Inspecting the Troops | By : Snootiegirl Category: +S through Z > Star Wars: The Clone Wars Views: 30967 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Author's Note: I struggled with this chapter for a couple reasons. First of all, I honestly don't think that Rex and Ahsoka as they are portrayed on TCW would actually share each other sexually with other people. I understand the Clones tend to have a share and share alike philosophy with most everything when it comes to their brothers, but I think that Rex would make an exception for Ahsoka. Therefore, the two of them might seem a little OOC here.
Secondly, I struggled to find a setting in which they could have Kix 'stumble' on them. They would obviously be pretty careful onboard the Resolute, so it had to be somewhere else. I hope you like my choice. I was happy with it once it came to me. OH! And it occurred to me that I am a female writer, writing to a mostly female audience. Therefore, I spend more time obsessing over male bodies than female ones. Sorry 'bout that (not really though). ;)Chapter Six Ahsoka squirmed a little. It was a tight fit, even for her. She couldn't imagine what the troops were feeling. But she pressed on nevertheless, as did they. Recon was better than an all-out firefight anyway. She brushed large, green vines out if her way and wished for the hundredth time that she had a helmet and climate-controlled suit. "There is no sweating. There is only the Force, " she muttered to herself through clenched teeth. Rex, moving right behind her, stifled a chuckle in his helmet. Finally, the sort-of path they were following through dense foliage gave way to larger areas where more sunlight penetrated the canopy. Ahsoka stopped briefly, stepping aside to let her troops move into the wider area, and wiped her forehead. Her hand came away not only sweaty but dirty. For four days, she and her squads had been tracking Sep movements on the jungle planet in the mid-rim. There were no sentient inhabitants on this continent, which made the Council nervous about the Separatist presence. Ahsoka was pleased with the intel they had gathered so far, but her instincts told her there was something else to find. But that meant pressing even further into the forest on foot. Speeders were useless in this terrain, and keeping as low a profile as possible ruled out larties as well. She looked at the sky, noting that darkness was falling quickly again. They needed to find a good place to hunker down for the evening. She centered herself in the Force, and reached out with her senses. She felt no imminent danger in the area. She let out a cleansing breath. "All right, guys," she threw back over her shoulder. "Let's look for a good place to hunker down and get some rack time." The squad fanned out in a regular search pattern. Ahsoka stood with her hands on her hips contemplating another evening sleeping alone. She didn't like it. Not one bit. Not when her warm, hard-bodied Captain was right in front of her. So close she could almost smell him, but too far away to touch in front of other troopers. They needed some alone time this evening. It had been too long . . . Once the properly camouflaged and yet defensible ground had been identified, tents were pitched and dinner was prepared. Small fires were allowable under the trees, but the troopers were careful to keep them small and to snuff them soon after the food was ready. They ate in relative silence, lost in their own thoughts about the mission. Ahsoka watched Kix walk among the men, assessing any small abrasions, bites, or sore muscles to make sure no one was hobbled in any way. She smiled a small smile at his caring and confidence. He was attractive in her eyes for his innate qualities much more than just for his physique. He was almost identical to Rex, but she could pick out some differences, given her intimate knowledge of her Captain. She wondered how those differences would feel under her hands, her lips, other parts of her anatomy. Shaking herself out of her self-induced arousal, she finished her meal quickly and made her way to Rex's side. The two of them automatically turned to face away from anyone else to shield their private words. "I need to wash," Ahsoka informed him. "I'm all sweaty. I want to check out the waterfall that Chopper reported to the east. Accompany me?" Her request was accompanied by a bat of eyelashes. Rex smiled a slow smile. "Of course, Commander," he agreed. "Let me make the rounds of the troopers first. And check in with Kix for a sitrep on any medical concerns." Ahsoka nodded and made some rounds herself in the meantime. Once troopers started settling down into their tents for the night, she and Rex would be able to slip away quietly together. After another hour, both officers were satisfied with the conditions of the camp and its inhabitants. They slipped away separately and met up a short distance from the camp in the direction of the waterfall. The night had cleared revealed twin moons nearly full. Ahsoka kept glancing up at them as they made their way to the edge of the inviting pond at the foot of the falls. The trees receded from the short slightly to give them a small lip where they could shed their clothing and armor and quietly sink into the refreshingly cool waters. The two of them swam around separately for several minutes, relishing the release from their combat clothing and feeling the buoyancy of their bodies as they bobbed and rolled. Ahsoka dove under the water and came up behind the waterfall. Then she swam through the splashing water, emerging like a goddess from the spray. Rex had been waiting for her, and when she was close enough, he scooped her up into his arms. She was slippery from the water, something the two of them were familiar with from their habit of showering together. But her feather-light weight was even lighter in the deep water. "Cyar'ika," he mumbled into her montrals which reverberated the endearment all the way down to her toes. She gave out a moan of relaxation. The water was doing wonders for her mood. She could feel her whole body unfurling from the stress of the march. Fleetingly, she thought they should let all the men come have a short swim in the morning for the same reasons. She decided to talk to Rex about it . . . later. She lifted her legs around his trim hips, bringing them closer together as they bobbed in the water. Both of his legs and one arm kept them afloat. The other strong arm clutched her to his chest, just short of crushing her. Her breasts flattened into his pectorals and their nipples brushed against each other. Ahsoka attacked his neck with her lips, kissing, licking, nibbling, laving the little bite marks. She wouldn't leave actual marks this time, she decided. Just give him the sensations she knew he craved. Moving back to shallower water, Rex's feet touched the sandy bottom. Now he could encircle her with both arms, one slipping down to massage her peerless butt and her strong thighs that gripped his hips. With the water between them, he couldn't tell if she was wet yet from their touch, but he knew she could feel his beginning arousal against her. She let him know she felt it in the second moment when she reached under her own thigh to touch him lightly. She held him against the skin of her cheek where it met her upper thigh, feeling the heat of his skin against hers despite the cool water. They had switched to kissing each other deeply by now. Their mouths opened and accepted each other in as if a long-lost part of themselves. Their tongues entwined and probed to determine if there was one last part of the caverns that were unfamiliar. They switched sides, brushing their noses, and continued the exploration. Both made sounds of pleasure, lost to the wind and the waterfall noise. "Make love to me, Rex," Ahsoka whispered into the shell of his ear when she finally broke away to breathe. "We've never tried it outside before." His low chuckle surprised her. "We've never had the opportunity before--living in outer space and all," he replied. She smiled at the shared experience. It was true. They were rarely in a position on a planet where they weren't surrounded by hundreds of people and/or life-threatening circumstances that hardly allowed for eating much less romantic dalliances. And the rest of the time, they were on the move in their rocketing metal vehicles from theater to theater. He began to walk toward the opposite shore from where they had entered the pool. The moonlight was stronger on this side, and he wanted to see it sparkling in her eyes as they had sex. He was reaching waist depth when Ahsoka suddenly pushed away from his chest. "Wait," she breathed. "I want to watch you come out of the water. Please put me down." Rex was perplexed by the request but complied anyway. Ahoska swam swiftly to the shore, pulled herself out of the water, turned to face him, and then gave him more instructions. "Go back until the water's as high as your neck. I want to see every sparkling inch of you emerge from the water, glistening," she directed with a large smile and a lick of her lips. She was going to visually feast on her man. Now understanding her intent, Rex made his way back into the pool. When he reached the depth she indicated, he was just barely out of the shaft of moonlight. He began to walk slowly forward toward his prize. Ahsoka watched carefully as his body was revealed to her. First his strong shoulders with muscles that he rolled back, giving her the full treatment. Then he lifted his arms up over his head and stretched his whole torso, most of it still underwater, but the effect was still mesmerizing to her. She watched the water roll down his wrists and hands to his forearms and biceps. Some of the drops made it all the way back to his shoulders; some slid off sinewy curves before that, returning to the pool with small circles. He kept up his slow pace and finally his chest appeared. His arms lowered to rub experimentally across his pectorals. He closed his eyes and dropped his head back to his shoulders for a moment, stilling his steps. He followed the contours of his chest with his hand the way that he knew she liked to do herself. The effect was very arousing for Ahsoka. She couldn't suppress the needy moan that escaped her throat. He smiled to himself when he heard it. Resuming his former position with his head upright and his hands in the water in front of him, he walked a few more steps until his torso was revealed. Again, a hand wiped at the water droplets across the dips and valleys of his body. He even circled his navel. His other hand moved in the opposite direction, up over his pecs again and to the back of his neck, massaging the corded muscles there. Ahsoka was a live wire. She never imagined that Rex would do these things for her. Pose and primp and drive her crazy with his sexy movements. It was like a strip-tease where he was stripping off the water instead of clothing. When she heard his answering moan, her pupils dilated even further. She could see the beginning of the trail of hair below his navel. She longed to lick it but knew that her chance was coming soon. His powerful legs continued his trek. As pleased as he was to be granting his lover this arousing display, his own arousal was being kept in check deliberately. His cock was still pointing toward his toes so that it didn't burst from the water tip-up. He wanted to give her the chance to tip things upward. Therefore, his dark hair appeared first, and then inch by inch of him, trailing the cool water droplets. Ahsoka licked her lips again. She could taste him in the back of her throat. She was a little surprised to find him less than fully erect, but she had faith that she could quickly remedy that condition. She watched the water softly flow off of him in ways that she was quickly wishing she could as well. To be the fluid that followed those contours would be heavenly, she thought. His thighs were next. And again, she loved seeing the hair that sprouted from his legs. Hair so fascinated her. And Rex's hair was especially intoxicating. On this part of his body, she could see little trails through which the water was running and parting the hair on his legs. His calves emerged, and she marveled at his strength. Then he stopped. He stood with his hands on his hips now, looking at her. "And now what will you do for me, love?" he asked in a low voice, colored with his desire but still controlled. He lifted an eyebrow at her. "Come here and find out," she invited. As he approached her, she scrambled up the shoreline but not out of the moonlight. Her skin looked silver, her montrals black and white--he knew from experience her arousal had turned the blue markings to black. But the contrast was even more stunning in the moonlight. The white of her seemed pearlescent, shimmering with its own light. He pulled himself up onto the edge where she had sat watching him. She had her back to him still, but her gait had changed. She was swaying her hips a lot more than she usually did. When he settled into the soft grass, reclined on his side and legs stretched out, she cast a look over her shoulder to see if he was ready. Then she made a quick pirouette on her toes, ending facing him. She began a dance for him, using her hands on herself as he had on himself. She mimicked his favorite caresses and could clearly see that she was already having an effect on him. She continued to writhe and sway to the beat of her own heart, which was rapidly increasing--and not just from the exercise. Executing a particularly bold move with her derrière in the cool air and her head between her spread legs, she spotted movement on the opposite shore. Her senses told her there was no danger, and in the next moment she saw why. Kix emerged from the curtain of leaves, half divested of his armor already. When he spotted her, he stopped dead and his eyes widened. What she couldn't tell was that his cock also stiffened almost painfully. He felt so jealous of Rex in that moment. He had known for a while that his Captain and Commander were involved. And it had piqued his interest. Until seeing her lascivious display in the sparkling moonlight though, he hadn't felt the surge of envy that now clouded his brain. She was magnificent--and not just sexually. The way she moved; the way she fought; the way she cared. These were the things that drew him to her. Lucky di'kut, he thought. He sank down into the grass to enjoy what he could of the show until Rex made him move. Ahsoka apparently wasn't so inclined. She kept up her movements knowing she had an audience of two now. He was entranced by her adventurous behavior. He had never imagined she would be so open about her body despite the way she usually dressed. She was always professional. He had honestly wondered if some of his brothers saw her as just one of the guys instead of a female. In fact, he remembered when she had become acutely female for him. They had been in the middle of yet another firefight when she was hit by some stray shrapnel in the thigh. Right there, with blaster bolts whizzing by their heads incessantly, he had held that lovely lithe appendage in his hands as he removed the metal, cleaned the wounds, and bandaged her. She had kept her eyes on the ground, seeming embarrassed about the intimacy implied by his touch on her upper leg. He said nothing that didn't have to do with his task, but his mind was caught on her soft skin and slender leg. The impression of her femininity had never left him. And now all of her femininity was on display. He knew by now that she had seen him and was pleased by his gaze roving over her as she moved. After a few more acrobatic moves, she sank to her hands and knees and crawled toward Rex's reclined form. She brushed her lips against his ear, looked directly at Kix with her enormous eyes, and smiled seductively. All of it shot directly to Kix's groin once more. He couldn't hear their words, but the fact that Rex didn't immediately scramble to his feet and order the Sergeant away told him that his presence was at least being tolerated. He watched Ahsoka roll Rex onto his back and straddle his hips. She leaned down for a lingering kiss before turning toward the medic. She beckoned with her long fingers. Kix wasted no time shedding the rest of his armor. He dove into the cool pool and broke the surface halfway toward them. He measured his pace then, still unsure about Rex's reaction. Ahsoka watched a second display of water dropping off of a distinctly male body and couldn't help licking her lips again. When Kix reached the edge nearest the other two, he stayed in the water awaiting further instruction, nervously shifting from foot to foot. His anticipation of participating, however limited that might be, was near to bursting. She stood up off of Rex, and walked toward Kix with the wiggle in her hips. He couldn't help his eyes falling to her hips to appreciate her. His hands reached out tentatively to land softly on her curves, all the time expecting to be reprimanded. Ahsoka stepped up to him on a small raised section of shoreline. With the added height, she was almost eye to eye with him. Then she put all of his doubts to rest when she leaned up and took possession of his mouth with hers. She had learned a lot in her time with Rex, feeling comfortable enough not only to experiment but to also ask Rex what he liked. Of course she didn't expect Kix to be exactly like Rex. Not at all. But she was entering new territory with two men at the same time. She wanted to take it slowly and see where things ended up. She brought her hands up to cup his cheeks as she slowed the kiss. She heard Rex clear his throat behind her, reminding her that she had another man awaiting her charms. She pulled her lips away from Kix, smiled at him as his dazed eyes opened, and turned to smile over her shoulder as well. "Patience, Captain," she said in a sultry voice. Rex was still lying on his back in the grass with his hands folded behind his head. He looks delicious in the moonlight, she thought. She was truly looking forward to their union after days spent in each other's company but unable to even brush their lips together. Her hand slid into Kix's, and she pulled his steps forward with her onto the grass. They walked around Rex's head, Kix studiously avoiding the other man's sightline. He kept his eyes on the beauty attached to his hand. He studied the lines of her moving muscles, half clinically as a medic, half as a man with a raging hard-on in need of some female attention. When she had him where she wanted him, she turned and leaned her whole naked frame into his. Now she only came up to his pectorals, but she took the opportunity to nip at one of his dark nipples. He groaned as his head sunk back onto his corded shoulders. Ahsoka's eyes slid down to catch Rex's. She wasn't exactly sure how she wanted to proceed. Although they had discussed including someone else, they hadn't gotten as far as 'logistics'. She turned back to Kix and looked up into his eyes now. "Slowly," she whispered to him. He nodded, understanding her trepidation as he felt his own. Ahsoka kneeled back down into the grass next to Rex's reclined form. She placed her free hand onto his stomach and began making small circles. With the other hand, she tugged Kix down onto his knees next to her. He reclined back to mirror Rex's position. Hmmm, she thought, looking from one to the other. Now this is a sandwich. Once Kix was settled, Ahsoka swung her leg back over Rex to straddle him. She released Kix's hand and bent forward to place both hands on either side of Rex's neck. Then she claimed his lips again. His hands settled on her butt and pulled against her to create some friction. Kix licked his lips and bided his time. "Mmmmm," moaned Ahsoka against the more familiar lips. She would know Rex's taste anywhere. "Now, I believe we were just about . . . here," she continued as she pressed herself down against his throbbing erection. Her eyes repeated her earlier request to make love to her. Rex guided her hips up and angled his own hips to place himself just at her vaginal opening. He could feel the wet of her arousal as he circled his goal. Then he began to slide, bit by bit, into her. She relaxed into his motion and in no time, he was fully sheathed. They moved for a few moments before Ahsoka turned to Kix again. "Kiss me," she said. The medic raised his upper body to reach her. His hands cupped her cheeks reverently, and he began to tease her. Upper lip, then lower lip. Then the sides of her full lips. He wanted to savor all aspects of those plump twins on her face that had inspired many fantasies. His cock jumped a little at the thought of some of those more brazen fantasies. Perhaps tonight would fulfill one or two. But right now, he was just enjoying what he had in front of him. Her arm had moved around his neck to help her hold on as she bounced. He could feel the strength in the slender appendage that was so different from the Clone arms he was used to examining. Ahsoka continued rocking over Rex's body, as one of his hands snaked up to cup a bare breast. Kix slid an answering hand down her lekku to find the other breast. He deepened their kiss as her welcoming mouth parted. Ahsoka could feel tingles fluttering up and down her body from her lekku to her toes. It was like Rex had more hands and lips with which to pleasure her. The thought was very arousing indeed. She pulled away from Kix's lips only to seek out Rex's. As she bent over his supine form, Kix began a slow and soft caress of her head tail. He let her own motions up and down on Rex's cock move the lekku through his fingers. She was making more insistent sounds now, releasing Rex's lips to allow him to kiss her cheeks and neck. Her speed increased to match her frantic breathing. "Rex," she moaned as she felt her nipples stimulated by his firm chest. "Come for me, my love," Rex whispered into her ear. After a few more strokes, aided by Rex's answering thrusting, Ahsoka began quivering in a manner he knew was beyond her control. Her breath was loud and rasping as she shuddered endlessly on his body. Kix felt electricity shoot through his skin as he watched her in this most intimate moment. He was honored to be a part of it--to have had a hand in helping her to the precipice. Finally, she collapsed bonelessly onto her lover. Kix withdrew his hand and waited to see what he would be asked to do next. As far as he was concerned, he had no wishes tonight. This was all about Ahsoka's pleasure. And he knew that he would derive plenty for himself from hers. Rex kissed her montrals softly and wrapped her up in his arms to try to ward off any impending chill from the sweat on her skin exposed to the cool air. She lifted her head and kissed him deeply but slowly for long moments. He still had not exited her body. In fact, feeling him still deeply ensconced inside her welcoming folds rekindled her energy for another round. Rex looked askance at Kix. He had no intention of letting Kix have sex with Ahsoka--not yet. But, he thought, perhaps they could accommodate him otherwise. Whispering into her ear again, Rex laid out his thoughts. Ahsoka giggled and nodded. Then she carefully turned herself around to face his feet, never losing contact with his body inside her. Once there, he grasped her hips, bent his knees, and quickly flipped her over onto all fours--again never losing the intimate contact of their genitals. Kix watched their maneuvering with awe. Ahsoka had to look back over her shoulder now to see Kix's face. She smiled what might be classified an 'evil' smile and again beckoned to him with one crooked finger. Kix lost no time in scrambling toward her. She guided him onto his knees in front of her with a firm hand on his manhood. He sunk down with a sigh. Rex began to move slowly within her body once more, running his hands up and down her back and teasing the tip of her head tail. Ahsoka used her hand on Kix to boost him up to full hardness. He sat with this knees in the grass and his hands on his hips. She was disappointed that he didn't want to touch her. "It's ok to touch me," she told him as she looked up into his wary eyes. In fact, to help him along, she pushed herself up against Rex's chest, never losing her grip on Kix's cock. She pulled him a few shuffling paces toward her and began kissing his neck. She noted how his scent was different from Rex's. Different soap, yes, but underneath that, his body spoke of medicine and medical bays. He was also still damp from his swim, and she was able to lick some stray drops off of his skin. She used her montrals to caress his cheeks, reveling in the stubble she found that stimulated her already sensitized skin. She switched sides of his neck, and his hands came up to cup her elbows. She continued to slide her hand up and down his hardened member in a slow rhythm. It mimicked the pace Rex was setting behind her. Ahsoka still sensed hesitation on Kix's part. She wasn't happy about that. How would he be able to relax and enjoy himself if he was constantly on vigil about Rex calling him off? She decided to be blunt with the man. "Do you like me sliding my hands along your cock, Kix?" she cooed into his olive skin. His answering moan made her smile. "What else do you like? Would you like my lips on you too?" His posture snapped up to attention, and he looked down into her eyes. Would she do that? He nodded haphazardly with need and desire peeking out of his eyes. He had imagined such a thing but never thought it could happen. Ahsoka went back to kissing his skin. She made her way down his chest, noting little scars that were different from Rex's. She reached back and squeezed a handful of Rex butt to let him know she kept him in mind while she tended to Kix. His answering kisses on the back of her neck let her know he was happy. As she bent back down toward his lower abdomen, Rex picked up his pace a little. He didn't want to rush Ahsoka, but he was feeling pent up. Her posture made it easier for him to watch himself, he loved to watch himself slide in and out of her. She made a little answering moan to apprise him of his prowess. Both of her small red hands now rested on Kix's lower abdomen, playing with the hair leading down from his navel. She licked the hair in swirls, teasing the poor guy. Finally, her hand settled back at the base of his cock, squeezing gently before twisting upward. He grunted and placed a large hand on the back of her head lightly. Her other hand grabbed his thigh, and he covered hers with his free hand. Before taking him into her mouth, Ahsoka breathed on his silky skin. The warmth of her breath in the cool evening air was almost shocking. Kix sucked in a sharp breath himself. But then he hummed in appreciation. She's more amazing than any fantasy, he thought. And she's sharing herself with me. Rex is sharing her with me. How lucky can one guy get? The moment had come to fulfill her wish and his desire. Wrapping her lips around her predator's teeth, she encased him with her volcanic heat. He used all of his willpower not to jerk his hips up at the sensation which only increased as she slid further down. Her progress was a little jerky considering Rex was pounding into her quite forcefully now. She decided to just move with him instead of working against the current. After a few more thrusts, Ahsoka was spitted on Kix and Rex's erections. She was nearly filled with beautiful, muscled men. Men in whose hands she could place her life as easily as she swung a lightsaber. Men she trusted and valued. Men who made her feel like a woman--loved, cared for, respected, pleasured. She felt very grown up indeed. Rex was nearing his own climax, but kept asking himself what he'd do if he came and Ahsoka wasn't finished with Kix yet. He wasn't yet comfortable with her pleasuring another man if he wasn't involved in some way as well. He decided to slow down his own progress and speed hers up. He reached beneath her lithe thigh to reach her clitoris. He parted her lips with two fingers and slid the middle one right down her middle. Ahsoka groaned around her mouthful. So many wonderful distractions, she thought. Kix was still controlling his thrusting, but she could tell by the tightening of his testicles that he was getting close to his own orgasm. She sped Rex up again with a few well placed thrusts of her own hips. Her tongue ran up the underside of Kix's cock as she pulled her mouth back a bit. Then she swirled around the crown, retracting the foreskin slightly with her fingers. The sounds he was making were becoming louder and more desperate-toned. She knew he was happy, and that made her happy. Rex's rhythm began to falter in his throes, so she engulfed Kix once more and swallowed. He let out an exclamation and then she was swallowing again and again. Apparently, Kix didn't go in for a lot of self-satisfaction. He must have been saving this load for a while, she mused. Some escaped her lips, but she didn't mind. Rex began his growl of orgasm as well and pulled her behind as close to him as was possible. Then he speared her and lifted her up from her knees, gasping and groaning. Ahsoka dipped her consciousness into the Force to see their radiant signatures in the afterglow. I did that, she thought to herself in a congratulatory manner. Releasing Kix's spent organ, she climbed back up his body and solicited a kiss which was speedily bestowed. He even wiped the errant semen from her lips with his hands as he cupped her cheeks again. "Thank you," he whispered, breathless. "It was my pleasure," she replied. His quick quip back was "Both of ours." She smiled at his wit. Stretching her back upright, she flung both arms around Rex's back as he nuzzled her neck. "I love you," he spoke into her lekku. "I love you too," she told him. He withdrew from her body and flipped her around to claim her mouth himself. They kissed deeply, and he had to admit that another man didn't taste half bad when he was mingled with her potent tastes. Ahsoka sighed into his mouth, completely satisfied with their interlude that had successfully erased the weariness of the mission. Kix snugged up behind Ahsoka, rubbing his chest on her head tail and placing his hands lightly on her hips. He kissed her neck and shoulder blades in worship of the beautiful woman who had given him such pleasure. One arm left Rex's neck and circled around Kix to hold him as well. They stayed like that until their knees grew tired. Then the two men reassumed their lying positions with Ahsoka tucked between them. She squirmed a little at the titillating sensation of two pairs of strong, hair-covered legs rubbing against her, four rough hands that stimulated just right, and two sets of lips setting her skin on fire. By unspoken consent, they all decided to hold off on any talking about their encounter until another time. Now, they just wanted to enjoy what little time they had left for sensation. All too soon, they would have to make their separate ways back to camp before they were missed or the other troopers woke for the morning march. Until then, they would cuddle and kiss and caress and enjoy.
I'm going to shamelessly ask for feedback. Do you like it? What do you like? Is the pacing ok? Is the sex hot or too clinical? I need some thoughts beside my own!
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