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Paying a Debt	By : DarthValgaav Category: +M through R > My Little Pony Views: 11678 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 2
Disclaimer: This is a non-profit fanfiction created for entertainment purposes only. I was not paid for this fanfiction and have no association with Hasbro, Lauren Faust or My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

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Sorry this chapter took so long to make. In order to improve on some of the pony sex scene’s I’ve been reading some other fics. One actually gave me an idea for another story that I might be doing soon. Anyways, I hope you all like this chapter.
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“Ah can’t believe ah’m doin this again,” groaned Apple Jack. It was early in the evening, just a few hours since the sun had set. The earth pony stood next to Rainbow Dash on the main floor of Charity’s whorehouse. All around them were mares and stallions talking to each other.
So far only three stallions had approached her. The first one was a brown earth pony with a black mane who smelled like he hadn’t taken a bath in a month. There was no way Apple Jack would send a minute, let alone an hour, with a stallion who had flies nesting in his mane! The second one was a light blue unicorn with a white mohawk mane. At first Apple Jack liked him enough; he was pleasant and most of his questions were standard. Like, for example, was she willing to do anal? But then he asked if Apple Jack was willing to go down to the basement and let him brand her tongue. Apple Jack nearly yelled no and he left after that with a disappointed look. The last stallion was another earth pony with a lemon colored coat and short purple mane with a single blue stripe in it. All he wanted to know from her was where the bathroom was.
“Relax Apple Jack,” said Rainbow as she gave a seductive look to a stallion passing by. “It’s not as bad as the last time you worked here. You’ll be done in no time flat if you really try.”
“Easy fer ya ta say,” grumbled Apple Jack. “Ya like doin this.”
“So did you,” replied Rainbow Dash with a grin. Before Apple Jack could say a word a very familiar looking Pegasus appeared before them.
“Hey Rainbow,” said Soarin with a small grin.
“Soarin,” cheered Rainbow. “This is a surprise. You usually visit me once a month.”
“Well, actually we didn’t get a chance to finish yesterday,” said Soarin as he scratched his head. “I was sorta hoping that, maybe, we could continue where we left off.”
“Oh,” said Rainbow as her smile fell. “I’m sorry Soarin but I’m all out of whip cream at the moment. If you had told me that you wanted to try that again I would have gotten us some.”
“I see,” said Soarin as he let out a sigh. “I guess that is sorta my fault.”
Rainbow felt bad for her favorite client. He had been visiting her for almost a year now and she had always been able to please him. Each one of their sessions so far had been pleasurable as well as thrilling. The speedy Pegasus enjoyed bringing one of her idols to the edge with pleasure and she, in returned, received just as much pleasure from him as well. Every once in a while he would also change things up so it wouldn’t get boring. Like rolling special dice to see what position they would use or some light bondage.
Now, she didn’t hold onto any romantic fantasies. She knew what he was here for and that was ok with her. He had several other mares he liked to fool around with including Spitfire. Rainbow knew this because she had once had a threesome with the two of them. Best. Night. EVER! She didn’t know why he didn’t just settle down with a single pony nor did she care. That was his business and she wouldn’t pry into it unless it affected her somehow.
Suddenly, Rainbow had a light bulb moment. She leaned over to Soarin so that her mouth was next to his ear.
“Well Soarin,” she began in her sexist voice. “I have a proposition for you. How about you take me and my friend here for an all nighter? Just imagine it. Two lovely mares ready to buck you senseless until the sun comes up.” Rainbow then pulled back to see the expression on his face. Like she didn’t already know. His wings stood erect while his jaw hung open as he stared at Apple Jack.
“Naw hold on one second Rainbow,” began Apple Jack.
“Deal!” shouted Soarin before he leapt into the air to find Charity. Apple Jack glared at her friend.
“Don’t ah get a say in this?” demanded the farmer pony.
“I don’t see why you’re so upset,” said Rainbow who looked excited. “It’s a thousand bits per pony for an all nighter. With this you’ll be out of here sooner.”
Apple Jack blinked in surprise. She hadn’t thought about it that way. There would probably be a couple hours worth of sex before every pony got tired and went to bed. Odds were she could make more bits with this one client than she could with three or four. Plus she had to admit that Soarin was good looking. Perhaps this would be a good way to thank him for being her one and only customer at the Gala.
“Well, when ya put it that way,” admitted Apple Jack aloud.
Meanwhile, a very excited Soarin was paying Charity. As she counted the bits to make sure he wasn’t trying to cheat her Soarin was counting his good fortune. Truth be told he remembered Apple Jack from the Gala. She had looked so sexy that night and the food she was serving looked so good. When he had arrived here, he had planned on seeing Rainbow just like he had said. But when he saw her standing next to Apple Jack he froze. He watched as she talked to the stallions that approached her, looking a little bit annoyed. He had thought that maybe she was waiting for some pony or, perhaps, just wasn’t in the mood tonight. So he decided to just stick with his original plan. He didn’t know if he should thank Celestia or not, but what Rainbow had suggested made him feel like he had died and gone to heaven. Oh and that accent of hers was the deal breaker. He couldn’t wait to hear her moan his name in that southern slang.
After he had paid Soarin returned to the two mares and informed them that Charity assigned them room one. The three entered it shortly and found it to be a little different from the other rooms at the brothel. First of all, it was bigger than most of the other rooms. Mostly likely twice as big if not more. Second, the bed was huge. Five ponies could sleep on it with room to spare! There was also an open closet full of toys, oils, and various other things that they could use throughout the night. Rainbow walked away from the two to check out the bathroom. She quickly peaked inside and grinned. Oh, she knew this would be a fun night!
“So, how’d like this ta start?” asked Apple Jack as she looked at Soarin.
“I think I know how,” said Rainbow as she walked over to the bed. Then, making sure that her rump was facing Soarin, she put her forelegs on the bed. Slowly she spread her hindlegs as she leaned forward a bit. Turning her head to give the Wonderbolt stallion her sexiest look she swished her tail a bit so that he could see her moist slit. “Come on A.J.”
Apple Jack looked a little uneasy about this, but went along with it anyways. She walked over to the bed and, before she imitated what Rainbow had done, dropped her hat on the ground. No way was she going to let that get damaged.
Soarin stared at the two for a moment before he also walked over to the bed. Once he was behind the two mares he stretched out his wings. Then, using the tips of each wing, he began to trace both mares lower lips at the same time.
Apple Jack let out a moan. The light touch of his feather against her pussy was stimulating her in ways she had never known. She closed her eyes as the feeling of pleasure began to slowly build inside of her. She could feel her juices begin to run lightly down her left hindleg.
Soarin then pulled back both his wings causing the two to groan in frustration. Brining both wings close to his face he began to take a whiff of each. He knew what Rainbow’s smelt like, it had a rainstorm like scent that he liked so much. Apple Jack’s scent reminded him of cider. Nice, warm apple cider that just smelling it made him thirsty. Wasting no time he did a side step so he was directly behind the orange mare, brought his head close to her pussy, and gave it a nice long lick.
Apple Jack couldn’t contain her gasp of surprise as she felt Soarin eating her out. She began to dig her front hooves into the bed as her eyes rolled into the back of her skull for a moment. At first it was a single lick, but suddenly it turned into a feeding frenzy. His licks were all over the place and he was shoving his tongue farther inside of her. She could feel him nibbling her folds from time to time, causing her to bite her lower lip.
“How does it feel?” asked Rainbow in a husky tone.
“It feels mi-mighty good,” moaned Apple Jack as she felt Soarin trying to get his tongue deeper inside of her. She eyes clapped shut as she moaned louder and louder. Apple Jack felt movement on the bed that seemed to stop right in front of her. Slowly she opened her green eyes to see Rainbow sitting up straight in front of her with her legs spread and a wicked grin on her face. The Pegasus then leaned back a bit which caused her slit to move closer to her friends face.
Apple Jack knew what her friend wanted her to do. It was something she had never done to another mare before. Something that, under any other circumstance she wouldn’t do. But right now, with Rainbow’s cunt pressed against her lips and her sent filled her nostrils, Apple Jack gave in and began to slowly lick the snatch in front of her.
Rainbow Dash let out a sigh as Apple Jack began to slowly eat her out. It felt good, but it wasn’t great. Each lick just confirmed to Rainbow that Apple Jack was an amateur at this. Something that she knew she would fix in time. But she had to admit that it was a…decent first try. This continued for several minutes until Rainbow decided that she needed a more experience tongue. She took off into the air, surprising Apple Jack, and landed next to Soarin.
“Let’s get you on the bed,” she whispered into his ear. Her voice literally dripping with seduction. “Then maybe Apple Jack can return the favor with that nice, hard cock of yours. I bet you would love that right now.” Hearing that, Soarin pulled away from Apple Jack which caused the orange mare to groan in frustration. As he did Rainbow could see a string of liquid connect his mouth to Apple Jack’s pussy. The sight made her feel wetter and more eager to continue.
Soarin jumped into the air, flapping his wings in order to position himself in the middle of the bed. Once there he landed on the soft mattress before getting on his back. His large cock stood up straight, ready for the two mares to attend it.
Rainbow helped her friend get on the bed and the two began to crawl towards Soarin. Both of them had lust filled eyes as they made their way over to his laying form. Their movements were slow, seductive. The two were like timber wolves that were about to corner their prey. Once they were close enough, the two split off in different directions. Apple Jack moved over towards his hind legs while Rainbow crawled over towards Soarin’s head.
Apple Jack moved in between the racers legs, her eyes glued to the stallions rock hard cock. As she moved her head closer a smile appeared on her face. This was one thing she knew she could do well. Unlike Rainbow, she had never had any mare on mare action before. But she had been with a lot of stallions!
Slowly, as if to savor it, Apple Jack licked Soarin’s cock. She started at its base and then slowly, very slowly, made her way to its head. The sensation was enough to drive the stallion mad! Once she reached the top she began to circle the tip several times before engulfing it. Apple Jack gave a little moan that vibrated into Soarin’s cock causing him to shudder in pleasure. A moment later, the orange earth pony was bobbing her head up and down as her tongue twisted around the shaft like a snake.
While this was going on Rainbow had placed her lower lips above Soarin’s mouth. Soarin had his forehooves on her hips as he began to eat her out. At first his tongue moved slowly, something that slightly irritated Rainbow. In the past, he would be on her like he had with Apple Jack. Still, he was doing a better job than her earth pony friend.
As Soarin continued to eat her out, he also added a few light nibbles along her pussy. Rainbow arched her back with these and her wings spread out to their maximum length. The speed of his tongue also began to slowly increase causing her to involuntarily shutter. She then closed her eyes in order to savoir the moment a bit more.
Over with Apple Jack, she had just taken the stallions member out of her mouth. Not because it tasted bad, which it didn’t in the slightest, but because it was ready for the main event. The cock was fully coated with saliva, which would make it easier for it to slide into her. Apple Jack got up and positioned herself so that her slit was above Soarin’s tool. As it slid inside of her, Apple Jack let out a sigh of pleasure. It had been awhile since she had something this big in her like this.
Slowly she began to ride him cowmare style. With each bounce she felt waves of pleasure shot through her body. She groaned as she leaned forward a bit as she placed her forehooves on Soarin’s chest. As she did, Rainbow put her hooves on the orange pony’s shoulder.
“Rainbow, what are ya doin?” she asked as her friend’s face drew closer to hers. Rainbow said nothing as their lips were mere centimeters apart. The Pegasus mare then stopped as she closed her eyes. Apple Jack could feel her friends breath on her lips, waiting for her to close the distance. Licking her lips, Apple Jack complied.
Their lips met, pressed against each other tightly as Apple Jack began to grind herself against the stallions shaft. She soon let out a moan that allowed Rainbow to slip her tongue into the orange pony’s mouth. As the rainbow mare explored her friends mouth, she began to feel her friends body with her hoof. It was slow and sensual as she lowered her hoof from Apple Jack’s shoulder down to her belly. Rainbow continued to go lower until she reached her destination: Apple Jack’s nub. Using her hoof, Rainbow began to rub with a circular motion. She watched as Apple Jack’s pupils became tiny and rolled to the back of her head. Soon after that, the earth pony threw her head back while her moth was open in a silent scream before she fell on her back.
“Looks like she’ll need a break,” said Rainbow as she got off Soarin’s mouth. Soarin got on his hooves and saw that Apple Jack was now lying on her side, panting hard from her orgasm. He then saw that Rainbow was now on her back with her head pointed in his direction. A smile appeared on his face. He knew what she wanted. He placed his forehooves on her hips and then pulled them up until her hindhooves were on opposite sides of her head. Then, with his still hard cock, he slammed it into her with all his might.
Rainbow’s eyes went wide as she watched him slam into her snatch. There was a reason she loved this position: she could see everything. She could watch as his cock began to pump into her as her juices began to drip on her face. There was nothing more exciting than this. Any pony who said otherwise didn’t know what he/she was talking about.
Soon, Rainbow felt that she was on the edge. And judging by Soarin’s speed, he was about to cum as well.
“I’m going to cum,” moaned Rainbow in an eager voice. “Oh yeah, pound me harder. You like that? You like my tight pussy wrapped around your hard stallionhood? You want to shoot your cum inside of me? Do it! Do it for me! Drench my insides with your white cum! I need it so bad!”
Hearing Rainbow talking like this was too much. With a final thrust, and a loud groan, Soarin released his cum. He then pulled out, causing his cum to drip from Rainbow’s pussy onto her face before her body straightened out and she was on her back. Soarin, to, fell on his back while panting slightly. So far this had been well worth the two thousand bits. Soarin closed his eyes only to open them a moment latter as he felt a pair of lips on his check and neck. Opening them he saw that Apple Jack was sucking on his neck while Rainbow Dash was kissing him all over his chest.
“We ain’t done yet Sugarcube,” whispered Apple Jack into his ear.
“You paid for an all nighter,” said Rainbow Dash as she looked up into his eyes. As he looked back he could see an endless ocean of lust in them. “And we’re going to make sure you get ever bits worth.”
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Meanwhile, in the Ponyville Library, Twilight sat alone reading a book by candle light. All the doors were locked and drapes covered every window. Spike was upstairs sleeping, with a small spell placed on him to make sure it stayed that way. Twilight hated that she had to use magic on Spike like this, but she couldn’t bare to have him find out what she was reading.
For the last several hours, Twilight read The Pony Sutra like she would read one of her spell books. Inside were dozens of positions that she could try, each one illustrated. There was also information on the pleasure spots of each of the different types of ponies. She knew that a unicorn’s horn could be used for sex, but she never knew that the base of a Pegasus pony’s wings could be used for sexual simulation. On top of that the book also showed various ways a mare could please another mare.
To say that Twilight wasn’t turned on by this would be a lie. Every so often she would find herself stroking her lower area as she studied the pictures or read the arousing text. It was mind blowing to know that there were so many ways she could please another. In the past she had mastered every subject that had been presented to her by the princess. But now, as she read from this book, a part of her wanted to master this craft for her own sake without being told to do so.
Currently, she was looking at the section on anal sex. Twilight blushed as she stared at the images of stallion cock penetrating a mare’s anus. There were also images of mares using various toys to stretch out their butt holes.
‘Before trying anal sex,’ read Twilight, ‘it is recommended that a mare prepare before hoof. Anal sex can be very pleasurable, but it can also be very painful if one is not ready for it. If you want your lover to be the first to claim you then you should use lotion to make it easier for him to slide his stallionhood inside of you. Also, it is best to do this with a stallion you trust not to go too fast the first time and will listen to you when you say it hurts. If not, then the use of anal plugs as well as beads is recommended.’
Twilight nodded as she read these words. She knew that it was her choice to have anal sex with a client and that most mares said no. However, Charity had told her that most stallions were always on the lookout for a mare who would say yes. Sometimes they would even be willing to tip or become repeat costumer’s. More customers meant more bits which equaled her debt being paid faster.
Twilight turned the page with her magic, coming to the final page. She had expected something erotic like a few pictures of various ponies having blissful sex. What she found, however, was a note from the author.
‘Now, for those mares that plan on trying anything that they have read in this book, there is one last piece of advice that I would like to give. Sex is a wonderful, powerful thing. To some ponies, it doesn’t matter who their partner is as long as they get want they want. For these ponies, the act of sex is like an itch that needs to be scratched. It still feels good, but it will always feel like there is something missing. I have found that when you are with some pony that shares a connection to you, the pleasure is greatly increased. Both partners trying their best to make the other feel good is worth a hundred one night stands.’
Twilight couldn’t help but blink at these words. She would never have expected them from a book like this. But, in a way, they kind of made sense. While her sex experience was still very limited, Star Hunter had always made her feel the best. There was just something in the way they made love that she couldn’t put her hoof on. Maybe the author was right about this. Twilight quickly flipped through the pages until she got back to the title page and looked at the author’s name. When she saw who it was, her jaw dropped to the floor.
“Princess Luna?!”
-x-
For five hours the three of them had been going at it. Every time Soarin thought that they were finished, one of the lovely mares would get back up. Mainly Rainbow Dash. It was as if she had made it her personal mission to see that they had sex all night long.
Right now she and Apple Jack were on top of each other. Their sexes had been grinding against each other until Soarin had shoved his cock between the two. All three of them were moaning and grunting loudly as the mares moved their hips against his cock. There was only so much a stallion could take before he came, his fluids shooting between the two.
“I-I’m done,” stammered Soarin as he fell to his side.
“Ah am as well,” grunted Apple Jack. “Lets just get some sleep.”
“Come on you guys,” said Rainbow who looked like she could still go on. However, both Soarin and Apple Jack were sweating so badly that it looked like they had done the Running of the Leaves fifteen times in a row. Apple Jack’s mane as well as her coat looked like a mess covered in cum and her manes normal braid had been completely undone. Rainbow knew she looked just as bad as her friend, but it didn’t phase her in the slightest. “Fine then. But let’s get you cleaned up before we get some sleep.”
Apple Jack nodded lightly as she got out of the bed slowly. Once she was off, Rainbow helped her friend into the bathroom with Soarin right behind them. He had planned to wait just outside the door so that he could use the shower after them, but when he heard the orange mare shout out he had to look inside.
The apple bucking mare was now standing on her hind legs while her forehooves were tied to the ceiling of the shower by black straps. The water was on and the stallion could see it run down both mares bodies. Soarin watched as Rainbow began to soap up her hooves before applying them to Apple Jack’s body. As she washed her body down, Rainbow began to kiss her friend heavily. The sight of this caused Soarin to become hard once again, despite the pain.
“P-Please, no more,” begged Apple Jack as she pulled her head away from Rainbow’s. But her friend wouldn’t give up that easily. Instead, she pressed her body closer and began to rub it against Apple Jack’s.
While this was going on Soarin could help but stroke his shaft as he watched. It was just so damn hot, how could any pony not get off?
Sadly, all good things had to come to an end. Once the soap was gone, Rainbow simply untied her friend. She knew that Soarin was most likely running on empty and that Apple Jack was way too sore and tired to cum again. She just wanted one last performance before the three went to sleep.
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