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Paying a Debt	By : DarthValgaav Category: +M through R > My Little Pony Views: 11678 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 2
Disclaimer: This is a non-profit fanfiction created for entertainment purposes only. I was not paid for this fanfiction and have no association with Hasbro, Lauren Faust or My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

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Once again, thanks for the reviews. I hope you all enjoy this chapter. I had some problems writing it and getting the southern slang down right. I hope I did a good job. I am still trying to think of how I can get Luna involved and was hoping some of you might have some ideas. Or any ideas in general on how to make this fic better.
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Twilight slowly began to stir next to Star Hunter. The Pegasus pony, who had been lying next to her for the better part of two hours, looked at her as her eyes slowly began to open. Weakly she looked up at Hunter and gave him a small smile which he happily returned.
“Hey,” she said softly.
“Hey,” he repeated. Twilight then began to nuzzle his neck affectionately, something that Hunter really enjoyed. He was about to say something when they both heard the door open downstairs.
“Twilight, I’m home,” called out Spike.
“Oh no, Spike,” whispered Twilight as she quickly stood up. “You have to get out of here!” Hunter nodded as he to quickly got up. He hurried towards the window, opened it, and flew away. But then he came back just as quickly and began to hover in front of the window. “What are you doing? You have to go before Spike see’s you!”
“I just wanted to know when I could see you next,” said Hunter quickly. Twilight’s eyes widened in shock when she heard that. Did he just want to fuck her again or did he mean it as something more? Before she could answer the door to her room opened. Twilight turned around to see Spike entering her room.
“Um, is something wrong Twilight,” he asked. “You didn’t answer when I call out to you.” Twilight turned her head to look out the window to see that Hunter was gone. With a sigh, she faced her assistant once more who looked a little confused.
“I’m fine now Spike,” she said. The, more to herself, she added “I think.”
Meanwhile, Hunter was flying back to Cloudsdale. As he flew his thoughts were moving faster than he was flying and that was pretty fast. Ok, said a bright voice in his head, she didn’t answer you right away. But that doesn’t mean no. You asked that question a bit suddenly when you should have just hurried out. Plus you could have said that you wanted a date or something. She might think that all you want is to sleep with her again.
But then another voice appeared in his head, a darker one. And why shouldn’t she. Let’s face it, every time the two of you have met it has been to fuck. The first time you had to pay for it. Well, your dad did, but it doesn’t change the fact that it was paid for!
That is true, agreed the first voice. But what about the second time? No bits changed hooves or anything like that. The two of you talked and then she wanted to do it. Maybe she likes you.
Please, grumbled the second voice. She used you like a practice toy to see if she was getting better. Plus she was a bit emotional after you just showed up at her place. She might have been scared and had sex with you to shut you up or something like that. You don’t know her! You don’t know what she’s like or what she’s capable of!
But does that really change the way you feel about her? You couldn’t get her out of your head. And you were amazed by her before you lost your virginity to her.
It’s just lust at first sight. You have never been in love before. You can only be in love with some pony that you know. She’s attractive and you’re horny. That could be all there is to it. So don’t go all mushy just because you slept with her twice!
“Shut up,” growled Hunter to himself to make the voices stop. Sadly it didn’t work. As Hunter made his way home the voices continued to go back and forth only shutting up once he opened the door to his home. Inside his father was standing near the table.
“Where have you been?” demanded Star Chaser as he looked up at his son. “I was looking all over the factory for you!”
“Sorry dad,” said Hunter. “I was having a hard time concentrating at work and I was advised that I should take some personal time. I promise it won’t happen again.”
Star looked at his son for several moments. He knew that he had never done anything like this before and that he always kept his promises. Still he was mad that Hunter decided to just up and leave without telling any pony. He could have at least left a note. But he did apologize so Chaser decided to let it go. This time.
“Alright then,” said Chaser. “Just don’t let it happen again.” Hunter nodded and went off to his room. As Chaser watched his son go up the stairs, he began to think about the meeting he had in his office earlier that day.
0Flashback0
Star Chaser was sitting behind his desk while Summer Breeze stood in front of it. He had offered her a drink, but she had flatly refused it. Not that it mattered for this would be a short meeting compared to what he had gone through today.
“So I believe you are wondering why I have called you here,” began Chaser. Summer Breeze nodded silently. “Well, before I tell you that I would like to ask a question. Your family is made of pure Pegasus pony blood, correct?”
“I-I believe so,” stammered Summer Breeze who was completely taken back by the question.
“Thanks good,” said Chaser. “Now then, did you know that my family has a long and proud history? Why, one of my ancestors was Corporal Star Arrow who served under Commander Hurricane. And up until three hundred years ago we had been a military family with nearly every member of the family making their way to General or Commander. But once the military was replaced with the Royal Guard we began to run this factory.”
“Ah, well, that’s nice and all but what does it have to do with me?” ask Summer Breeze.
“Very well,” said Chaser with a sigh. “I am in the middle of deciding who my son’s bride will be. And it has proven to be very difficult. So few families believe in arranged marriages these days and most of them unicorns. Those families simply won’t do. I was about to give hope, but then I saw you and that’s when it hit me.”
“Wait, wait,” said Summer Breeze frantically as she waved her hooves around. “Star Hunter is nice and all, but I barely know him. I can’t just marry him. And why can’t he marry a unicorn?”
“Tradition,” replied Star Chaser. “No one in my family has ever been a unicorn nor have they ever married one. We feel that unicorn’s magic cheapens the abilities of us Pegasus ponies. Like, for example, our ability to walk on the clouds. We should be the only ponies who can do this but with a simple spell so can a unicorn. It’s just not right. As for the reason I choose you, well, you are a very lovely Pegasus. Not to mention that you are a hard worker and that you care about this factory. Now I’m willing to…compensate you for doing this. Like say making sure that your father is well taking care of for the rest of his days.”
Star Chaser watched as Summer Breeze began to think about it. He knew that would get to her. It would get to nearly any pony who was watching their elderly parent work so hard. He could literally see the wheels in her head turning as she thought about what this would mean for her. Perhaps the biggest question she had was how she would be treated. Chaser knew that Hunter would treat her right, maybe better than he treated his own wife before she left. But she didn’t know that.
“I’ll…I’ll have to think it over,” said Summer Breeze with a small sigh.
“Of course, of course,” said Chaser. “Tell you what; I’ll give you plenty of time to think this over. I’m booked solid for the next month so we’ll meet then. Does that sound alright to you?” Summer Breeze nodded and a few moments later she was out the door. As soon as she was out, Chaser went over the schedule and made sure that her father not only kept his job, but would also be working triple time for the next month.
0Flashback End0
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The next morning, Twilight was in a daze. It wasn’t because she didn’t get enough sleep. Actually, she slept in which almost caused the library to open late! The reason for her behavior was because of the dreams she had the previous night. In each one of them there was a Pegasus pony whose face she couldn’t see. Nor could she see his cutie mark. Yet despite this, the stallion swept her off her hooves. He took her out to dinner, they read together, and even had a picnic. And at the end of each outing he would ravish her body in every way the unicorn mare knew, some from experience while others came from the Pony Sutra. He would eat her out while playing with her asshole with his wings. She would suck on his cock until she drank his hot stallion juice. Then, they would have sex in every possible position. Some Twilight didn’t even think was possible. And when she had finally woken up she realized that she was dripping wet.
As the day went on, Twilight stumbled through. Most of the time she need to ask other ponies to repeat what they said. When she went to study she would stare at the page for several long minutes with her eyes clearly unfocused. Luckily for her no pony had asked what was wrong with her.
It wasn’t until lunchtime when she finally snapped out of it. She had been in the basement for some reason that not even she remembered. But when she came out she saw Hunter talking to Spike on the main library floor. Her eyes widened in shock when she saw this and her heart began to race. What was going on here? Why was he talking to Spike? With a twitching eyebrow she slowly walked over to the two as Hunter turned his head to look at her.
“Hey there Twilight,” he greeted her.
“Well,” said Spike. “I think I’ll get to work on some of my chores.” With that, the little purple dragon left the room while doing his best to hold back a smile. He had been worried about Twilight’s social life since before they left Canterlot. It had improved greatly since they came here, but Twilight still hadn’t taken much of an interest in stallions. He knew that there were several stallions, as well as a few mares, that had wanted to ask her out for some time now. But she was hard to approach. When she wasn’t with her friends she had her nose in a book or something like that. Not only that, she was Princess Celestia’s prized student. Break her heart and some pony might get a one way trip to the moon.
Imagine Spike’s surprise when Hunter came in asking if Twilight was free. While Spike did want Twilight to go out and have a good time, he was still saw her as an older sister. Thus he had to make sure that Star Hunter was on the level. And after talking to him for several minutes while Twilight was doing who knows what Spike felt that he was all right.
“He seems like a nice dragon,” commented Hunter as they watched Spike leave.
“He is,” agreed Twilight before she turned her head to look at Hunter. “So, what brings you here this time?”
“Well, I’m on my lunch break and I was wondering if you would like to get something to eat with me,” said Hunter with a smile.
“You mean like a date or something?” asked the purple mare. Hunter nodded. “Look Hunter, you’re a nice stallion and all, but I don’t think that it’s a good idea to date you considering how we met.”
“I don’t care about how we met,” said Hunter. “Twilight, I haven’t been able to get you out of my head. Maybe it’s because our first meeting and what we did yesterday or maybe it’s something else. Maybe I am confusing love and lust. But I want to know you so I can figure it out my feelings. So, for right now, I just want to take you out to eat so we can get to know each other and that’s all. I’m not expecting anything else.”
“I kind of feel the same way,” admitted Twilight. “But I don’t think any kind of relationship will work right now. Won’t it bother you that I have to ‘be with’ other ponies until my debt is cleared?”
“I would be lying if I said no,” said Hunter honestly. “Still I know that you have to do this and you’re going to see it through till the end. And most likely you’ll stop once your debt is gone, right?” Twilight nodded. “Then until then the least I can do is help you out. Even if nothing happens between us I’d like us to be friends. I want to lessen your load as well as help you out as much as I can.”
“Thank you,” said Twilight as she wiped away the tears that were forming in her eyes. “You know, I don’t think lunch is a bad idea.” Without another word the two left the library and made their way to one of the local restaurants.
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The next night, Twilight found herself once again in the room Charity had given her. There were, however, a few things different. Like instead of flowers in the vase there were apple blossoms. Also there was a small table on the back with two mugs of apple cider.
Now, as Twilight waited for the special client, she laid on the bed just thinking about her date yesterday. True to his word, Hunter didn’t expect any kind of service after words. He treated with more respect than she thought she deserved. He walked next to her the entire way and then walked her home. But before he left he gave her a small kiss on the check that made her go beet red.
The odd thing was that they had a lot in common. One for example was their love of books. It turned out that Hunter had a thing for astronomy as well as detective novels. They actually had a small and oddly enjoyable argument over who was the better detective: Sherlock Hooves or Sleuth Haysworth. Just remembering that brought a smile to the mares face. All and all, it was a very nice first date and she looked forward to the next one.
There was a sudden knock on the door and a moment later it opened. Twilight turned her head to see who it was right before her jaw dropped open. Her eyes widened as she saw the red earth pony enter the room with a big grin on his face.
“Well, you sure do look the way I wanted you to,” said Big Macintosh. Then he noticed her cutie mark and froze. “Twilight, is that you?”
“…Yes,” she replied.
“Déjà vu,” muttered Big Mac as he walked over to the table with the mugs and drank one in a single gulp. He had asked Charity to do this for him because it helped calm his nerves. Usually he was a mess around mares, barely able to say a complete sentence. Which was why he came here. So far he had been with three mares and only one of them from the list he had made. The reason for this wasn’t because he was picky but more of a money issue. Money was tight around the farm so he had to save every bit and hide it so his sisters wouldn’t find out.
Part of him wondered why a mare like Twilight was working at a place like this. He didn’t pursue this because in the end it didn’t matter. She was here and that was all that mattered. Nearly every day at least one of his sister’s friends would come by the farm. Each one of them were so attractive that he would dream about having an orgy with them. When he heard about the list option from Charity he jumped at the chance and wrote down each of their descriptions in the hopes that he could at least pretend to be with them. And right now he didn’t need to pretend.
“Does Apple Jack know you’re here?” asked Twilight.
“Nnope,” said Mic Mac as he got onto the bed. “Now don’t you worry none about my sister. Time for me to get my money’s worth.” With that he brought his now enlarged cock close to Twilight’s face. The poor mares eyes widened at the size of it. Hey, he wasn’t called ‘Big’ for nothing. The thing was so big that she was afraid it wouldn’t fit in her mouth. So, taking a deep breath, she got to work.
Twilight decided that it would be best to take it slow. She began with a few light licks, slowly getting a taste of the stallions cock. It wasn’t bad, but it did have an order to it. Most likely sweat from all the work he did around the farm. It took a little while before she could get used to it so she could begin giving him longer lick up and down his member. She started with the front before slowly working her way to the left. Once she had given it the proper attention she worked her way to the right side, never once stopping in her actions.
It was only when she tasted his pre-cum running down his cock did she begin to move up towards the head. She teased it for a while, using a few light licks. She then paused as she pulled away to look at it for a moment and then gulped. Twilight opened her mouth as wide as she could and just barely got it inside of her mouth. With very little room, Twilight did her best to move her tongue around while applying some suction.
Big Mac could not contain his moan as he felt Twilights warm mouth surround his cock. His eyes then shut tightly as he began to feel her tongue move around it. Taking deep breathes to keep himself from cuming to soon he reached down with his front hooves and placed them behind Twilight’s head. He then began to press down, bringing his cock deeper into her mouth. He heard Twilight making sounds of protect and stopped, but didn’t remove his hooves for it felt too good. The sounds she continued to make caused tiny vibrations on his cock which stimulated it enough to make him blow his load in her mouth. As he felt his white goo fill her mouth he finally released her causing most of it to rush out her mouth.
Twilight began to cough as the cum poured down her face. What he had done was totally unexpected and he had given her no warnings. She had hoped that he would have been gentle with her like Hunter was or as passionate. Sadly he wasn’t. She also knew that the hour was nowhere near over.
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Meanwhile, Apple Jack was outside Caramel’s place with a bag full of sandwiches. She smiled to herself while she imagined the look on her big brothers face when she gave them to him. Earlier that day Big Mac had told her that he was going to Caramel’s to play some cards. Sort of a stallion’s night out. It was nice seeing that her brother rarely ever did anything like that. And while she didn’t want to interrupt any ‘stallion time’ she did want them to eat right so she made them some hay and apple slice sandwiches.
She knocked on the door and waited for several seconds before Caramel opened the door looking a bit surprised.
“Howdy Caramel,” greeted Apple Jack as she set the bag down in front of him. “Sorry for interrupting, but ah made y’all some sandwiches. Hope you and Big Mac enjoy them!”
“Wow, these look really good,” said Caramel as he opened the bag. “But Big Mac isn’t here.” This caused Apple Jack’s eyebrow to rise.
“Say what now? But ah was told that you two were playing cards tonight!”
“Nope,” said Caramel as he pulled out one of the sandwiches and took a bite. “Heck, I don’t even like playing cards. Horse shoes sure, but not cards.” It was then that he noticed that Apple Jack’s face had turned a bright red color and steam was coming out of her ears.
In a rage she took off at full speed. Her brother had LIED to HER. It was rare when it happened and most of the time he had a good reason. Like to spare her feelings or something like that. But lying about where he was going meant only one thing and she would drag him from that place kicking and screaming!
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Twilight was moaning loudly from Big Mac’s actions. Her front hooves were against the wall for support as the red stallion eagerly licking her lower slit. His tongue moved rapidly up and down her pussy occasionally hitting her clit. Her had been doing this for a while and showed no signs of stopping. She could feel her climax coming several times, but each time he would slow down for a while making her moan in disappointment.
Then Big Mac did something that made Twilight gasp more out of shock than anything else. He slowly moved upwards and began to lick her asshole. The feeling was new and made her feel uncomfortable. She tried to bare it for a while but it was simple too much for her to handle right now. Plus the idea of some pony licking her poop shoot just seemed far to gross.
“Big Mac please stop,” begged Twilight. “I don’t like this.”
“But Twilight, you’re wetter than ever before,” said Big Mac. While he did stop he kept his face close to her other hole. Part of him hoped he could talk her into trying anal with him like he did with the last mare he had.
“Please,” said Twilight in a small voice. “I really don’t like it.”
“Alright then,” said Big Mac in defeat. He knew what would happen if he pushed things too far. So, reluctantly, he pulled his face away from her asshole. But instead of moving back to her pussy he got up on top of her. He did his best to align his cock with her pussy but missed several times. Getting tired of missing, Big Mac pulled his body back a little bit and used a hoof to help him get it right. Once it was ready the red stallion began to push it in slowly.
Twilight gasped out in pain as she felt her pussy being stretched out. She closed her eyes and did her best to bare it as he slowly went deeper and deeper inside of her. Just slow enough to give her a chance to adjust but nothing else.
Big Mac let out a grunt. He knew he was big, but Twilight was much tighter than the previous mares. Her pussy was also warm and wrapped around his cock. He could hear her displeasure but he was loving this feeling too much. It was taking all of his self control just to move as slow as he was. Once he was half way in he pulled out a bit causing Twilight to sigh in relief. He stopped before he was all the way out and began to move back in while going a little farther this time. He continued to do this for a while, slowly building up his speed. As he did this, Twilight’s groans began to turn into moans of pleasure which urged him on.
While it had hurt her at first, Twilight was slowly beginning to enjoy this. Sure it still hurt a little, but the position she was in rubbed her insides in a new way creating a new kind of pleasure. There was something carnal about being taken from behind and Twilight was finding a great deal of pleasure in it. Soon she began to feel her orgasm building up.
“I’m going to cum,” grunted Big Mac as he began to pick up the speed. His thrusts suddenly becoming wild.
“Please hold on just a little long,” begged Twilight. “I’m almost-” Her words were cut off as Twilight felt his warm white goo fill up her insides and his thrusts stopped. The purple mare let out a groan, she was close to her own release and Big Mac couldn’t hold on for just a little bit. But, then again, she supposed this was more about him getting pleasure than her. In the end she would have to get used to the idea that there would be times when she would come close to her own orgasm but never reach it. Then, without warning, Big Mac let his entire weight fall on top of Twilight.
Meanwhile, down on the main floor, mare and stallions were just chatting. It was like this every night. Stallions would go up to mares, find out what they would or wouldn’t do, and then get comfortable with them. Some Stallions would come just to look while others would spend thousands of bits in a single night. And then, of course, there were those in between the two. Yet every pony stopped talking as an orange earth pony ran through the main door and smashed open a door leading to one of the rooms.
“Apple Jack, please stop this,” begged Charity as she ran towards the farming mare who was screaming the couple inside the room.
“Ah don’t have time for ya Charity,” snapped Apple Jack as she left the room. “Ah need to find her.” That last word was said with a great deal of venom. While Charity dealt with her costumers, who were scared as well as upset, Apple Jack smashed down another door. And then another one and continued to do this until she was on the second level. It was there that she heard her voice.
“Are you sure about this?” Apple Jack heard her say loudly through the door. Wasting no time, Apple Jack bucked the door down. Inside she saw Rainbow Dash hovering over Soarin who was tied to the bed. Apple Jack raised an eyebrow as she noticed that his cock was covered in whip cream and it looked like Rainbow was about to put an apple in his mouth. The two stared at her for a moment before the rainbow maned pony flew over to her. “Apple Jack, what’s the big deal?”
“Ah want ta know where my brother is,” stated Apple Jack.
“Well as you can see he isn’t here,” replied Rainbow as she turned her head to check on Soarin. To her disappointment his cock had become limp. “Great, you killed the mood in ten seconds flat. Look, if I knew where Big Mac was I’d tell you just to get you out of my mane.” Apple Jack was about to accuse Rainbow of lying to her when Soarin spoke up.
“Ah, is he a big red earth pony by any chance.” Apple Jack nodded. “Well, when I came in I saw him heading to the last room on the third floor. I only remember because he was bouncing up and down as he went like he was super happy or something.”
“Thanks a bunch Sugarcube,” said Apple Jack as she quickly left the room. However, a moment later she reappeared at the door and gave Soarin a sly look before blowing him a kiss. The Pegasus pony blushed at this as the farmer pony left once more.
“Well this I gotta see,” said Rainbow Dash as she too left the room. The two mares quickly made it up to room 30 and, once again, Apple Jack smashed the door down. The two mares looked inside but what they saw caused them to gasp. The saw Twilight trying in vain to get out from under Big Mac who had fallen asleep. A thousand questions filled Apple Jacks mind but before she could ask any of them Charity cleared her thought behind them.
“Miss Apple Jack,” she began, her voice level but clearly angry. “Not only have you damaged my property but also disrupted my business. I believe you know how you can make this up to me!”
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