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Paying a Debt	By : DarthValgaav Category: +M through R > My Little Pony Views: 11678 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 2
Disclaimer: This is a non-profit fanfiction created for entertainment purposes only. I was not paid for this fanfiction and have no association with Hasbro, Lauren Faust or My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

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Once again, thank you to all of you for your feedback. It really helps me out. I will do my best to try and improve on the southern accident, but that might take awhile. Also, I’m surprised no one got my hint in the second chapter on one of the mare six that would be in this story. It was a small hint, very small. Anyways, I just want you all to know that Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie will NOT be having sex in this story. I will explain those reasons in this chapter. As for Rarity… I’m not really sure right now.
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“You interrupted a total of eight clients who I had no choice but to give a full refund to,” said Charity. She then gave a hard look at Apple Jack who gulped. Currently, both Charity and Apple Jack were outside the whorehouse. Off to the side were Rainbow Dash and Twilight. The two of them were being looked at by the unicorn that stood by the main door who was using a birth control spell on them. “Because of that, owe me 1800 bits. Then add the cost of new doors which brings the total to 1920 bits.”
“But ma’am,” began Apple Jack, but Charity’s stare cut her off.
“No buts,” said Charity. “You charged into my establishment, breaking my property in the process, without knowing all the facts. If you had just stopped and thought for a moment then you wouldn’t be in this mess young lady. Now, unless you have the bits, I will expect you here tomorrow night ready to work like you used to.” Apple Jack lowered her head in defeat.
“Yes ma’am,” she said with a sigh as she turned to walk away. Shadowing her were both Twilight and Rainbow Dash.
As they walked, Twilight tried several times to say something but the words wouldn’t come out. She really didn’t mean for all of this to happen. When this whole thing started she never expected to hurt her best friends. To be honest, she thought the worst that could happen was them finding out. Well, she was wrong.
“Would some pony say something already,” said Rainbow Dash who was unable to take the silence any longer.
“Apple Jack,” began Twilight, “I’m had no idea that Big Mac would show up tonight. If I had known it was him then I would have told Charity no.”
“Could have said no when ya saw him,” said Apple Jack as she stopped and turned around. Her eyes were narrowed at the purple unicorn. “And fer that matter, why is a pony like ya working fer Charity?”
“You used to work for her as well Apple Jack,” said Rainbow Dash as she came to Twilight’s defense. “Big Mac decided to take the list option and wrote down our descriptions. And you know how that works. If she had been approached by Big Mac, you know she would have said no right off that bat. Besides, is she really the one you’re angry at?”
Apple Jack was about to say something, but stopped herself. No, she wasn’t angry at Twilight. More upset than angry anyways. Truth is she was more upset with Big Mac and herself than any other pony. Big Mac for spending so much bits when they were needed on the farm just to get some flank as well as lying to her about it. She was also mad at herself for the way she acted and getting herself into debt with Charity.
“Look girl, I gotta get on out of here,” said Apple Jack. “We’ll talk later.” And with that, Apple Jack began to race towards her farm.
“Well,” said Rainbow Dash with a sigh. “Looks like tonight was a bust. And I was really looking forward to my time with Soarin.” She then patted Twilight on the back. “Don’t worry about her; she just needs some time to cool her head. How about you stop by the barn tomorrow and we’ll get this all straightened out.” Twilight didn’t trust herself to talk so she simply nodded. A moment later Rainbow took off into the night shy leaving her alone.
Twilight walked alone of several minutes with her head lowered. She hadn’t felt this bad since she turned the town upside down because she had forgotten to write a letter to the princess. At least Rainbow didn’t hate her but she was sure that Apple Jack did. And she couldn’t blame her for feeling that way.
Just then she heard a noise above her. Twilight looked up to see a male Pegasus pony flying overhead and then landing a few yards in front of her. It was Hunter and on his back was something that looked like a picnic basket.
“Hunter, what is all this?” asked Twilight. “And how did you find me?”
“Well, I find you by simple deduction,” replied Hunter. “I know where Charity’s place is as well as yours. Since you can’t fly you would not be able to take a straight line. The best and safest route then would be to walk along the edge of the forest until you came to the next major road. As for what this is-” began Hunter, but stopped when he noticed the look in Twilight’s eyes. She was on the verge of tears. He ran to her, dropping the basket as he did. “Twilight, what’s wrong? Are you hurt?”
What happened next took him completely by surprise. Twilight wrapped her front legs around his neck and brought herself as close as possible to him. Then she began to cry, sobbing loudly. After a moment, Hunter responded by wrapping his front legs as well as his wings around Twilight, not saying a word but simply letting her get it all out.
Forty five minutes later the two of them were on a blanket that Hunter had packed. Twilight had calmed down and had told Hunter about everything that had happened today while eating a couple of the sandwiches that he had packed. The stallion said nothing; just letting Twilight let it all out. To show he was listening he would nod from time to time but overall he was silent. It was only when she had finished telling him everything did he speak.
“Well, I am sorry that your friends found out,” said Hunter. “Especially the way that they did. But I’m sure that they’ll get over it in time. I mean, they are your best friends, right?”
“I wish I could be so sure,” said Twilight. “I would be upset if I saw one of them doing that kind of stuff with my big brother.”
“Just give it some time,” said Hunter in a reassuring tone. “I mean, you mares are the holders of the Elements of Harmony. You have been through too much to let it all end like this.” Twilight’s eyes widened.
“How did you know that we’re the holders of the Elements?” she asked. She hadn’t even told him her full name, let alone something like that! Hunter’s grin widened.
“It was very easy,” he said calmly as he took a bite out of his sandwich. “There are many Twilight’s in Equestria, but the most famous one lives in Ponyville. It is also well know that she is the Princess’s student as well as being the smartest. I also happen to know that she runs the Ponyville library. Now, unless there is another Twilight as well as another library in Ponyville it would be safe to assume that you are the holder of the Element of Magic, Twilight Sparkle.” Hunter paused for a moment to take a drink of the apple juice he had brought in the basket. “Knowing this, I can assume that your friend Rainbow is really Rainbow Dash and every pony who reads the news paper knows who Apple Jack is.”
For a moment, Twilight stood there with her jaw open. She knew he was smart, but that was impressive. But she also had to admit that she gave a lot away. Maybe she should have tried harder to hide her friend’s identities. But somehow she doubted that it would have made a difference.
“Wow, you’re really good,” admitted Twilight. “So, why aren’t you a detective or something like that?” Hunter sighed.
“It’s because of my father. As long as I can remember he has gone on and on about our family history. How important it is that I carry on our traditions. I guess the main reason I’m not doing what I love is because I don’t want to let him down.” He then looked at Twilight with a sheepish expression. “Hey, I was wondering if…oh, never mind.”
“What is it?”
“It’s nothing. Really.”
“Well now you have to tell me,” said Twilight with a sly grin. “You got me all curious.”
“Well,” began Hunter as he took a deep breath. “I was wondering how I was compared to Big Mac.” As soon as he said this he looked away, clearly embarrassed.
Twilight stared at him for a moment as her mind did its best to comprehend what he had just said. Was he really asking her about that? She was about to tell him that she couldn’t talk about the clients she was with. It was basic privacy. Heck, she shouldn’t have told him about Big Mac in the first place. But before she could he turned to look at her and she saw something in his eyes that caused her to stop. It was a look that was a mixture of fear and hope. Fear that Twilight might not like him if he wasn’t good enough to please her and hope that Twilight didn’t care about things like that.
“Well,” began Twilight. “I can’t go into too many details but he was bigger down there.”
“Oh,” said a dejected Hunter.
“But, it’s not the size that matters but how you use it. And you use yours much better.” Hunter whipped his head to look at Twilight just in time for her to kiss him on the lips. It started as just pressing their lips together, but soon they were exploring each other’s mouths with their tongues. Together they moaned louder and louder as the seconds passed until finally they broke the kiss. They then just laid there next to each other, panting heavily. After a few moments, she turned to look at him and smiled. “If things keep going like this I’ll have to call you my coltfriend soon.”
“Really?” asked a hopeful Hunter. Twilight giggled as she kissed him again.
“Really.”
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The next day, Twilight was at Sweet Apple Acres to talk to Apple Jack. As she walked through the fields she was glad she hadn’t seen either Big Mac or Apple Bloom. Well, more Big Mac than Apple Bloom. After what had happened last night she was embarrassed to be seen by him. After walking for a while she came across Apple Jack who was apple bucking as well as rainbow Dash who was sitting on a cloud. As the unicorn pony approached Apple Jack stopped what she was doing. Slowly the two ponies walked over to each other.
For a while, the two stared into each others eyes. Both look uneasy by all of this. Being this close, Twilight could smell the sweat off of her friend from all of the hard work she had done. As for Apple Jack, she could see Twilight grinding one of her hooves into the ground nervously. Several times they both started to say something, but stopped once they realized that the other had started to speak. Then Twilight gestured to Apple Jack telling her to go ahead.
“Twi,” she began. “Ah’m sorry about the way ah treated ya last night. Ah know ya would never done something like that with my kin unless ya had to.”
“No,” said Twilight as she shook her head. “It was my fault. I should have said no right when I saw him. But I was so shocked and then he got on the bed and… I just wasn’t thinking. I hope you can forgive me.”
“Ain’t notin ta forgive,” said Apple Jack as she hugged Twilight. A moment later Twilight returned the hug as tears of joy ran down her face. Up on her cloud, Rainbow watched her two friends as she did her best to hold back her own tears. Soon the two let go of each other and Twilight began to dry her tears. “But, I have ta ask, why would ya work for Charity in da first place.”
“I guess I do owe you that,” said Twilight. Taking a deep breath, Twilight told them everything. From the damages Spike had caused to her finding out about Charity. She did skip some parts like her growing relationship with Hunter. For right now that was private and she didn’t want her friends to worry about that. She planned on telling them someday, but not now. “And that’s pretty much brings us to today. So, how did you girls meet up with Charity?”
“Kinda like ya did,” said Apple Jack. “Couple months before ya came ta Ponyville, Sweet Apple Acres was in a heap of trouble. Charity somehow heard about it an offered ta help. Ain’t no way ah was gonna let my family go homeless. It was when ah was working there that ah found Rainbow here had been working for her for a while. With my brother no less!”
“Hey, I told you before he has a list,” said Rainbow as she got off her cloud. She then landed next to the orange earth pony and sighed. “Well, as for me, I just need the money. Weather duty doesn’t pay all that much and I need the free time to work on my flying. One day I overheard some of the Pegasus ponies up at the weather factory talking about Charity. I got a little curious so I decided to find the place and it has been the best thing ever! The sex is great and I’m making a lot of money. I mean, how do you two think I was about to afford my house? It wasn’t moving clouds!”
“But what about that rumor going around that you’re…into mares?” asked Twilight nervously. Rainbow shrugged.
“To be honest, I’m bi,” replied Rainbow Dash. “Sometimes I like the soft touch of a mare, but mostly I just love the feeling of a hard cock pounding-”
“Thank you Rainbow,” interrupted Apple Jack who was blushing heavily.
“What I still can’t believe is how Charity can whore out mares like this,” said Twilight as she shook her head. “I mean, I always thought it was bad stallions who whored out mares.”
“Well then you don’t know the whole story,” said Rainbow. “See, Charity used to actually run a charity organization that helped out ponies who had lost their homes over in Manehattan. Then one day this stallion came along named Grifter and swept her off her hooves. However, he was only after her organizations bits. Sadly, no pony suspected him until it was too late. One day Charity finds out that all the bits are gone from her bank account and Grifter is gone. When the other ponies found out they demanded that she pay back all the bits. In the end she found herself working on the street. It took her years to work her way out of being a prostitute, but when she did she wanted to help the other ponies she had met. Some did like the work, but it just wasn’t safe so she created the house. She uses it to also create connections to help the mares once they are too old to continue or simply want out. That’s how it all began.” Both Apple Jack and Twilight stared at their rainbow colored friend for a moment. Rainbow shrugged. “Hey, she told me one time over hot cider.”
“I-I didn’t know,” said Twilight as she took this in. “So, do any of the other girls work there? I mean like Fluttershy, Pinkie, and Rarity?” Rainbow and Apple Jack looked at each other for a moment before they both burst out laughing.
“Sugarcube,” said Apple Jack between bursts of laughter. “Fluttershy gets nervous around her own shadow. Ah don’t think she’d last a second in a room full of stallion trying ta fuck her.”
“And just imagine what would happen in Pinkie Pie worked there,” exclaimed Rainbow right before she fell on her back. Twilight paused for a moment as she tried to envision it. She could see Pinkie throwing confetti in the air as she road on top of a random stallion. She could also see her talking nonstop throughout the entire process, driving the stallion nuts. Even Twilight had to admit that it sounded pretty funny.
“Alright, I see what you mean,” said Twilight with a giggle. “But what about Rarity?” This caused both of the other mares to stop laughing and calm down.
“Well, ah reckon she wouldn’t need to work at a place like that,” said Apple Jack thoughtfully. “Not unless she had ta.”
“Yeah, she can be a little uptight too,” said Rainbow. “I think she’s saving herself for her perfect stallion. But you never know, I mean we found you working there.”
“That’s true,” said Twilight with a little sigh.
“So, have ya been to the basement yet?” asked Apple Jack. Twilight shook her head no. “Well, the basement is where you can go when ya don’t really feel up ta havin sex.”
“See, there are two rooms in the basement,” continued Rainbow Dash. “The first room is for the really hardcore stuff. Stuff like yellow showers, bondage, and some other stuff that is just crazy. I went down there one time and came out branded by a red hot poker. It pay very, very well but the pain isn’t worth it if you don’t like those kinds of things.”
“What’s a yellow shower?” asked Twilight.
“Ah stallion pisses on ya,” said Apple Jack causing Twilight to make a face. “I know, it’s not a fun experience.”
“The other room is called the show room,” continued Rainbow Dash. “It’s mainly a stage that you can go on and put on a show for any stallion who wants in. You can masterbate in front of them, some mare on mare action, or whatever you want. In there, you keep the tips.”
“I guess its because I’m still new that I haven’t heard about some of these thing,” said Twilight.
“Well don’t ya worry none Sugarcube,” said Apple Jack. “We’ll be happy ta explain more later. But for now, me and Rainbow here have to get ready for tonight.”
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Well, hope you enjoyed it. I know this isn't my best, but the next chapter will be much better! In that chapter we have some threesome action going on. Before I go, I would like to thank superlink for his/her comment on how to add Luna. I had actually thought about that, but I discarded it for a couple of reasons. One was how would Luna find out? Then there are the legal stuff and she would be very noticeable there. But I do think I have an idea.
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