to her in it. Oh oh not good to be so interested in the bloody cloth- of course he is probably totally in the dark about periods. Add sheer embarressment to what she already feels and you are looking at leave me alone bigtime. Isn't that the truth sometimes -- we have all these different feelings about one thing and don't know why.

    Prehaps some time seperated will be good for both Zuko and Katara. Love her farewell statement. Poor Zuko he just hasn't a clue. But getting a better reason for his inner fire and centering himself will help. Katara may even miss his pesty ways while he is gone.
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  • From ANON - Madame Thome' on June 08, 2012
    Having a relationship with a serial killer like Hamma would do a deep one on your psyche. She really liked the woman and Hamma loved her as much as she was able. Kudos to Zuko for knowing when to back off for a while. But this guy is red hot for Katara and soon he is back to cannot leave well enough alone.

    Ah sneak up on her in the strawberry patch and crash into her good seduction technique. What a fericious battle these two have before they turn it around into a passionate mating session. Katara sure enjoys it all night long but the morning light brings the shame of reality for her. Poor Zuko he just does not have any understanding of this. Toph is wonderful asking all the right questions at just the right times.

    Very, very passionate and I got a big thrill from all the drama and romance.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2012
    Just got to chapter 10 & I love this story. I can't wait to read more. Toph is hilarious & the relationship that you have developing between Zuko & Katara is great. I love the emotions that you put them through.
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  • From ANON - Lily on January 05, 2012
    I really liked this chapter. :) I find it a bit funny that Chit Sang said "My generosity comes with a price" in the series, though... since it's kind of contradictory.... (coughs)

    As for the spelling of Chit Sang's name... I think, maybe they wanted to spell it like "Chi Tsang" but in China, they don't pronounce T's that come before S's.

    And you know, you've probably gotten this review before. I feel like a dick.

    Peace.

    ~Lil
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  • From ANON - Tari on September 12, 2011
    I really enjoy your story but chapter 14 is soo messed up it can't be read
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  • From ANON - FaerieInCombatBoots on August 21, 2011
    Thank you SO much for the alternate ending, though I did like Toph having Zuko's kid in the epilogue.

    And Ty Lee totally seducing Aang.
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  • From ANON - FaerieInCombatBoots on August 21, 2011
    Is it wrong that I laughed when Katara crushed the strawberry with her iron box? I couldn't help it. Then I hoped that Zuko got all the bits out, cause if he forgot some...I don't want to think about what would happen.
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  • From ANON - FaerieInCombatBoots on August 21, 2011
    Spleef, I've finally gotten around to reading this and OMFG *foams at the mouth*, I LOVE IT. The story, the smut, everyone's in character. This story is giving me a literary boner.
    ALSO...Lo and LI remind me of Patty and Selma from the Simpsons. Just had to share that with you.
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  • From ANON - FaerieInCombatBoots on August 20, 2011
    I can't read chapter 14 cause the words are all squished together. Otherwise, this story is epic. Really epic.
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  • From ANON - TheJorg on July 28, 2011
    I loved this entire series of stories from beginning to end. By far some of the finest fanfiction around. Don't ever stop writing!

    I actually liked the original ending better than the alternate. But then, I'm always a big fan of tragedy.
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