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Nights in White Satin	By : ImagineLayla131 Category: +S through Z > Total Drama Island Views: 6335 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 1
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN NOR HAVE ANY AFFILIATIONS WITH THE TOTAL DRAMA FRANCHISE OR NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN. ALL PROPERTIES OWNED BY TELETOON AND THE MOODY BLUES, RESPECTIVELY. NO MONEY/PROFIT IS BEING MADE OFF OF THIS FANFICTION!

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Hello world and my wonderful readers! How was Christmas? Mine was ok.
This chapter is where everything about Duncan will be revealed, who Moyer is, and what is going on with the two of them. In a way, Nights in White Satin is kind of like my own Breaking Bad. There's a huge lead up with intense yet unpredictable twists and turns, and it's all been building up to this moment now and what will happen afterwards, because this is not the last chapter. I can only hope that it is as well received as the BrBa finale, with the generalized overview being that everything was wrapped up in a perfectly neat present,. Since I have known what happens in my storyfor a couple years now, I'm actually a little nervous as to how the outcome of this chapter will be perceived by everybody. All I ask of my readers is to PLEASE not reveal any spoilers in the reviews, for I want to keep the suspense and surprise in tact for people that have yet to read the story. Thank you! :)
This chapter is probably the shortest one so far, but I posted it to both briefly suppress then re-ignite the anticipation.
Thanks for the reviews, follows, and favorites! :D I can not believe that in nine weeks I have 11,698 views, 142 reviews, 23 follows, and 17 favorites! HOLY COW! It gives me hope that the original version of the story will be well received also :). I haven't been going through the easiest of times lately, these reviews have given me such a warm happiness and a boost for my recently deflated confidence/self esteem. The more reviews I get, the quicker I update, but you all know I'd update regardless! I'm overjoyed and inspired to write!
I really want to hit 200 and more reviews! I've been advertising the story on Instagram, I hope it works! I did not draw the cover image, I found that on Instagram also, but if any and all artists want to do some fan art, message me! I'd be beyond thrilled! I am proud to announce that the first piece of FanArt has been completed! SySaiyan drew this awesome piece inspired by Chapter Three! From the sounds of it, there will be more to come
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Be sure to check out my next Total Drama story, Back to Life, Chapter One is already posted!
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN NOR HAVE ANY AFFILIATIONS WITH THE TOTAL DRAMA FRANCHISE OR NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN. ALL PROPERTIES OWNED BY TELETOON AND THE MOODY BLUES, RESPECTIVELY.
I ONLY OWN THE TAINTED KITTY, THE STRIPPER NAMES, AND MY OWN ORIGINAL STORY IDEAS, WHICH CAME FROM THE SCREENPLAY I'VE BEEN WRITING AND HAS BEEN COPYRIGHTED
Chapter Twenty Five: The Dark Knight Unveiled
Alejandro had gone back to choking Duncan. Once again, they both struggled to grab the gun, with Alejandro reaching it first. They were both heavily panting, covered in blood, contusions, and sweat. Alejandro watched Duncan look over at an unconscious Courtney and laughed. "Don't worry. She'll shortly be joining you, because I've decided to kill both of you. I hope this was worth it." He pointed the gun in his face. "Any final words?"
Duncan dropped the accent and started laughing. His mouth and arm bleeding, a shiner already forming, and his soon-to-be bruised body already throbbing in pain. In a matter of seconds, it was all going to be worth it.
"Yes. How does it feel to be double crossed twice?"
Alejandro gave him a confused look. "What?"
Suddenly, the doors burst open and practically off the hinges. A swarm of men dressed in heavily padded uniforms and helmets entered through every door of the club and through the ceiling, a helicopter could be heard flying above. They were all carrying guns and Chris had no idea what was going on, only Duncan knew and Alejandro was having his suspicions.
Without answering, Duncan flipped Alejandro over and grabbed the gun, pointing it in his face. A tall and buff man wearing a suit approached them, with a group of suit-clad men behind him.
"Freeze, FBI! We have the place surrounded! Drop your weapons and surrender!"
Chris and Alejandro were in pure shock. FBI?!SWAT TEAM?!"How the fuck did you do this?" Alejandro asked.
Duncan rose to his feet, smirking. "Plain and simple, Alejandro. I had you fooled." He pulled out his wallet and flipped it open, showing a picture of his real ID.
"Duncan Harrister, Undercover FBI. Cuff him, DJ."
DJ smiled at Duncan. He was a tall and buff Jamaican with smooth chocolate brown eyes that were a shade darker than his skin and a mouth full of pearly whites. "Man, I can't tell you how long I've been waiting for those words to be said."
Duncan returned the smile. "Likewise, Moyer."
Moyer grabbed Alejandro and brought him to his feet, the Brazilian was fuming. "YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS, ROOKIE!" He shouted as he was being cuffed.
DJ scoffed as he heard the 'click' of the handcuffs. "Yeah, yeah. Keep talking out of your ass. You're not going anywhere for a long, long time. This isn't even the worst of it, Pal. Wait until The Virginia Farm Boys get a hold of you."
Duncan laughed watching Moyer lead him out, then turned his attention back to Agents Asher Campbell and Michael Donovan. Asher was just under six feet with a strong jaw, grey eyes, salt and pepper hair, and a bit of a gut. Michael Donovan was around Duncan's height and very muscular, with short brown hair, blue eyes, and a nose that looked like it had been broken in a boxing match.
"How many fatalities are there?" Agent Campbell asked as Duncan looked around.
"Four, but one seems to be missing. Call a bus, make it two. That prick managed to shoot me in the arm, I don't think it's too serious, but he had his men beat up that McLean guy pretty badly. Mirandize him, then have him treated. Geoff and Tyler are in the back with the girls and the rest of the employees. Get them outside, they'll have to be questioned, but that can wait until after the EMTs check them out, they're pretty shaken up."
Agent Donovan nodded. "You got it, and the diamonds?"
Duncan nodded his head. "Over there. We'll look through them later. I want the place cleared and searched."
They both nodded and left, approaching Chris. "Hey, who the hell are you?" He asked as the two men walked up, Agent Campbell behind him.
"Chris McLean, you are under arrest for racketeering activity." Asher snapped the handcuffs on Chris.
"What the fuck?!" He was livid as Agent Donovan read his rights and they walked off.
"You have the right to remain silent, anything you say or do can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to an attorney, if you can not afford one, one will be appointed for you. Do you understand these rights as I have read them to you?"
Chris jumped up, trying to get away from them. "Racketeering my perfectly toned ass! Fuck the RICO Act, I did nothing wrong!"
The two agents secured an even tighter grip on either one of his arms and lead him outside. "He's going to be a tough one, I can tell."
Everybody involved was a bit relieved that Alejandro was finally caught, but this was far from over. Duncan rushed over to Courtney and dropped to the ground, trying to shake her awake. "Court? Courtney?! Oh god, please don't be dead." He started crying when she didn't wake up, and wasn't entirely sure if he was hearing a heart beat or feeling a pulse. Duncan felt as if he was shot in the heart, she had been taken away from him too soon. "I really was in love with you. I still am. I didn't mean any of those words I said earlier. I was only saying it to try and fool him to spare your life, so that he'd shoot me instead. I love you, Princess, more than I've ever loved any girl before and more than I'll ever love any girl again. You're the love of my life." Duncan sniffled, clutching her body close to him.
After a few minutes, Courtney slowly opened her eyes and looked up to see Duncan crying in her hair. It was so touching, but she thought she'd tease him a little. "Can… the mellow… dramatics…" She said in a soft, raspy tone, and started coughing.
Duncan stopped crying and he looked down on her in shock. "Courtney?!" He sat her up and smoothed her hair out, but the tears didn't stop flowing from his eyes.
She ran her fingers through his hair before resting her hand on his cheek, stroking it and his ear. "You're not trying to win an Oscar, are you?"
They both cracked a smile. "Still the sarcastic ass that you are. But how…?" He felt her head for bumps but didn't find anything.
"Most of the pain is in my back. I guess it's true what they say, the human skull is really thick."
Duncan couldn't help but start laughing as happy tears fell from his eyes. "You have no idea how happy I am right now."
She smiled up at him. "Likewise, Rookie."
He scoffed, rolling his eyes. "It's just Duncan."
Courtney smiled. "Just Duncan."
They both started laughing and embraced each other, for they were on the way to being back to good.
DUNCAN WAS UNDERCOVER FOR THE FBI THIS WHOLE TIME?! DID ANYBODY SEE THAT COMING?! AGENTS ASHER CAMPBELL AND MICHAEL DONOVAN WERE BOTH MODELED AFTER SAM AXE AND MICHAEL WESTEN FROM THE SHOW BURN NOTICE, AND THE ACTORS THAT PLAY THEM, BRUCE CAMPBELL AND JEFFREY DONOVAN, RESPECTIVELY. (BRUCE CAMPBELL'S CHARACTER IS NAMED ASH IN THE EVIL DEAD FILM FRANCHISE SERIES.) AGAIN, ALL I ASK OF MY READERS AND FANS IS TO PLEASE CONCEAL THE SURPRISE AND NOT REVEAL ANY SPOILERS IN THE REVIEWS FOR PEOPLE THAT HAVE YET TO READ THE STORY. THANK YOU! :) ALSO, THE VIRGINIA FARM BOYS IS A NICKNAME FOR THE CIA. CHAPTER TWENTY FIVE WILL BE UP SOON, AND THINGS ARE NOT AS PEACHY AS THEY SEEM HERE, THERE WILL ALSO BE ANOTHER TWIST IN THE STORY. LIKE I SAID, IT'S NOT OVER YET...
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