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MLP: Promise of Love	By : Matrilwood Category: +M through R > My Little Pony Views: 4245 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, nor the characters from it. Nyx is not a canon part of MLP: FiM but is still considered part of MLP fandom. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

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MLP: Promise of Love (Applebloom x Nyx)
By Dashie Lover
It was a bright sunny day; Applebloom and Nyx were frolicking on the outskirts of Apple-Acres. Applebloom tried to catch Nyx, lowering her body, tail wiggling in the air. She jumped at Nyx. But the black unicorn was too quick and she dodged her friend’s tackle. “Can’t catch me!” Nyx exclaimed playfully.
“Oh really?” Applebloom jumped again and Nyx dodged, however, this time Applebloom anticipated Nyx’s movement, who ended up dodging strait into Applebloom’s clutches. Nyx was knocked onto the ground, Applebloom lay on top of her, breathing heavily. “You were saying?” Applebloom teased, still panting from exertion. She raised her head and looked into Nyx’s eyes, the moment she did her expression immediately changed from playful delight to confusion and awe.
“Applebloom? What’s wrong? Something on my face?” Nyx touched her face and was horrified when she realised her glasses had been knocked off. She looked around to see them lying several feet away. Without her glasses her eyes changed back into those of emerald dragon eyes, becoming narrower and the white of her eye was a lighter shade of green. She gave a desperate look at Applebloom, who was almost transfixed by Nyx’s eyes.
“Whoa, what happened to your eyes?” Applebloom asked excitedly.
Nyx quickly pushed Applebloom off and hurriedly put her glasses back on. She turned around; her eyes had returned to ‘normal’, “It was nothing forget it.” Nyx couldn’t look into Applebloom’s own hazel-brown eyes.
Deducing what was going on, Applebloom walked to Nyx’s side and removed her glasses, revealing Nyx’s dragon eyes, “Why do you want to hide your beautiful eyes?” she asked, placing the glasses onto the ground.
“Because if people see my eye’s they’ll think I’m Night…” Nyx rethought what she was about to say, the last thing she needed was to put a negative thought in her friend’s head, “Because people will think I’m different.”
Applebloom thought about it, “Just like Zecora.” Nyx gave Applebloom a puzzled look, “When Zecora first came to Ponyville, nobody trusted her because she was different, and now everyone knows her, everything is good.”
“It’s not the same as that.”

“Sure it is,” Applebloom said enthusiastically, “Come, I’m gonna help you break out of your shell once and for all.”

“NO!” exclaimed Nyx. Applebloom stopped and looked at her with surprise. A tear ran down Nyx’s face and she looked at the ground, “If anyone else sees my eyes, they’re going to judge me very badly. You don’t because you don’t realise who I resemble. And if you did… You would probably judge me too.”
Applebloom slowly walked up to and sat next to Nyx, kissing her on the cheek. A red line on Nyx’s face broke the perfect onyx of her skin. “Why would I ever judge you?”
Nyx looked into Applebloom’s Hazel-Brown eyes, her friend would stay loyal no matter what, but others wouldn’t share her opinion. “You have to promise me, never to tell anyone else about my eyes.”
“I promise…” Applebloom thought for a second, a small grin appeared on her face, “In fact, why don’t we make it a love promise?” she asked enthusiastically.
“A what promise?” a puzzled look reappeared on Nyx’s face.
“A love promise,” Applebloom huddled up right next to Nyx and nuzzled her neck. Nyx’s blush deepened. “It’s where you do something very special for the one you love, and it’s a way of making a promise to them.”
Nyx wasn’t sure what Applebloom was talking about, but she nodded, “Ok… So what do we do?”
“Just lay on your back.” Nyx was confused by all of this, but she did so obediently. Applebloom positioned herself on top of Nyx, she looked into Nyx’s emerald-green eyes then she lowered her head, kissing Nyx on the lips.
Nyx wanted to pull away, but something stopped her. Her emerald eyes closed, the strange feeling she’d never felt before. Applebloom caressed her hooves up Nyx’s body then slid them under the unicorn’s jacket. After a second, Applebloom pulled away, the look of shock crossed her face, her jaw open. After a few moments silence, Applebloom spoke “You’ve got wings too?” Nyx looked away and nodded. “Well then take off your jacket, I want to see them.” Applebloom got off Nyx, who stood up and undid her jacket, the moment it was removed, a pair of black wings shot up strait. Nyx momentarily gave her wings a confused look but then looked into Applebloom’s hazel eyes, awe was the emotion she expressed. Applebloom was about to ask why she hid her wings, but realised she already knew the answer. Nyx was an Alicorn. A smile spread across Applebloom’s face, the most beautiful creature she had ever seen and Applebloom had it all to herself. Applebloom walked up and stroked Nyx’s wings gently. Nyx closed her eyes, feeling Applebloom’s hooves comb through her feathers, then Applebloom hugged her, wrapping her arms around Nyx’s neck and kissing her fiercely.
Nyx lost her balance and was forced into a sitting position, Applebloom was pushing into her, kissing her relentlessly. Nyx lost her balance entirely and fell on her back; she lowered her wings to the side just in time to avoid them from getting crumpled, however her wings remained erect, and on the ground she looked like some sort of dark angel.
Applebloom was like a wild beast on top of her, she began licking and kissing Nyx’s body, getting lower with each kiss. Until she reached Nyx’s sweet-spot. Nyx let out a yelp as she felt a wave of pleasure shoot through her body for the first time. Applebloom enjoyed Nyx’s reaction. She turned herself around, placing her groin near Nyx face, and continued to lick Nyx’s spot.
Nyx’s mind was blurred by the sensation she was feeling. She didn’t know what to do, so she just followed Applebloom’s lead. Kissing her groin passionately. Applebloom closed her eyes and let out a soft moan. She could tell Nyx had never done this before; she simply mimicked what Applebloom did. She stuck her tongue deep into Nyx, and a few seconds later, Nyx copied. Nyx was a virgin, at least before Applebloom was through with her. The girls continued to lick and moan heavily. Eventually Nyx arched her back and yelped.
Applebloom licked up the juices, and coaxed Nyx to continue a little longer. Not long after, Applebloom reached orgasm; she closed her eyes and yelped. Nyx flinched in surprise, as the juices spilled over her face.
Applebloom got off Nyx and lay next to her, pushing her body against Nyx’s back. They lay there, snuggling for several minuets. Nyx’s mind was spinning; contemplating what she had just done, what Applebloom had got her to do. Feelings towards Applebloom began to well up inside of her. She didn’t know why, but she didn’t want Applebloom to let her go. She just wanted to lay there with her, forever.
The inevitable eventually happened. Applebloom loosened her grip and stood up. When Nyx slowly rose, Applebloom looked at her and emitted a stifled giggle. “We’d better get you cleaned up.” She said, looking Nyx up and down.
Nyx had dirt and grass all over her back from laying on the ground. Her wings were ruffled and she had juice on her face. Some of the juice had seeped into her hair and headband, which she’d forgotten to remove, causing them to discolour slightly. “You are a dirty, dirty pony,” Applebloom stated in a lowered tone, she then started giggling at her own joke. Nyx gave her a puzzled look. “We’ll sneak off to the river, it’s not far from here,” Applebloom explained, putting Nyx’s jacket on her back and putting on her glasses. The enchantment on the glasses caused Applebloom’s eyes to go strange. Her eyes had become vertical slits and her iris turned white. It was Nyx’s turn to laugh uncontrollably with Applebloom giving her a puzzled look.
Author's Note: This is my first MLP 'FanFin' I decided to stick well within my comfort zone so I could experiment with the pony's biophysical architecture. Also this seems to be the first Applebloom x Nyx shipping (Bragging Rights).
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