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**Author's Note** Alright everyone, we are still with Rayne and Rarity. Emotions and endorphins are running high. They are both feeling impassioned from what they went through over the previous few hours and it might be running away with them. It's time for some more sexiness in the story.
Tags: Vaginal penetration, First time, Hymen breaking, Cream pie
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Author Jumps Worlds (MLP)
By Haunter Rayne
Chapter 11 - Grateful Love

Rarity kissed the stallion, who now lay atop of her, as if she could not get enough. When she finally pulled her lips away it seemed only to breathe as Rarity gasped and cooed loudly. “Phew oh gosh, wow you are a good kisser hehe. Rayne listen to me, you have given me a lot to think about for Spike. I've heard what you said, but a girl needs time to process such heavy information. And Spike doesn't know that anything has changed yet. I promise that I will talk to him and do so soon. But for now I think I can afford at least a few minutes to thank the pony who opened my eyes, don't you think?” She said smiling. “Rayne, even if you're right about him… he can't talk to me the way that you do. Please, if you really believe that I am as beautiful as you say then show me. Just for a moment.”

Rayne looked deep down into her eyes. He stared intently at her as she breathed in and out hotly. He waited just long enough for his gaze to once more bring a blush to her cheeks and then he leaned in again kissing her hard on the lips. She immediately started kissing him back, feeling hungry for his affection and even moaned as his hooves started caressing her chest and flank. “Ooh Rayne!” She gasped and her mouth fell open amazed as he started kissing down her neck. “Yes, yes, yes, oh!” She panted loving the feeling of his muscular form rubbing up against hers. Something primal opened up in her making her want more. He whispered sweet nothings and compliments repeatedly into her ear as he kissed her and caressed her all over. His every word filled Rarity's belly with butterflies but now it was different. It fueled a fiery passion inside her that she had never felt before.

The mare held onto Rayne feeling him now kissing along her shoulder, praising every inch of her for its beauty and elegance. It was about this time she realized she had wet her tail or at least the underside of it between her legs. Never before had she allowed anypony to see her in such a state which caused Rarity to bury her face over his shoulder while he continued kissing. It was right then though that Rarity's eyes snapped open feeling something hard and full against her thighs. The mare literally jumped in place and her jaw dropped as she looked down seeing Rayne’s full erection.

“Oh, Rarity I'm sorry. What can I say, you're beautiful and letting me carry on with you like this... I'm just excited is all but I won't try for anything you don't want. I promise.” He said quickly.

Rarity's face had scrunched up a bit and he could tell that some part of this was bothering her. When she spoke to him it was in a nervous tone and yet seemed very sincere. “Rayne listen, I'm going to open myself up more to Spike. Maybe there isn't really much for me to consider after all. I'm going to offer and he's going to say yes. There's no sense in pretending otherwise. But if things actually work out between us…” Rarity hesitated feeling a little uncomfortable, “I don't want to live my entire life not knowing what it feels like being with another pony!”

Rayne looked down to her surprised. Her voice had been trembling as she said it but she still wasn't acting shy like she had been before. She was certainly embarrassed but her bashfulness was gone. He watched as she lowered a hoof and began gently stroking him as he stood erect right over her lap. “You aren't making me do anything that I don't want to Rayne.” She whispered, as she started pushing his tip lower and lower between her spread legs. Moving her tail out of the way she exposed herself fully to him letting him see how soaking wet she had become. She continued rubbing his length affectionately, however Rayne noticed the closer she brought him to her entrance the slower her hoof moved.

“Wait.” Rayne said softly.

Rarity was quick to defend herself. “No Rayne, I want this. But if I don't do this now then I know I won't be brave enough to do it later. I'm just nervous, this is my first time.” She whimpered uneasy.

Rayne just smiled. “I know. That is why I want you to be comfortable. I was going to say to let me do it.”

Rarity blushed as she leaned back to get into a more comfortable position. “Oh, well, yes that might be better hehe.” Laying there splayed open for him she gave a naughty smile and then raised a hoof over her head. “Oh Rayne! I'm ready for you!” She shouted in overdramatic poise. She then peaked out at him from below her raised hoof. The both of them laughed heartily together.

Grinning wide Rayne chuckled, “Ooh I like that hehe.”

Rarity grinned back, “Oh yeah? Hehe. You like an assertive partner?”

“Oh I do indeed.” He nodded.

“Well,” she smiled still having a playful giggle, “moinsure Rayne, I am ready for you to ravish me! I want you to tear into me and make me a woman! I want you!” She played it up on purpose, giving her best over done theatrical impression.

They both laughed again but Rayne grinned excitedly. “Mmm I like a playful girl. And that was very sexy. Come here.” He leaned down to kiss her but then stopped when her laughing smile changed to a deadly serious expression.

“I'm ready for you.” She said completely straight faced. Rayne looked down to her as she continued, “I am ready for you to ravish me and I want you to make me a woman.” Rayne processed this and saw no point in delaying anymore as he dropped his mouth back down to hers, kissing her hard as he positioned himself between her legs. Rayne almost purred into her lips as he felt his tip entering her velvety folds but he still had enough sense to stop when he felt her wincing. “Oww, OW!” She whimpered softly until he pulled back to look at her. Glancing upwards she reassured him, “Don't worry, I'm fine. This just hurts. Look I'm not a filly, I know what's going to happen. Just make it quick for me ok? You're leaving a lady waiting you know.” She said with a wink.

Already being used to his new body by now, Rayne gave a single hard thrust into Rarity. He felt a slight pressure against him until her warmth sheathed across his length enveloping him. Rarity screamed in pain feeling her maidenhood tear as he plunged inside. Her hind legs kicked frantically as she felt regions of her body be pulled open like she never felt before. “RAYNE! AAHHH’MMM!” She called out, biting her lip and trying to steady herself. Rayne remained inside her but kept his hips still. Meanwhile he shh’ed her gently while kissing her forehead to calm her down. After a moment she looked up and in her whining voice called out, “Rayne, why do you have to be SO incredibly big?”

Rayne couldn't help but chuckle at that. “Ow, ow! Don't laugh, it's not funny!” She called out feeling him jostle inside her. “Rayne, this is supposed to feel good but it's really painful! It's not just because I'm a virgin, you're really well endowed. I work in fashion darling, I see everything. You are just... HUGE!” Rayne couldn't help finding her whine to be adorable but then he thought that being impaled inside her might have had something to do with that. Rayne just interrupted her with a sweet tender kiss. “Wha? What was that?” She asked.

Rayne smiled whispered in her ear, “You 'were' a virgin, you're not anymore.”

“Cheeky.” Rarity smirked. Then with no warning Rayne leaned down giving her a seductive bite on her neck. “Ooh! Rayne, you scoundrel hehe.”

The dark pony whispered seductively into her ear once more. “Yes but that hurt and you still liked it hehe. Just like this IS going to hurt a bit but trust me that it won't stop you from liking it.” He pulled back on his hips removing about half of his length back out of her. Just this alone elicited a scream from the mare beneath him but she nodded indicating she had rested enough. “Ooohhh Rarity.” Rayne gasped in delight as he started to push back into her and pull out again. He ignored her initial shrieks as she struggled to accommodate him but he knew she could handle it and that it would only get easier for her.

It didn't take long for him to see that he was right. After a minute or two she was no longer struggling as she was clinging firmly to him instead. “Ray-Rayne… oohh… don't stop… uh please...don't… stop.” She panted between breaths as he repeated his thrusts inside her. Rayne was in utter bliss enjoying every little touch of their bodies together from top to bottom. He kissed her lips and neck. He massaged her chest and back. He rolled his hips in different positions letting her feel the different ways she could be stimulated.

“What was that you wanted me to do?” He called out between his own breaths as he thrusted again and again. “You wanted me to ravish you?” He grinned down at the mare from being able to feel how dripping wet she was.

“Oh Celestia...” Rarity whimpered nervously. “Aahhhh! RAYNE! AAAHHH!” She screamed as the stallion thrust hard into her for her first time. Rayne held onto the beautiful mare enjoying the sight and sound of her every scream. The stallion rammed into her over and over with the full strength of his lust. He listened to how he made their hips clop together and it only turned him on more how Rarity's legs kicked behind him. It wasn't long until she was biting into his shoulder and clinging onto him for dear life as she rocked her hips in time with his. She gave a long bellowing scream as he knew he was giving Rarity her first deep vaginal orgasm. He loved how her mouth spread open into a ‘O’ as she wailed and how her hooves stretched out pointing upwards. He grabbed Rarity by her face and kissed her fiercely shoving his tongue into her mouth as she climaxed around him. Rarity started to scream into his mouth as her body started to shudder uncontrollably.

Releasing her lips from his kiss she immediately took a heavy breath. Then she looked up at him and pleaded, “Rayne, please finish! I'm too sensitive, I can't take it!” He smiled and nodded as he seemed to stop for a moment. “Oh well, I didn't necessarily mean so soon. Oh, Oh! What are you- oH MY!” Rarity gasped repeatedly as Rayne manipulated her body around. He lifted her legs and rotated them both to the side. Then he pulled her legs downward causing her upper body to snap onto her stomach. All of this happened without removing himself from inside her. Then as he leaned over her back Rarity went stiff as a board when he pushed into her from behind. “SWEET MOTHER OF EQUESTRIA!!! RAYNE YOU'RE TOO DEEP!” She shrieked at the top of her lungs. Rayne just grinned and gripped her firmly on her bottom.

“Such a beautiful girl.” Was all he said before he started slamming into her again. Rarity had the wind completely knocked from her lungs as her eyes almost bulged from their sockets. He pounded her with such force that she felt as if she were being spanked. Furthermore, as far as her recently virgin mind understood Rayne was reaching places within her that she would have thought impossible to penetrate to. The seat that had been made for them was completely strewn around now and as Rarity was pummeled into the floor all she could manage to say was, “Rayne you're making me cum a SECOND TIME!!! OOOOOOHHHH!!!”

It was finally after all this that Rayne felt his own juices stirring. Hearing the beautiful mare beneath him shouting in ecstasy while feeling her moistened depths contracting around him eventually became too much. Right in time with Rarity, Rayne roared out behind her while heavily exploding within her. Rarity could both hear as well as feel his climax flooding inside her with a messy splatter. Having them finish together seemed so perfect and romantic to her whimsical mind that it pushed her over the edge of a third orgasm just on the heels of her previous one. “Rayne! Yes! Yes! Together! Ohhh my gooodddnnessss!!!” She hissed under his roar from above until the two of them collapsed with one another, both sweating and panting profusely.

Rayne lay there holding Rarity in his arms as if he would never want to let her go. He smiled with his mind swimming in endorphins as if he were drunk on them. Meanwhile Rarity lay panting on the floor not being able to tell the difference between pleasure or pain any longer. She was feelin mostly numb from the hips down at this point. “Uh, huuh, no w- phew, no words… to describe…” She fumbled her arms to reach up at him and hold his face as she just stared at him in disbelief. “My… dear… sweet Rayne. There are… no words to describe… how you just… made me feel. You are, so amazing, ohhhh that felt… wonderful.” She lay back onto the floor as if fainting but she was merely exhausted and no longer had the energy to hold herself up.

Smiling down at her collapsed form, Rayne just allowed her to lay in whatever manner was most comfortable for her. “Rarity you are truly beautiful inside and out. Laying with you was more enjoyable than I could have ever dreamed. You felt amazing.” Rarity lazily raised a hoof to say something but then decided it wasn't worth the energy as it collapsed back down. After catching his breath Rayne whispered down to her. “I'm going to pull myself away now. I'm a lot bigger than you and I don't want to be cutting off your circulation in your legs.”

Rarity just nodded, not giving much more of a response than that. Balancing himself on his front hooves Rayne started to lift himself and vacate himself from within the pale unicorn. “OH MY! And now it hurts again!” Rarity bolted upright in surprise. He stopped while halfway out but she smiled at him, “Don’t worry. You have just made me so very, very sore from your masterfully exquisite love making hehe.” He nodded with a smile. “Oh um Rayne. You can tell me if this is a weird thing to ask, I'm still new to this… but can I see it when you pull it out?”

Rayne didn't find anything strange about that at all and shifted his torso so she could see that he was still partially inside her. “Of course, I'd be happy to show you.” Lifting himself on shaky legs he pulled his tip the rest of the way out until it swung free back and forth from its weight.

Rarity giggled but felt she had already praised him enough. Looking down at herself she saw that she was stretched open quite a bit but was quickly tightening back up. There was blood smeared across her flank and crotch which she looked at quizzically. “Huh, that is so very strange. I promise you that it doesn't hurt for me anywhere near as bad as it looks from my bleeding. I just can't move my hooves because you pounded my hips numb, you ruffian.” The two lovers giggled together, neither of them seeming to mind a single detail about their situation. Then Rarity blushed as she felt a rush of fluid spill from her, right where she and Rayne were staring. “Rayne my goodness! You came so much into me!” She whined which Rayne still found to be adorable. “Why is there so much? Rayne I'm going to have a dozen fillies by this point!” He just laughed loudly and she playfully pushed on his shoulder. “It's not funny! Look at the mess you've made of me!”

“It's not all mine I'll have you know.” He snickered, trying not to bust out into full blown laughter.

“Oh! How dare you!” She mock yelled at him while she levitated a pillow from the couch to bop him with. After a good laugh from them both Rarity looked down to her bloody flank and seeing him dripping from her juices. “We really should get cleaned up. What would you say to a romantic shower together? I uh, might need somepony to help me stand up.” She blushed still not able to move her legs.

However just then the most unimaginable thing happened that filled both of their faces with shock and horror. A loud magical snapping sound distracted them from smiling to each other as there was a brief flash of light. A purple figure had magically teleported into the room from out of nowhere and was now standing only two feet away from them as they were both poised in a very compromising positions. Rarity felt like she was going to die of embarrassment and Rayne didn't know what to think as they both looked at Twilight Sparkle shouting as soon as she entered the room. “Rarity, are you here?! What happe-, Rayne?! What are you doing here?” Was the princess's first response. It took her time to process everything before her eyes which were apparently unable to keep up with her mouth.

“Where is Rarity, I just heard from… EEWWW WHY are you like THAT and dripping?!” Twilight's face looked like it turned green a little and bent her head down feeling sick. However it was right then she noticed Rarity laying on the floor of all places which she thought was very abnormal. “Rarity, there you are! I've been worried sick about you! What is going on h-" Then Twilight froze completely solid with her left eye twitching uncontrollably.

Rarity knew immediately how this would look to her friend. Twilight stood there seeing one of her best friends seemingly knocked over onto the floor, blood dripping from between her legs and here a stranger in town with his erection unsheathed and dripping. Rarity knew she had to act fast but she was so tired and could hardly move. “N-now darling, before you jump to any conclusions…” However the unicorn had been much too late.

“What did you do to her?!” The voice that came out of Twilights mouth petrified both Rayne and Rarity alike. It was something that neither of them had ever heard from her. Twilight's eyes had become completely black and her horn was crackling with dark looking sparks. “WHAT DID YOU DO TO HURT MY FRIEND?!!!!” She roared as she shot a bolt of black light from her horn. Rayne managed to jump out of the way but was able to realize she had been aiming low for his dangling appendage. Otherwise he never would have dodged in time. The magic bolt struck the floor and shattered the spot it touched destructively.

“Twilight, no!” Rarity screamed as she lunged from the floor to hold Rayne's leg protectively. Rayne was thinking a little clearer and much faster than Rarity was at that moment. He didn't want her being hit by that blast as he tried to dodge it himself so he knew he had to separate himself from her. Looking around the room Rayne suddenly teleported to a different spot where there would be no collateral damage of him jumping around.

This seemed to only infuriate the princess further though. “Wait a minute! You can TELEPORT?! I thought you couldn't use magic! You, Sneaky, Snake!” She called and shot three rapid shots out which Rayne only narrowly avoided. “I will NOT let you get away with hurting Rarity!” She screamed as her wings started to glow and Twilight shot out a solid beam she could control so that Rayne would not be able to dodge it. Just then a basket from the corner started to glow and zoomed right over catching the beam and collecting it inside. Discord appeared out of thin air holding the basket and protecting Rayne from the blast. Just at the same moment Twilight saw a heavy pony mannequin topple over knocking her to the ground.

This was enough to turn Twilight's eyes back to normal as she looked around trying to figure out what happened. But before she could get her bearings there was a blur of a whitish hoof before a resounding smack ricocheted throughout the room. Twilight lay on the ground stunned with a bruise on her cheek realizing that Rarity had just slapped her. “TWILIGHT SPARKLE!” Rarity screamed enraged. “HOW DARE YOU, WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING?!” The light gray mare still had her bottom hooves hanging rather limp but she seemed to have crawled over with her front legs to push the mannequin over onto her friend.

Twilight suddenly looked like she was going to cry. “Rarity… I don't understand. Why did you hit me? I was protecting you.” She said with a confused sob. Discord disposed of the magic contained in basket and then returned it unharmed to the counter it came from. But he did not interrupt or make a sound as he just stayed beside Rayne and watched.

Rarity was beside herself having lost her temper almost as badly as Twilight had but with much more self control. “PROTECTING ME?! TWILIGHT LOOK AT MY WAREHOUSE! YOU BLASTED HOLES INTO THE FLOOR AND ALMOST HIT ME WITH THAT BLAST!” Twilight looked around at the destruction she had caused and was appalled, not being able to believe it had come from herself. “I was never in any danger Twilight!” Rarity continued to shout but lowered her voice just wanting her friend to understand.

“Please don't yell at me Rarity. I'm sorry. I'd never want to hurt you.” She wiped a tear from her eye. “Everypony has been looking for you. You've been gone all day. Then I was told you were seen in your boutique but when I got here it was locked up tight. I thought I heard you yelling and I got worried something was wrong so I teleported inside. I would normally never violate your privacy by bypassing a locked door but I thought you were in trouble.” She looked to Rayne scowling and he realized that being saved by Discord might make him look extra incriminating. Twilight continued by asking, “So if you weren't in danger Rarity then why are you on the floor with Rayne standing over you unsheathed like that?”

Rarity raised a hoof to her temple afraid she would have to hold one of the veins in her forehead from bursting in anger. “Well if you must know Twilight it's because Rayne and I had just finished having sex!” She snapped. Suddenly Twilights ears fell and her heart sank with the realization of what she had just done. “Since it's become obvious that my privacy is besmirched today as it is, I will have you know that I am on the floor because Rayne laid out the most romantic and quaint little seating area for us. It just simply got all pushed apart during our embrace.”

Now Rarity started ranting swiftly deciding that if she was going to let Twilight have it then she was going to let her have it all. “The door was locked because I wanted to be alone with Rayne. Furthermore, I made that decision on my own before he laid a hoof on me. I own three different boutiques and will certainly not go out of business by closing just one for a single afternoon. Next, I will have you know that Rayne was a perfect gentlepony and it was MY idea to have sex with him because he is handsome and charming and he makes me feel good Twilight and he helped me realize something very important about myself to make me happy!”

Guilt was creeping up Twilight's throat with each passing word and she could not believe how she was looking like the bad guy in this situation when she was just trying to help. “But, Rarity why are you bleeding?! I mean, somehow you must have been hurt, right?”

Rarity screamed tugging on her hair, “Twilight! You are ridiculous! Rayne was my first time with a stallion! Every mare bleeds their first time she is penetrated! Didn't you know that?” Twilight didn't know what to say. She honestly had no clue and could tell that everyone in the room could read that on her face. “Twilight darling,” Rarity softened while trying to calm the situation. “I had a wonderful time with Rayne. He has been sweet and gentle with me. But you just interrupted the afterglow of what has been the most intimate moment of my life and then attacked the pony responsible for it.” She looked into her friend’s eyes hoping she would understand. “Oh, thank you Discord.” Rarity said noticing that he waved his claw and her bloodied fur was now completely clean and so was Rayne's fur as well.

Twilight tried to swallow this information but was desperate to find another outlet for all the blame. “Well what is Discord doing here?!” She shouted.

“Oh no Twilight.” Discord said in a very low voice. “I had no part in this, I'm not going to be your scapegoat here.”

Now Rayne felt it was appropriate to speak and he looked at Twilight cautiously before asking, “Discord, thank you for saving me but what are you doing here?”

He turned his head and spoke matter of factly, “I am here because somepony used powerful and dangerous magic. Forces like that aren't going to be cast in the same town as my friends without me noticing. Rayne, that spell Twilight cast was similar to one that Celestia gave her when the terrible King Sombra almost retook the Crystal Empire. It was made of hate and malice. If that spell had touched you it would have killed you outright. You are my friend Twilight and the Princess of Friendship. I couldn't let you become a murderer, even if I have to save you from yourself to do it.”

“Twilight Sparkle!” Rarity shouted, not being able to contain the disappointment in her voice.

At this time though Discord continued after placing an angel halo around his horns. “I promise to the two lovers that I was certainly not spying on your passions with one another. I admit, I had been following Rayne around earlier because I was curious and ooh what a sappy conversation the two of you had.” He cheered sarcastically and didn't care in the least about the scowls that the unicorns gave him. “Ahem, but as soon as you two started smooching then I immediately left you to your privacy. I am a snoop, not a pervert. It was only when I felt extremely powerful magic being used that I returned and not a moment too soon from the look of it.”

“But I wasn't trying to kill him!” Twilight shouted in a voice that sounded more sad than angry.

“Oh no,” Discord replied, “you were just trying to hurt him with a spell that was so malicious that you didn't give a thought as to whether you were overdoing it or not.”

Hearing this was starting to overwhelm the alicorn as she wasn't used to dealing with problems like this. There wasn't a natural disaster to save her friends from. There wasn't an evil villain to defeat. There wasn't a magical conundrum for her to work out. She was the problem. She had humiliated a friend and almost hurt an innocent pony. She knew she could be brave but not like this. “Look, I’m- I'm sorry!” She screamed with tears in her eyes and magically opened the door to the lobby before she ran from the room. Twilight unlocked the front door and fled right outside until she collided right into the arms of another who held her firm and stopped her from running.

“Okay, thank you Discord, I believe that will be quite enough now.” Rarity said sourly as she reached a hoof out towards Rayne. He stepped over and assisted her in standing while she pulled herself up. She needed to hold onto him still because she was wobbly but at least she was on her hooves. “Well this was certainly an unexpected debacle.” She sighed in exhaustion. However then she looked up to Discord. “Thank you for protecting Rayne, I don't want to think about what would have happened if Twilight hadn't missed.”

“Ooh hoo, think nothing of it. Ol’ Rayne and I have become the best of pals in the short time he has been here.” He said as he was materializing gravel to pour into the blast holes before snapping his claw and smoothing them over. “In fact, I was the first to welcome him into town! He was getting a little lost on the road hehe.” He whispered to Rarity but loud enough so that Rayne would hear.

Rarity raised an eyebrow at him accusingly. “And I bet that from all this nonsense you're just loving all of the disharmony and chaos taking place?”

“Whaaaaaa?” He asked innocently. “I'm not responsible for this situation. Are you saying that a Draconequus isn't allowed to have a free lunch?” He asked while licking his lips.

**Author's Ending Note** This was another chapter that was meant to have a lot of emotional weight to it. There were many ups and downs as Rarity decided to offer herself to Rayne and how they flirted together, making each other laugh to ease the tension. I know that Rarity has a good sense of humor and I didn't want to miss that when they were first starting.
Uh just a short little note here for any fans who are a stickler for details. Rarity mentions that she wants Rayne to make her a woman. I know that they might not have that word in this world but I felt that it might make the scene lose some of its power if I translated it to pony-speak. We all know she was just saying she was ready to take the leap into sexual adulthood with Rayne.
This sex scene was a lot of fun to write. I personally think that it is very sexy, even after rereading it. I couldn't help but bring the light hearted playfulness back again at the end there. I think it shows how happy the two were afterwards. But then of course, bum bum bum! Plot twist as the princess pops in lol. Obviously this was a very serious scene but I try to keep a few snips of comedy in there to lighten things up. I hope that you're enjoying it. Thank you for reading!
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