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The Author Jumps Worlds (MLP)	By : Haunter_Rayne Category: +M through R > My Little Pony Views: 14327 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 1
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**Author's Note** Aright so the time has finally come for there to be some sexiness. Since this will be my first adult scene I am writing for this story, comments are always appreciated to let me know how I did. I try to keep things exciting but realistic at the same time. Tags: First time, virginity, vagina penetration, mutual oral sex.
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Author Jumps Worlds (MLP)
By Haunter Rayne
Chapter 5 - A Rocky Seduction

~ Outside of town adjacent to Ponyville ~

“Whoa, this pretty amazing.” Rayne said in awe. The two ponies had been walking through an underground cave system. There were lots of beautiful gems lining the tunnel pathways just as he had seen in the show. However now they had just stepped into the open cavern which he knew to be Maud’s home. Silently he thought to himself while taking in the beauty around him, “Wow, this place is dazzling. The waterfall is stunning and it looks like it drains down into the rock somewhere. It's echoing so softly, I could really imagine falling asleep in here and sleeping in for hours to that rushing roar.” Turning now to his host he asked, “So this must be your home? It's a pretty stunning place to be able to live in.”

“Yes, I've manage to settle in and be quite comfortable here. Come on in, you'll find the carpet to be much softer than the stone tunnel we just walked through.” Again her tone was solid but he could tell that she was being welcoming to him.

“Oh please, after you. I would love for you to show me around.” He said still marveling over how much bigger Maud’s cave was then in the show.

Stepping forward into her velvet styled living space she raise a hoof to point out different places she introduced. “This is my sitting area,” she commented with a slight pause, “and my resting area,” and another brief pause, “and my sleeping area.” Lowering her hoof she walked over to a ledge and pointed down towards a series of small tunnels leading deeper into the cave system. “And this is where I do most of my work; studying and examining different formations of rocks and geodes.”

Rayne nodded as he walked in to examine her furnishings more closely. “Hmm she's right.” He thought. “It’s sort of cushy in here. I was always intrigued that she had gone with a sort of Arabian harem themed decor for her home. All this plush and gold trim is beautiful. I wonder if this was expensive?”

Maud walked up very close to the stallion and blankly stated, “It isn't very often that I get to show my place off to company.”

Maud had always been one of his pony crushes and getting to be so close to her was making him excited. “I do like it very much. It is as comfortable and practical as It is beautiful.” Gesturing towards some comfy looking cushions that were conveniently adjoining one another, Rayne was careful to use her specific words in suggesting, “Would you like to sit together? Or rest together? Or…”

He had meant to pause at that moment but she spoke up right in time with his sentence, “Yes. I would like that.” He raised an eyebrow at how perfect her timing at been. It almost left him unsure if she was agreeing to what he had said or to what could have just said at that moment. Even though he was allowing Maud to set the pace he still knew he needed to make his own moves. Allowing her to lay down first, he settled into the cushion already set so close to hers and rested one of his hooves upon her own as if ‘holding hands’ from his world. She looked up to him and they sat in silence for a moment until she then moved her other hoof over to rest against his.

Rayne was pleased seeing her reciprocate his gesture and definitely took this as a sign that his interest in her was to some degree a mutual one. “Thank you for inviting me to your home Maud. Since I've only just arrived in town I still haven't made many friends yet. There's no one I'm connected to here so it's a completely fresh start for me.”

She looked to him stating, “Yes, making a fresh start in a new location can be tough. It wasn't too long ago that I was just moving to Ponyville myself.” Leaving one of her hooves in touch with Rayne’s Maud leaned back to shift into a more comfortable position. “But I already know that you're not interested in being my friend.” Her blunt statement definitely caught Rayne off guard.

Rather than having a large negative reaction to that statement he simply questioned her in a quizzical tone instead. “What do you mean?” He knew that with this pony it would be best to keep his composure.

She seemed to watch him so carefully as he spoke to her. “When I first met you your eyes dilated when you looked at me. Then they stayed that way as we continued to talk. Also your comment about my eyes being larimar was very flirtatious.” Slowly she began to extend her hind leg in a stretch which created an alluring arc between her lower waist and her thigh. Rayne could not help but take notice and just as quickly realized he had been caught stealing his glance at her. “I knew it.” She remarked as Rayne realized he had played right into her hooves. He was rather impressed by her sly craft which he hadn't expected. “You are too attracted to me to want to be friends.”

Rayne just smiled in response thinking, “Oh well, now the jig is up. Only one way to go from here.” Leaning in close his voice changed to a more seductive tone. “You've got me. I find you to be very attractive. And yes it's true. I'm not wanting to just be friends here with you.” He allowed the innuendo to ring perfectly clear in this voice.

Maud gave a sideways glance towards the ground feeling unsure of herself as she commented, “I might be ok with that.” Then she looked up to Rayne expectantly. Unbeknownst to the stallion, she was feeling nervous and her stomach started twisting in knots. Trying to have something specific to focus on Maud realized she could feel the warmth from his breath across her lips. It was comforting and made her feel compelled to lean in. She was glad to see him take the initiative as he leaned forward with their snouts touching for the first time. They both gave a few nervous bumps before closing their eyes and locking lips with one another.

After that it was like a flood gate had opened. Once the two of them had started kissing they were suddenly all over each other. Rayne reached out and embraced Maud, wrapping himself around her. Maud eagerly leaned into his chest and passionately kissed the stallion. She had seen other ponies smooching with their special somepony before but this was nothing like that. His lips made her melt as he held her and it gave her a rush she had never experienced before.

Rayne was in sheer bliss. He sucked on her bottom lip as he kissed her which he could tell she really liked. He followed that up by guiding a hoof through her mane and caressing down along her neck and back. The mare shuddered in his arms which caused his own growing excitement to grind into her flank. Rayne observed that she made no signs of shying away. Leaning in and taking charge of the moment he looked down to the beautiful mare below him. “Even with that same expression on her face I can still read the excitement in her eyes. She looks like Nala laying in the grass from the Lion King. But instead this is Maud and she is giving me that same excited stare.” He mused silently to himself. “Maud, I want you to take off your shirt for me.” She stated directly but not commandingly.

“Okay.” She simply replied and reached down to begin with unfastening her belt. In a moment she was pulling the garment up over her head leaving her laying bare underneath the stallion above her.

“Thank you, now just relax.” He whispered into her ear before starting a trail of kisses slowly down her neck.

Maud took a deep breath and laid there giving no resistance to his lips now trailing down below her collar bone. “I am enjoying this so far.” She pointed out while watching his hooves begin massaging up and down through the fur of her body.

Rayne took his time while sensually exploring the mare’s body. Her different anatomy required some adjustments to how he was used to having his way with a woman. While Maud didn't have breasts Rayne still found her torso to be tender and sensitive to stimulate her with. He made sure not to move too fast as his focus proceeded to lower portions of her body. He wasn't sure if they had the same kinds of techniques to sex here in Equestria that he was used to from his world but he was curious to find out.

“That feels, really nice. What are you doing?” Maud softly called out as Rayne began to lick down along her hip joint. He could smell her musk but wasn't repulsed by it. She had thus far felt and tasted wonderful to him. He assumed being an equine himself helped him to feel natural in taking a pony as a lover.

“I am planning on stimulating you with my mouth.” Was the only response he gave her as he gently spread her thighs apart. “Is this ok?” He asked as his tongue danced lower into her hip joint.

She didn't speak but nodded softly as her body began to burn down in her center very near where Rayne was now licking.

“MmmMm.” Rayne moaned with his lips into her sensitive skin causing Maud’s body to jump slightly in reaction. He had always enjoyed using his mouth to please his lovers and this was a new experience he was definitely looking forward to. He could hear her mouth gasp as his tongue teased the hairs on each side of her slit. He stroked gently from the bottom upwards tracing the lining of her pink skin one side at a time. He particularly loved how her hips would subtly thrust upwards as he licked her. Feeling now that she sufficiently primed up, Rayne extended his tongue gently into her opening and traced around her vaginal ring.

Maud was mostly keeping her content face but her body was betraying her by repeatedly quivering or having a leg involuntarily twitch. As Rayne pushed forward into her passageway she instinctively reached above her head grabbing onto the pillows supporting her. Rayne loved that as a pony his tongue was much larger and longer. This was a fact that he used to his advantage, lapping at the flowing juices that were now pouring profusely from the mare. Rayne explored her depths how she felt inside. As his tongue slid, he came across another barrier inside which made Maud’s legs kick in response. “Did I just lick Maud’s hymen?” He pondered. Rayne pulled back recognising that spasm had not been one of pleasure for her.

It was at this point that Maud seemed to get up to reposition herself. For a moment Rayne worried that he had upset her and that she was leaving. But on wobbly legs she stepped over to grab a circular pillow which she then leaned down upon. Her face and upper torso she laid into the pillow for support while she left her hind end standing upwards with her back legs straight. Rayne admired the view of Maud in this bent over position. She looked back at him for a moment but then lifted her tail uncovering herself as she closed her eyes submissively and waited. He was more than happy to meet her invitation even if walking had also become a bit awkward for him as well.

With getting a new body came getting used to new and larger limbs. His erection hung and dangled between his legs as he trotted over. He had been well equipped before as a man but now as an equine he thought this might kill a human girl if he ever got the chance again. Despite his dismay, he wasn't going to keep the eager mare waiting for him as he moved in behind her. As he rose up to mount her he paid careful attention to avoid clopping her back with his hard hooves while trying to balance himself in this new position.

Rayne could feel the warmth coming off of her as she thrust her hips backwards to meet him. She was his for the taking so he decided not to delay any longer. He rubbed his tip along through her wetness trying to lubricate what was about to happen as best he could. Then once he felt her opening begin to part he pushed forward squeezing into the tight space of the pony below him.

“Ahhhhh!” Maud screamed immediately as Rayne filled her. After his first push Rayne had felt his tip press against some resistance and then a second later the it gave way as he sank much further inside. It had only been his first stroke but her hymen had ruptured making the mare's knees began quivering as she bled just slightly. Rayne reached around her torso Rayne stroked her gently as he had before and whilst also holding her in place. After not too long her knees began to steady themselves. Pulling his length halfway back out of her Rayne carefully attempted a second push.

This was something that Maud was not able to keep her stoic expression for. As Rayne now repeated his withdrawal and re-entry her eyes closed and her body tightened with pleasure. Rayne was patient at first allowing her to get used to his size pushing and pulling her insides apart. But then he gave her a single hard slam making his hips strike sharply against her flanks. He penetrated all of the way inside her making Maud scream and then immediately brought her hooves up to her mouth trying to silence herself.

Rayne was rather enjoying this as she felt even tighter to him further inside. Having him stay impaled so far into her made Maud groan loudly into her hooves. He was pacing her, allowing her time to adjust. However once she had settled, Rayne began holding her sides tightly before repeatedly thrusting against Maud’s hind end. Mounting the young adult pony hard and fast Rayne went wild giving into the new pleasures he was feeling. Maud hung limply in his arms submissively surrendering to his advances. Her continued wailing echoed through her cavern as Rayne pummeled into her.

Ideas ran through his excited mind of whether different tricks he knew would still work or not here as a pony. Not wanting to put too much on Maud all at once he kept his pace steady savoring having taken this ponies virginity. It wasn't long before Maud’s screams changed tone to more sighs which were quickly followed by her hind legs spasming sporadically. The pleasure of feeling Maud squirming in orgasm beneath him saturated Rayne’s sex driven brain. With each shudder of Maud’s body Rayne felt his self control slipping further and further away. The recently virgin mare had only just concluded her first vaginal orgasm when she noticed Rayne changing the angle of his position.

The dark stallion arranged himself so that his tip would press into the upper wall of her depths. Maud’s body suddenly went rigid and she looked as if she had just lost all of the air in her lungs. Her hips began jutting up and down against the carpeted floor as Rayne pressed into that sensitive area inside her. She became so wet from contracting that Rayne could no longer withstand the sensations her body was giving him.

Just as Maud regained the air to scream she felt a torrent of warmth that seemed to flood every possible space inside her. Rayne growled out in ecstasy unable to believe how it felt to climax using his new body. He could feel his seed flowing out of him in several bursts. Three, four, five squirts of fluid expelled from him with each feeling better than the last. Six, seven, eight and his balls just continued to empty into the mare. Suddenly he felt her fill to the brim until she exploded outward with cum, unable to contain it all within her. He looked down listening to her half moaning half crying from the experience of cumming in time with him so forcefully.

It was about this time that Rayne’s better sense caught up with him and he decided to relent off of the inexperienced mare. She gasped sharply as he lift his weight from her and she lay there gasping for air weakly. Rayne noticed that even after he had vacated her passage her body continued to shake as if still experiencing orgasms from what she had just endured. But Rayne noticed immediately as she winced when trying to move.

“Uhh, I cant…” She started, struggling even with words as she used her upper body to collapse her hips sideways. “I can't move my legs.” She huffed, hardly seeming to have enough energy to speak. Knowing that Maud was referring to her hind end he looked and saw her body laying motionless from her rump down except for the occasional continued spasm. He found it very attractive noticing how in her new position his sperm had began pouring out from inside her. It was literally running down her thigh and pooling around her bottom.

Try as she might her body refused to respond to her commands. Rayne watched as her few feeble attempts seemed to drain any energy she had left. Standing slowly the stallion said, “Just rest. Wait right here, I know what you need to help you feel better.” Noticing there had been two drinking chalices sitting upon an end table Rayne went over to the stream and filled some of the water into one. Not knowing a thing about the freshness of wild water he tasted it first and seeming satisfied that it was fine he brought it back to Maud. “Here, drink. It will help.”

“Thank you.” She said gently as she took a few sips which quickly turned into gulps. Setting the now empty chalice down she looked up to Rayne and then down to the state of her body. “Ummm.” She mumbled apprehensively. “I'm not sure what to say. I am not the kind of pony to embarrass easily. But you've got me feeling kind of vulnerable here.” She stated, still in her monotone voice but speaking openly and honestly.

“Not to say that I upset you I hope?” Rayne offered. He was pleased when Maud shook her head that he had not.

“I wanted this to happen. I invited you back here hoping, for what exactly I didn't know but, that something like this would happen once we were alone. This was my first time and I thought that I would have been able to handle myself better.” Rayne was contemplating whether he should attempt to comfort this notion of hers but she continued on to ask, “But that wasn't a normal experience that you gave to me. Was it?” She asked pointedly.

He chucked guiltily but decided that complete honesty had done well for him with her so far. “No, it wasn't. I hadn't thought to consider whether you might be a virgin or not. And I definitely used a few advanced tricks to manipulate your body into having additional pleasure that… your nerves might not have been ready for.” He mentioned, clearly referring to her temporary paralysis.

She glanced down and then glanced at him. “Apparently.” She said. Rayne decided to take this as a case in point reaction and not that she was bitter about having too intense of an orgasm. His worries cleared when she then made her feelings to be very clear. “How long am I going to be like this for?” She asked vaguely.

“Oh being unable to move your legs? Maybe only another twenty minutes or so.” He replied. But Rayne then became surprised when she rejected his response.

“No, not about my legs. How long am I going to feel like this for… like I want to throw myself at you and let you do that to me again?” Still her expression seemed plain but he could sense the desperate sincerity behind her query. “Please understand, I definitely couldn't take anymore. And yet… I feel that I want to. It isn't like me to have conflicting emotions.” She was looking straight at him with direct eye contact during this whole interaction. “I don't want to cruel by misleading you. I am finding it very difficult to say that I don't want to continue doing this. However, I know that at this point in my life I am not ready to have a special somepony.”

Rayne smiled hearing that was the extent of her worries. “Then don't have a special somepony.” He stated simply, and he knew just a tad bit manipulatively. She looked to him seeming a bit surprised. “I'm new in town. I don't mind. Maud you are beautiful. But I wouldn't expect you to have feelings for me just like that. If you want to leave connections out of it then I will give you whatever affections your body can crave. And I won't get upset in the least if we stay just friends beyond that." He spoke so assuredly as if there wasn't a care in the world or any other possibility to consider.

Maud smiled, actually allowing her emotion to show on her face. “Then teach me something else.”

“Hmm?” Rayne hummed in surprise.

“I'm starting to get some feeling back in my hooves but I still can't move them yet. I'm not ready to be touched… but I feel like I want to return the favor for what you did to me.” She gave him an expression to suggest she did not want to have to explain herself outright.

Not needing any further specifics Rayne trotted up to her but then stepped just passed leaving his flank by her face. She looked up to him from the ground confused for a moment. That was until looking down seeing his phallus in front of her still seeming half hard. Needing no further instruction for what he wanted, Maud leaned forward running her tongue just over the hole on his tip. He was still slightly leaking fluid but that did not deter her from examining around him with her tongue. He watched as she pulled back, tasting the liquid for the first time with an analytical expression before swallowing the amount on her lips.

“Let me know if it tastes ok to you.” He offered considerately. Maud gave him no answer as she leaned into his pelvic region again. She hesitated for a moment, struggling a bit with the angle before opening her mouth and taking in the full end of his bulb to suck upon. Maud allowed whatever would flow into her mouth to flow with no apparent reaction as she began to steadily suckle with earnest. Occasionally her tongue would lick to maneuver what she would have to swallow but she focused mainly on sucking along what her throat would allow her to reach.

Rayne felt pleased with allowing Maud to have some control so he shifted down to his side with his hind legs spread next to where the mare was laying. Having much easier access, Maud began immediately taking considerably more of him into her mouth as she sucked. It went on for several minutes until she lifted her mouth to saying, “I want you to miss Pinkie's party for you.” Then she began running her tongue along the base length of his shaft where she couldn't reach before.

“I don't have a place in town to stay yet.” He admitted. He had planned to say more but Maud reached out to place a hoof over his lips silencing him. Then she returned to sucking over his bulb and this time swallowing dramatically more of his length down into her throat. Rayne laid back making no attempt to fight it as he had clearly found a fantastic home that he was going to stay in during his time here in Ponyville. “Second loose end, check.” He thought as he held Maud by her mane and began to erupt into her throat.

**Author's Ending Note** So a couple things here. When Rayne was flirting with Maud he tried to be clever with his words but i was concerned that some readers might not get it. Earlier she described her living space as her "sitting, resting and sleeping," area. So Rayne made a joke of sitting with her, resting with her, or sleeping with her.
As for the sex scene, I tried to take both of their points of view into consideration but it was mainly written from Rayne's perspective.
More to come soon. Thank you for reading.
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