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Reviews for The Search for Serpentor's Bride.

By : Solaris
  • From AkadeannaHawkSK on February 11, 2010
    The story is great I look forward to reading more! You've left us hanging!
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  • From ANON - JasonLeeScottFan on October 09, 2009
    This is Awesome! I love it! Please update ASAP as I can't wait to see what happens when Joanna meets Serpentor and if he will actually fall in love with her and vice versa!
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  • From ANON - Ox King on September 05, 2009
    I can't believe you wont finish this awesome story. Please rethink about it.
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  • From brainfear on May 10, 2009
    Updating this at all?

    ch6
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  • From ANON - kyushi2002 on February 09, 2008
    I like it so far, please contue the story
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  • From ANON - padawan_jinx on December 06, 2007
    Well, after YEARS of missing this cartoon, and yes I watched all the original air-dates, I must say I forgot most of the characters. However, your story had brought many memories back and I wanted to say EXCELLENT job! THere were a few continuity errors, but the story is strong enough to overcome that. As for Joanna and Serpentors first meeting, I think you have written a very strong female character and think she will just scoff at him and look at him like he's dirt. Maybe he can try to woo her and since his gang fear him, they all stay away so he can make a lovestruck fool of himself. *giggles* Maybe too much wine. LOL Anyway, it is your story and I cant wait to see where you decide to take it. Thank you for bringing back memories and writing this facinating story! PJ
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  • From DALV on August 09, 2007
    Very awsome story! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Mermaid Ninja on May 24, 2007
    The Joes better hurry before Serpentor REALLY cripples her!!!
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  • From ANON - Dini on May 05, 2007
    Hey when are you going to update this?? I like your suggestion...I think Joanna should also struggle against Serpantor...I don't see her as a willing bride especially after they killed her father!
    Great story so please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - vixey on January 23, 2006
    great story. cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Emily Crane on December 14, 2005
    First of all, I'd like to say that's it's great that someone out there is writing a Serpentor fic, as they are sadly lacking on the world wide web. Keep up the good work.
    In your last chapter (ch 6) you mentioned that you were looking for suggestions as to their first meeting. Well, here's my two cents worth.

    During the 80's GI JOE continum, Serepntor was suave, and charasmatic- the Baroness fell for him for a brief time; must to the Disgust of Destro
    The current GI JOE continum (put out by Image and Devil's Due publishing) choose to focus on his military bearing; his ability to inspire loyalty and enthusium-only to use it to furthur his own agendas.

    My personal viewpoint is that Serpentor has too much ego and conceit to rape a woman, his pride wouldn't allow it.

    In regards to your story, I think I'd be reallly funny to have him try to seduce Joanna, only to have it blow up in his face.
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  • From ANON - Storyseeker on December 08, 2005
    The idea of Serprentor's biological clock ticking cracks me up. You look like you had fun writing this one. A little constructive criticism: Watch Joanne to make sure she doesn't slide into Marysueism. Otherwise, keep up the prolific work! I await the next installment. Grin!
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