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Paying a Debt	By : DarthValgaav Category: +M through R > My Little Pony Views: 11678 -:- Recommendations : 1 -:- Currently Reading : 2
Disclaimer: This is a non-profit fanfiction created for entertainment purposes only. I was not paid for this fanfiction and have no association with Hasbro, Lauren Faust or My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic

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I would like to start by thanking everyone who reviewed. Reviews can help a writer make his/her story better. I plan on making this story epic and not every chapter will contain sex. I want this to be a good story that everyone can enjoy.
Now, as for the future, I have planned out some mare on mare action as well as a couple threesomes. If there is any pony you would like to see I will consider it. One pairing I would like to do would be Luna and Twilight but I am having a hard time thinking on just how to do that. There will also be some OC’s as well as some background ponies. Like Star Hunter for example. He was in Hurricane Fluttershy.
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“Hey Twilight, are you ok?” asked Spike. Both he and Twilight were in the library re-shelving book. However he had noticed that Twilight would wince in pain every once in a while and wasn’t moving as quickly as she normally would.
It had been about a day and a half since Twilight had lost her virginity. Like she had promised, Charity had given her the bit and had subtracted the money that Twilight now owed her from the total. Naturally Twilight used all of the bits to pay off the bills. She wanted to pay back Charity back as fast as she could, but Charity had told her to wait a few days before coming back. If she went there too often then ‘certain’ ponies might show up and close her business. Not to mention that Twilight was still sore from her first experience.
“I’ll be fine,” said Twilight as she smiled. Suddenly there was a knock at the back door.
“I’ll get it,” said Spike. The baby dragon ran to the other side of the library and opened the door. “Hi, can I help you?”
“Yes,” said a lime green mare he had never seen before. “I’m here to see Miss Twilight.”
Twilight dropped all the books she had been magically holding up when she heard Charity’s voice. A million things were racing in her head. What was she doing here? What if her friends found out what she was doing? What if Spike found out? If Spike were to find out that she had to whore herself out because of what he had done then he would feel even worse! Twilight did her best to compose herself as she walked towards the back.
“Charity,” she said with a slight smile. “Would you like to come in?”
“I think that would be best,” replied Charity. As she walked in Twilight looked at Spike.
“Spike, I need to talk to Charity by myself for awhile,” she said as calmly as she could. “How about you talk some time for yourself and go see Rarity.”
“Really?” asked Spike who was excited to get out of doing boring work as well as the thought of seeing Rarity. Twilight nodded and Spike ran off. Once he was gone Twilight turned to see that Charity was now sitting at the breakfast table.
“Would you like something to drink?” asked Twilight who was a bit nervous?
“Oh, I’m fine but thank you,” replied Charity. “I don’t plan on staying that long. To put it simply I was in town and thought it would be a good idea to see how you were feeling.”
“Still a little sore,” said Twilight honestly. Charity nodded with a smile.
“That’s good because I have a friend who would like to meet you,” said Charity who chose her words carefully. She had been doing this long enough to know that at any moment some pony could barge in during a conversation. And if said pony heard the wrong thing then he or she might just go to the police. “You see my dear; sometimes a stallion comes along who is looking for something specific. Like a unicorn mare with a brown coat, red mane, and blue eyes for example. The reasons for these desires vary. One reason is that they simple like the coloration. Another is that they want some pony that resembles another from their past. Sadly sometimes I am unable at the time to provide them these mares. But what I can do for them is write down what they are looking for and do my best to find a mare that matches or is close enough to what they are looking for.”
“And some pony wants to…be with me?” asked Twilight.
“Yes,” said Charity. “This stallion wrote down several descriptions of mares he would like to spend some time with. So far I have only been able to find one of them before you and oddly it was the one I thought would be the hardest due to the mane colors. Naturally this service costs more.”
Twilight knew what she was getting at. The higher the cost meant the more money went towards paying off her debt. It also meant more money for her, but she would rather pay off the debt and be done with this all.
“So when do I meet him?” asked Twilight.
“Hopefully in two days,” answered Charity. “I’ll head over to his home and tell him that you are interested. I’ll also find out if he can pay.” She then got up and began to walk towards the door but then stopped. She then reached into one of her saddle bags and pulled out some red, limp plastic thing that Twilight had never seen before. “Oh, I almost forgot to give you this.”
“Ah, what is it?” asked Twilight who stared at it.
“It’s a training tool,” answered Charity. “Here, how about you zap it with some of your magic. Any kind will do really.” Twilight looked at the thing, then at Charity, and then back at the thing. Not knowing what else to do, as well as being slightly curious as to what it was, she sent a low level spell into it. Almost immediately the red thing began to straighten out and take the form of a cock. “This little wonder is used my unicorn ponies. It’ll stay hard so long as you don’t bit into it. If you do the magic is released and it becomes limp. Simply marvelous what some ponies think up.”
“I…I guess,” said Twilight slowly. Charity placed the magical dildo on the table as well as a book that she also produced from her saddle bag. Twilight looked at the cover and saw that it was called The Pony Sutra. She quickly looked up at Charity who simply gave her a wink before leaving the building.
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Star Hunter sighed at his desk in the Cloudsdale weather factory. Normally he would busy with assigning Pegasus ponies various weather duties, checking the status of the water, making sure the rainbows were the right colors, and a thousand other duties that his father had left him. But recently he was having a hard time focusing. It wasn’t that he didn’t care about the work for he knew how important it was for all the ponies that lived in Equestria. Nor was it about the strange meetings his father had been having recently. No, Star Hunter couldn’t keep him mind on his work because he kept thinking about Twilight.
It makes no sense, he thought as he tried to focus on the papers in front of him. I mean sure she was beautiful. No, wait, gorgeous is more like it. With that mane that matched her coat perfectly and…FOCUS! Get a hold of yourself Hunter. You barely know her. The only reason we were even together that night was because your dad paid for it. It’s not like she cares about you or anything. Caring for you with those beautiful eyes that make you want to just stare into all day. Or that perfectly shaped horn. Or her nicely shaped-
“Hey Hunter!” yelled Rainbow Dash who had been standing in front of him desk for a bit. Hunter, who was very surprised, jumped into the air before crashing back into his chain. “Ah, can I please have next week’s weather schedule for Ponyville. I need to know so I can plan my training.”
“Oh, ah, right,” muttered Hunter as he began to search for the right paper. After plowing through several stacks he finally found what he was looking for and gave the paper to Rainbow.
“Alright,” said a happy Rainbow Dash. “Mostly clear skies this week. Easy!” She then looked at the mess Hunter had made and sighed. This wasn’t like him. In the few years she had known him Hunter was an organized pony who always kept him mind on his work. Well, except when he was reading a detective novel. “Ok, what’s wrong with you?”
“N-Nothing,” stammered Hunter. “What makes you think something is wrong?” Rainbow just let out a growl as her eyes narrowed, causing Hunter to sigh. “Ok, something is wrong but it’s…complicated.”
“Well maybe talking about it might help.” Hunter looked at Rainbow Dash for a moment before he nodded. Maybe talking about it would help. Not all the details, of course.
“It’s like this,” he began. “I meet this mare the other night and now all I can think about is her. My mind just keeps drifting towards her.”
“Wow, must have been some date,” commented Rainbow.
“It wasn’t actually a date,” said Hunter as he looked away.
Rainbow Dash tilted her head to the side in confusion. She had no idea what he was getting at. She tried thinking about it but all she got was that he must of bumped into this mare and now had the hots for her. That or it was a one stand, but she knew Hunter wasn’t the kind of stallion to do something like that.
“I might not know all the details, but maybe you need a break or something,” said Rainbow. “Go somewhere new or something to get your mind off of her. Have some fun instead of moping around.” Hunter blinked.
“That actually sounds like it might work,” he said slowly. “Maybe I could go flying and check out some of the other libraries in the area.”
“Dude, I said have fun not read,” said Rainbow Dash flatly.
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Meanwhile, back in Ponyville, Twilight was closing all the curtains in the library. This way no pony would be able to look in. She even made sure all the windows were shut and locked. It might look strange to the ponies outside but what she was about to try embarrassed the hell out of her. Once all that was done she made her way to her room where the dildo and book were. They were both on her counter next to her bed.
Twilight understood what the dildo was used for, or at least why Charity gave her this kind of model. It was to help her with her cock sucking skills. Thinking about it a bit more it made more sense than asking random ponies to suck their cocks for practice.
Nervously Twilight got onto the bed as she used her magic to lift the dildo and bring it to her mouth. Gulping loudly she opened her mouth and brought the plastic cock into it. The dildo was harder than what she had dealt with last night, but had a strange cherry flavor to it as well as something else that she couldn’t put her hoof on. She began to suck on it, bobbing her head up and down while her magic held it in place, for a moment until she accidently bit on it like she did the other night causing it to go limp. With a sigh Twilight used her magic on the dildo causing it to become hard again.
After the first time, it became a basic rinse and repeat. Each time she had to fill it up with magic she was able to go a little bit longer. At first she was able to last only a minute or two. Then she was able to go for ten minutes. After a couple more tries she made it to the fifteen minute marker. Finally, after what seemed like hours, Twilight was able to cock on the dildo for a half hour without biting it.
And she might have continued had she not heard the main door open downstairs. Hearing this she instantly released the magic holding the plastic adult toy and headed downstairs to see if the pony needed any help. After all, this was her main job.
Downstairs, Star Hunter was looking over the wide variety of book that the Ponyville Library had to offer. Sadly this library was bigger than the one up in Cloudsdale. If he had to guess a reason it would be that Pegasus ponies were a bit more selective in what they wanted to read. Manly sports books and such. But here he found several murder mystery books as well as the complete Daring Doo series. It was like a dream come try. There would be very little that could make this place better.
Hunter then heard a noise behind him. He turned around and came face to face with a certain unicorn. Both their eyes widened in surprise and Hunter’s wing boner returned. Well, thought Hunter, this place just got better. He did his best to smile, but Twilight was too busy looking around in a panic to notice. Once she made sure that they were the only two in the room she teleported the two of them into her room.
“What in the wide, wide world of Equestria are you doing here?” she demanded.
“Ah, I was just visiting a library,” answered Hunter as he looked around the room he was now in. “And I’m guessing you are Ponyville’s librarian.” Twilight’s eyes widened in shock.
“W-What makes you say that?” she asked/demanded.
“Several clues,” said Hunter. “First, when a pony panics they like to retreat to someplace safe and familiar. I can tell that this is your room by the picture frames of the dresser. Second, there are only a few tree homes in Ponyville but none outside of what is said to be the maximum distance of a teleportation spell. And judging by the walls, we are inside a tree home.” Twilight blinked in surprise. She was amazed by how sharp his ability to deduce where he was. “Oh, and it doesn’t hurt that you have framed your librarian license on the wall.”
“Great,” grumbled Twilight. As she began to rub her forehead with her hoof, Hunter looked around some more only to find what she had left on the bed. When Twilight noticed what he had noticed she leapt towards the bed in an effort to hid the red dildo.
“Are you ok?” asked Hunter.
“No! I’m not ok,” answered Twilight as her eyes began to tear up. “I didn’t want any pony to find out about the other night. I hoped that no pony would ever really know what’s going on. That the ponies I met at Charity’s place would never visit Ponyville. Now that you showed up some ponies might start asking questions and Celestia will find out and…and…” Now Twilight was in full blown tears.
Hunter acted quickly, moving next to her on the bed and flicking the dildo off with his tail. By this point his wing boner had vanished and was now using his wings to drape over Twilight. He held her close to him for a while as she cried into his chest until she couldn’t cry anymore. He said nothing, just letting Twilight cry until she was calmed down. When she was done she realized the position that the two of them were in. She blushed slightly as she looked into his eyes and then turned her head away as she felt her lower regions begin to grow wet.
“Look, why don’t you tell me what’s going on,” said Hunter. “I promise I’ll keep it a secret and won’t judge you.”
“Really?” asked Twilight as she looked at him again with those big eyes. Hunter gulped at how cute she looked while doing his best to fight the wing boner that was returning with a vengeance. Once he nodded, Twilight began her tale starting with how Spike became a rampaging monster, to the bills she was given, and then to Charity’s offer. Hunter said nothing as she told him everything, taking it all in while letting her pour out all the troubles she had been keeping inside. As she did, he could feel her body grow less tense and push closer to his. “I just feel so trapped,” she said as she finished her story. “I know what I’m doing is wrong and if any pony finds out I’ll hurt all of my lover ones. Especially Spike. If he ever found out that I’m doing this for his sake it might destroy him.”
“I really wish I could help Twilight,” said Hunter. “I’d give you the money if I had it.”
“But then I’d just more the debt to you,” she said with a light laugh.
“Yeah, well, it’s the thought that counts, right?” Twilight answered him by kissing him on the cheek causing his eyes to widen. Hunter turned his head to look at her and saw that she had a look in her eye similar to the one she had given him the night they had first had sex. He was about to say something but Twilight cut him off by kissing him on the lips. The two began to moan as it quickly changed from a normal one to a kiss of passion with their tongues tangling with each other. When they finally pulled apart they could see the lust in each other’s eyes as well as a longing for the other.
“Are you sure you want to do this?” asked Hunter quickly. “I don’t want to take advantage of you.” To answer this, Twilight used her magic to lift him in the air and then place him gently on his back. Looking down she could see his hard cock.
“I’m very sure,” she said as she licked her lips. “Besides, you said you wanted to help me right? Then please tell me how I’m doing.” With that, Twilight took his stallion hood into her mouth. At first, Hunter was nervous since the last time she tried she accidently bit him. But soon those worries began to vanish as she bobbed her head up and down while applying some suction. Soon he began to moan some suggestions.
“Oh yeah, like that,” he moaned. “Please use your tongue a bit more. Just a little…yeah like that. Oh Celestia your mouth feels so good.” Hearing this caused Twilight to be pleased with herself as well as make her more wet. It seems like she was a fast learner all around. Suddenly, Hunter’s front hooves grabbed the back of her head and held it in place as he came. Twilight’s eyes widened in shock as his white cream filled her mouth. It was salty with a bit of a bitter taste, but Twilight did her best to swallow it. “Sorry,” muttered Hunter who was very embarrassed at what he had just done.
“It’s fine,” said Twilight as she used her right hoof to wipe up some of the cum that had gotten on her lips and chin. Then, instead of wiping it off her hoof, she licked it clean. “It tastes a little off at first, but I kind of like it.” Hunter then grabbed her with his front hooves and flipped the two of them so that he was on top now. “Hunter, what are you doing?”
“Last time you did all the work,” he replied. “Now I want to make you feel good.” Twilight shivered in anticipation as he brought his body up so that they were nearly face to face. Hunter then inched up and began to lick her horn causing Twilight to shutter. Twilight wondered if Hunter knew that a unicorn’s horn was very sensitive, but didn’t ask for it felt so good. She could feel her pussy becoming wetter and wetter with each lick.
As Twilight began to pant heavily, Hunter began to move downwards. He kissed her forehead and cheek before moving onto her neck. There he nibbled, licked, and sucked on it for several minutes. As he continued his treatment of her body he began to lick each hoof causing the purple mare to moan in pleasure. Twilight nearly scream as he began to lick and suck on the area’s around her hips. Finally he was at her pussy. He spread her lower lips with his hooves before diving in. Now Twilight did let out a scream of pleasure as he began to eat out her folds. She could feel his tongue lick and probe her pussy. Twilight did her best not to thrash around but found it impossible once he accidently licked her clit.
“Hunter please stop,” she moaned. Hunter looked up, his face covered in her juices.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a worried tone.
“Nothing,” she replied as she got up. “It’s just that if you keep going on like that I’ll cum. And I want to try something before that happens.” Twilight then kissed Hunter on the lips. Slowly she then began to position them so that she was once more on top. Using her magic, she then held his cock in place while she lowered herself onto him. Her moments were slow, causing both of them to close their eyes so that they could better savor this feeling until he was completely inside of her.
Slowly Twilight began to move. This time the feeling of him inside her was different, but not in a bad way. It was just different. Maybe he was deeper for some reason or that he was rubbing her insides differently. She didn’t know, but with each bounce she felt the heat between her legs begin to rise. Twilight then lowered her body while placing her two front hooves on either side of Hunter’s head.
Hunter was in no way ideal in all of this. That wasn’t the kind of stallion he was. He was soon able to match the pace of her thrusts quickly finding a rhythm with his partner. Each time Twilight lower her lower body he would push his up rather into her. Twilight gasped out in both surprise as well as pleasure. This pleased the stallion greatly as he did his best to hide a small grin. Seeing this Twilight lowered her head closer to his and the two began to kiss each other deeply once more.
Soon the only sounds that could be heard in the room were the sounds of love making as well as a lot of moaning. Both of them could feel their own orgasms coming closer and closer with each thrust. When he knew he could hold back no longer, Hunter made one final deep thrust into Twilight and shot his white seed inside of her. Twilight in turn came as well, arching her back as she did while letting out something that was between a moan and a scream. When it was over she landed on top of Hunter with her eyes shut.
Hunter, for his part, decided to make the two of them as comfortable as could be. He managed to reach for the covers and used his wings to pull the covers over them. He then, very slowly, turned so that Twilight was lying next to him instead of on top of him.
“Hunter,” moaned Twilight while her eyes were still shut. “Did you enjoy that?”
“Yeah, I did Twilight,” he answered. Twilight smiled. “Do you mind if I still here till you’re able to get up?” All Twilight did was nod before drifting off to sleep.
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“Where is Hunter?” demanded Star Chaser aloud. He had been looking all over the factory for his son, but no pony had seen him in the last several hours. Every pony he asked simply said that he/she didn’t know. This caused Chaser to get angrier and angrier. His anger peaked when he saw an elderly looking pony sitting on the job. “You there! You’re fired!”
“Wait,” cried another voice. He turned around and saw a young mare no older than his son race towards the elder pony. She was a white Pegasus pony with a long green mane that was braided and hung down the left side of her neck. Her eyes were a matching green and her cutie mark was a fan. “Please don’t fire my father. He’s worked for you for forty years and he can’t work these long hours like he used to.”
Chaser looked at her as he did his best to remember who she was. He noticed the badge she was wearing indicating that she was in the wind department. And while trying to figure out her name, another thought came to kind. One that made him smile.
“What’s your name?” he asked gently.
“Summer Breeze,” she answered nervously. She knew that Star Chaser had a bad reputation with the mares as well as a bad temper. And she didn’t like the way he was smiling at her.
“Well Summer, maybe I was a bit hasty about what I said to your father,” said Chaser. “How about you and I talk for a bit. I have a…business proposition for you.”
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At the same time, Charity was walking through a field of trees to meet up with the client she had told Twilight about. She knew not to meet him at his house due to his family. His sister would kill him if she found out that he was saving up money for an hour of sexual pleasure.
It took a while, but finally Charity found him in the middle of the field talking to another stallion. She waited for a while before letting out a cough. Hearing this, the stallion turned to look at her for a moment and then sent his friend away on some errand or something. What it was, Charity didn’t know or care. It was his business and she respected that. Once the other stallion had left, he walked over to her.
“I have good news for you,” she said in a happy tone. “I found you a mare that matches one of the deceptions that you gave me. She’ll be ready in about two days. Will you be able to pay the 300 bits by then?”
“Eeyup,” said Big Mac.
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