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Phoenix of the West
By : PatPat
Category: Avatar - The Last Airbender > FemmeSlash - Female/Female
Views: 3846 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0Disclaimer: I do not own Avatar: The Last Airbender, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. - Chapter List
Phoenix of the West
Punishment
By Pat Squared
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312 Years after the Death of Jian Li
313 years after the Defeat of Ozai the Mad
Whack!
Sedna looked on as Madam Wren, Ling’s chaperone, struck the young princess with a ridding crop. Whipping was unknown in the Southern Water Tribes. However, the lash seemed to be a time honored tradition in the Fire Nation.
“Twelve.”
Whack!
Li Ling tried to suppress a whimper, but no amount of pride could give the Fire Nation princess the ability to ignore the pain.
“Thirteen.”
Whack!
Li Ling finally whimpered. Sedna knew that Li Ling was hurt more by the fact that she whimpered than the physical pain of the beating. The nurse threw in more and more effort with every blow. Sedna remembered getting swatted on the bottom once by her father for talking back to her mother, but she had never experienced the pain that Li Ling was now suffering.
Yet, tonight Sedna knew that Li Ling will be planning some other outrage.
“Fourteen.”
Sedna knew that this would not be the last time that whip will be used on the fiery tempered Fire Nation princess. Sedna could see the welts already developing on Li Ling’s back.
Whack!
Sedna watched as the crop finally cut into the pale skin of the young girl. The water bender’s eyes followed as a drop of blood oozed out of the cut and lead the way for more blood.
“Fifteen.”
Whack!
There was only supposed to be fifteen blows. Only fifteen.
“That was for defying me in public and calling me a fat rhino cow!”
Whack!
“That was for making me look like a fool.”
Whack!
“No one makes me look like one of those dumb Eastern Earth Kingdom ladies.”
Whack!
“Not even you. Your mother gave me the right to determine when and how you should be punished. She gave me the right to determine, how long you are to stay at your cousins for education. I will use all my power to break you, your highness.”
Whack!
The look in the eye of the nurse scared the daughter of the Southern Water Tribe ambassador. Both the nurse and Li Ling hated one another and there was no hiding the fact. Both nurse and child would not quit until they have broken the spirit of their foe. Sedna knew that neither would give up the contest of wills and that this would not be the last time that Li Ling would be whipped until blood was drawn.
“That is enough for now. Should you even look at me funny, your highness, I will give you twenty more and I won’t feel any urge to restrain myself.”
Li Ling kissed the whip and asked for more physical punishment as was the custom. Unlike the other who disciplined the Fire Nation princess, the nurse actually accepted and delivered three more quick blows.
“Lady Sedna, please take our erring princess to her cabin. She won’t be dining with us civilized folks tonight.”
Sedna hated the nurse that was assigned to discipline her best friend.
In the end the nurse was actually enjoying inflicting like a glutton enjoyed candies.
Sedna wanted to do something, but what could she do. She was only a child and thus invisible to adults. It was not the first time that she had to watch Li Ling kiss the whip and ask for more pain. The nurse, the look in the eye, reminded her of the look in the eyes of the black and white whale that hunted the seals in the water of her homeland. They were cruel and intelligent, deriving as much pleasure from the deliberate infliction of pain as from consuming the flesh of their prey.
“Don’t say a word,” commanded Sedna’s best friend, “Don’t even try to bring me some diner tonight. I will die before I give that bloated, waddling rhino cow the satisfaction.”
Sedna’s father told Sedna the tale of how the legendary Blue Spirit Jian Li would fight, fail, and then pick his dying body up and rush back into battle. Sedna could not believe that someone would do such a thing. Now she knew. Li Ling had something inside of her that would never let her quit. Li Ling would not surrender, but endure the pain until she defeated her enemy.
“Please Ling, you don’t have to...”
“Sedna, I have to. It’s in my blood. I was born to never quit. I will win in the end.”
Sedna knew that this would be a long year – A very long, painful year for both the girls. She saw the look in her best friend’s eye. The water bender knew that Li Ling was planning another salvo in the war between child and nurse.- You need to be logged in to leave a review for this story.You need to be logged in to leave a review for this story.
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