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Mirror Moons	By : Archmage Category: +M through R > My Little Pony Views: 2729 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own My Little Pony, I am not profiting from these stories. This is a work of fiction written by someone that can't seem to sleep when supposed to.

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Mirror Moons.

Important Notes: This has mature content of sexual nature, so if you are offended by things like this –particularly between two non-human characters- just turn around.

Second: The bulk of it was written before the screenshots of Luna’s new design came to be. I guess I’ll use the new design in the future, depending on how the episode goes.

Third: This is continued straight from where Moon Dancers left off, so if you haven’t read it, find the dA version, as it’s the one most up-to-date in the edits. Also, for being a continuation, I used first person for the starting part, then it switches to third for… ease of writing. I couldn’t keep up the genderless, type-less thing I did in Moon Dancers, so Eclipse Moonshadow (that’s the full name there) became a unicorn lady.

Her tongue was like a snake in a new den, touching every place it could reach with great curiosity. Exploring, discovering, investigating every crease, every tooth. Driving me mad with pleasure from the thoughts alone.

I briefly wondered about what would my parents think seeing their daughter kissing another mare, but I didn’t think they would mind given how happy I was.

Oh, and given that that mare was royalty, but I fell in love with Luna the dancer, singer and artist, not just Luna the princess.

Everything was this moment; soon, there was nothing else but Luna on my mind and eyes. It was as if this was the first day of a new “forever”.

I almost forgot to repay in kind, so I began by wrestling her tongue with mine. Sliding inside that smooth fleshiness and caressing its insides, I was moaning softly from the feel of the warm wetness.

I broke the passionate kiss with all the pain of my heart, but with all of the excitement and medication I was shaking uncomfortably. “W-wait, I need some w-water.” I said, panting and watching the long string of drool connecting our mouths with slight embarrassment.

Lulu took care of the water for me, levitating a pitcher that Doctor Whooves left next to the mirror after the examination when I fainted, even though there was nothing preventing me from getting it myself. She carefully lowered it to my lips, soft as a feather, and with all of the sweetness of a mother with her foal, gave me the entire thing to drink.

She must have had the same idea; I called her mommy at the same time she asked me if her little one would like something else.

“I can think of ‘something else’.” Feeling slightly renewed, I pushed the empty container away and gently pulled her in to lock our lips together again. I ran my hoof through her mane, that beautiful, silky mane that framed her face. I scratched behind her ears and caused her to squeal in delight. My heart was pounding, beating faster and faster, the blood rushing on my ears made my head swim.

She was driving me crazy with her kiss, as if she was sucking out all insecurities I ever had, getting rid of a chill I hadn’t even realized was there…

But we are all made of the same vulnerable, selfish goop; even those with the power of Luna can’t hold much… just a look at the tragedies of past times is enough. So I will trade mine for hers, Arion said one of the essences of darkness is acceptance, so I decided I would take in her sorrows; when she’s not strong I shall be there for her to lean on me, after all, no-one can fill the needs you don’t let show.

We all have problems; sometimes we won’t be able to carry the load on our own. I might just understand hers.

I was so engrossed by thoughts of pleasuring Luna that I was only half-conscious of how my slow caresses went lower and lower. A scratch on the ears turned to a stroke of the cheeks, then on her neck and going to her collarbone. It felt amazing.

I could tell Lulu was enjoying herself; we paused more often for air and she was breathing faster… so my touch went lower still. I grazed her breast before sending my hoof straight between her haunches.

She broke that kiss with a gasp, arching her back as I rubbed her delicate flower; feeling that moisture on my skin made me move even faster.

It took a few seconds for Luna to actually speak instead of letting out whinnies. “N-no! Wait!” Just a word and I stopped on my tracks.

“S-sorry my lady, I don’t know what came over me.” Well, I sort of knew. “I-I just want you to feel good.”

“T-that’s quite nice of you, b-but I don’t think that’s a good idea.” She pushed away my hoof; even I -medicated as I was- could feel the heat that rushed to her cheeks.

“Why not? You seemed to be enjoying it.” I said with a mischievous smile on my face, she was already wet by the time I touched her.

She gave me a nervous laugh. “No, really, I-I don’t think I could stop myself.”

I brought my hoof to my muzzle, taking in the scent of her excitement. Intoxicating, it was sweet and clean. I shivered all over, my chest felt tight and my heart was squeezed by it. “So? I am at your service. This body is yours to do pretty much anything you please.”

“A-as an alicorn my endurance is-… a-a-and in any case, you are injured!”

“If a little problem or your desires were enough to make me change my mind about you, I would not have sought you out. I wouldn’t have any business being with you.” She did have a point though.

Then I had either my greatest idea ever or my most stupid idea ever. “If you are worried about me injuring myself, then paralyze me and restrain me with your magic.” I brought my wet hoof to my muzzle, taking a little taste of that which just this morning would have never crossed my mind.

Seriously, a couple of hours ago I had been dreaming of just having her acknowledge my feelings, forget about returning them!

At that taste, her taste, I was sure. I wanted this, as much as she wanted it; her face made it obvious, she felt that fire inside just the same as I did. Any voice in my head that opposed to doing it in a hospital bed was drowned in the overpowering scent Lulu had left behind, engulfed as a dry tree in a fire.

“I want you.” I said. “I live for you, breathe for you. I want your warmth, your love.” I smiled again, not deviously, just full of sentimentality and amorousness. “I am yours forever, my queen.”

My own excitement was obvious, so I decided to get rid of the sheets now. A white and black glow, smaller than what I’m comfortable with, pulled down the sheets and revealed my form to Luna.

I hope that this is just because of the medication; I can’t use the typewriter without magic, and in my current state I’ll run out of breath before I get ten pages in.

Lulu, however, had an idea of what to do with the cloth. She covered me again and used her magic to turn the thing into restraints, hold down my wounded foreleg to the bed and me from injuring myself by accident.

Next, a spell that crawled across my injured limb and robbed it of what little strength it had left. I was willing, weakened by medication, injured and certainly not going to fight it, so the spell would last a long, long time.

Then another spell, to soundproof the room, and a last one to provoke a… special type of response. Certainly Luna was a great spell caster, her eyes and focus seemed to never leave me.

“Well, if that’s what you want, let’s build up the tension.” She said, bending towards me.

She nipped my ear, carefully tracing the edges as I cooed in delight, she continued to bite down my face and moving to my neck; I gasped and shuddered, the base of my neck was very sensitive to her playful bites, my withers tingled.

“Seems that you really like it.” She continued to tease my neck, grazing it with her lips, lapping and nibbling it all around. “Or do you want me to stop?”

“Don’t you dare.” I said. Each contact sent soft ripples all across my body. If something this simple felt this good… “Please never stop.”

“Then let’s move on.” She licked my ears, once more working from top to bottom, only stopping momentarily at my neck to pull it with more aggressive bites –they’ll most likely leave a bruise, but I’m black already. My mind began to cloud and I became unable to…

*****

The mare in the bed became unable to complete even her most simple thoughts as Luna kissed and lapped along her chest repeatedly, moving less each time, until it seemed she was just interested in the black filly’s tummy. Eclipse decided to stop being so passive and her hoof reached Luna’s cutie mark, tracing the moon adorning her flank.

Luna was driving the young filly crazy; making large circles with her tongue, then smaller ones, then big again. Massaging the younger mare’s flanks as well.

The princess had said she wouldn’t be able to stop, but the one that gave in to lust first was the black unicorn. “Luna! Please take me now!”

Happy to oblige, Lulu kissed lower, stopping a moment to suck on a nipple knowing just how sensitive they could get. Luna opened her partner’s legs, held them up with magic, and brought her face down, kissing and nibbling her inner thighs, tickling the other with a wing before swapping.

“Did you imagine something like this?” She stopped and looked back to Eclipse, who had to take a moment to gather her thoughts.

“N-no.” She had a hard time speaking. “My fantasies n-never got past seeing your smile.” She purred softly, feeling Lulu’s warm breath on her most sensitive place.

“Then let’s make reality beat the dreams.” Answered the princess, then she flicked her tongue over the unicorn’s slit and caused her to arch her back in pleasure, gasping and moaning.

Eclipse tried to reach a hoof to grope Luna’s horn, but at the feeling of her clit receiving Luna’s attention she just turned to putty at the mercy of the sculptor’s whims. She had to bite her lower lip to stifle her moans until they became more controlled.

“That will not do.” Said Luna, she wanted to drive the other mare completely over the edge, see if it was true that she’d be hers forever.

She slid her tongue inside the powerless mare, causing her to cry in pleasure and buck her hips in surprise, making the bed squeak. The force was unexpected, but the more Luna thought about it, the more it made sense; Eclipse had been exercising a lot lately. She was powerless because she wanted to be, not because she actually was.

Eclipse began to call for Luna constantly, forgetting about fighting the urge to yell, flicking her tail around the blue mare’s neck. Luna forced her tongue deeper and faster inside the black filly, feeling the inner walls pulse, tasting her juices, hearing her soft cries, making sure she would never forget this day.

The alicorn began to use her magic to escalate things, her horn surrounded by a dark blue aura before sending the spell inside her lover… and then, Eclipse’s own horn glowed white in reaction; nothing unexpected by itself, but…

Eclipse’s eyes rolled back at the cool feeling of night air seep inside her flower, panting and squirming as Luna had her way with her. A warm sensation spread from top to bottom, adding to the quickly-building pressure she already felt and causing her to jerk her body up and down uncontrollably.

Thing was, Luna could feel the other mare’s magic embracing her own in a strange way instead of merging right away. Light crowning the dark, an eclipse. She pulled away in surprise at the unexpected reaction and accidentally pulled on the snow-white tail wrapped around her neck.

“Oh yes!” Cried the ebony filly, softly due to being short of breath. “Yank my tail! Harder please!”

Luna saw in those silver eyes just how much the other was enjoying the naughty experience, a dramatic change from the easily-embarrassed unicorn she otherwise was.

So she pulled, harder this time; wrapping a half of the tail around each hoof and pulling again in two different directions at once, making her squeal. Judging by how hard she was panting, she was close.

She remembered the strange reaction Eclipse had to her magic, so she decided to try a little light magic; her horn began to glow a pale blue as she brought her face down to the glistening folds, forcing her ancient magic power into the young mare.

The black mare’s horn was surrounded by an ebony aura as the warmth spreading from Luna just added to the heat she was feeling already; her mouth wide open and her tongue rolled out in lustful, affectionate delight. A chill of excitement coursed from top to bottom this time, black sparks shooting out from her horn like dark fireworks, each little thing inching her closer to the end.

Dark crowning the light, like a full-moon night. She’d look into it later, though, since Eclipse’s shaky breath told her that the black unicorn was about to-

“Lu-UU-una!” She tried to scream as she released her love juices over Luna’s face and a black cloud on the wall behind her horn, but it just came out softly. She stopped quivering and slumped back on the bed, her legs released from Luna’s magic grip.

The blue mare lapped up the remains, sending a few more shivers down the black mare’s spine. “You taste so good.” She said with a chuckle.

She felt a hoof pulling her horn; Eclipse was trying to pull her closer. She climbed onto the bed and scooted over to where she was directed, she was about to say something, only to be silenced by lips pressing against her own and a tongue invading her mouth.

Eclipse realized she did taste rather good, and Luna’s warm breath behind the flavor of her honey only intensified the sensations. She began to moan into Lulu’s mouth. She broke the kiss and began to lap at Luna’s muzzle, but she pulled away.

“My, you are a very naughty pony, aren’t you?” As soon as Luna said this she regretted it; for some reason, Eclipse’s reaction said she might as well have been slapped.

“Sorry.” Said the black filly, closing her eyes and facing away, looking crestfallen. She placed her good hoof over her face after pushing Luna away, then, she began to sob.

Luna didn’t know what had happened, why would her mood change like that? Why take the comment so harshly? Sure, she hadn’t expected Eclipse to behave like that, but that wasn’t bad by itself. At the very start of the day she had thought of Eclipse as being prudish due to how easily she became embarrassed, but as they talked more and more she had found out how far she was willing to go for her sake, even to the point of landing in a hosp-… oh god… that was it. Luna cursed her hormones as she remembered the spell that she had cast that pretty much had made her fillyfriend go into heat… while full of medication. No wonder her mood was so strange now.

“You hate me now, don’t you? I messed up.” Eclipse said between sobs, calling Luna back from her guilt. “They say the worst thing about Hell is that you can see Heaven. I-I… sorry… I’ll just leave y-”

“No!” Lulu said in a worried, but soft, voice. “How could I hate you for it?” She placed her hooves around the other’s neck. “I just didn’t know that about you.” She began to lightly stroke the distraught mare’s body with her soft wings, and, remembering her previous reaction, started to lick and bite from the base of the neck to the chin.

Eventually, the embrace was returned. “So you d-don’t care?”

“Why should I? You just want to be with me and enjoy with me.”

“A-and make you h-happy.” Answered Eclipse, still trying to convince herself to calm down. “And a-as long as I can be and work with y-you, I don’t care what you do to me. Make me y-your toy, your strumpet, your whore if you want. I don’t c-care.”

Luna pressed a hoof against Eclipse’s lips. “Hush, you’re talking nonsense. How could I do that to you? Didn’t you say you fell in love with my-“

She was interrupted by a black hoof in return, which still carried her own scent. “I fell in love with you. All of you.” She motioned to every part of her, every curve of her body, every feather of her wings, and every hair on her tail before placing the hoof back in front of Luna’s lips.

The blue mare began to suckle on the hoof in front of her muzzle, getting her first taste of herself. She was willing to let her little black friend enjoy her own way, plus, it was… stimulating, to say the least. “Even if I also am a little naughty?”

“Of course…” Said Eclipse, now smiling again. “Now, I do believe I owe you, on top of that I did miss yesterday’s party; even if you want to play the pauper, you’re still my princess. Turn around and present the royal cunt.” Her eyes went wide as saucers. “Sorry! I d-…!”

“Oh stop with the apologies!” Said Luna in mild exasperation. “True, nopony has talked dirty to me before, but…” She pressed her nose against the other, half-closing her eyes and raising the unicorn’s chin with a wing. “Just now, I kind of liked it.”

She fluttered her wings to float and then turn around. “Not everything you say has to be flowers, you know? I might just enjoy this ‘darker side’ of yours.” She settled down with her rear knees on either side of Eclipse’s head. “Well? What do you think?” She raised her tail, exposing her privates, and wiggled her rump as she moved backwards.

Eclipse looked onto the soft pink lips that were presented to her, parting them slightly with her nose, the smell of arousal was just so… “Uh… you-your pussy is drooling with anticipation.”

The blue mare shivered, the feeling of warm breath against her pleasure center was just so good… She remembered something, now that she was the size of a normal pony, she could just put them into her mouth…

Eclipse moaned and pressed further into Luna. “You l-like my tits, don’t you Lulu?” The vibrations from her voice made Luna tremble and let out a soft whinny.

She nodded without taking it out of her mouth, her tail whipping and brushing against Eclipse’s horn. The alicorn had other pleasurable ideas, but those could wait for another time; right now, only the soft brushing mattered. Even if it was getting a touch frustrating that it was left at that.

“S-stop teasing me~!” Said Luna in a mock-childish tone, the muscles in her body contracting and relaxing at the treatment she was receiving.

“But this pink pony pussy is so pretty and perfect; it’s pestering me to pepper it with soft little pecks.” Said the black mare, allowing her lips to brush against Luna’s and giving them soft butterfly kisses. Her magic was still too weak to do what Lulu had done to her, but she had other things in mind; remembering some torrid novels from those visits to the library, she took the clit in front of her and began to suckle on it.

Now it was Luna’s turn to get weak on the knees, letting her forelegs slide on the bed until she was resting her head on that black tummy underneath, her wings splayed limply on the bed. The fur on her face was getting sticky, but it barely even registered over the sensations coming from in between her haunches.

Next, Eclipse nibbled in and around, devouring that blue flower; she was careful though, she pulled and scrapped skin with her teeth almost to the point where it was uncomfortable, but that just made it much more stimulating.

Luna shuddered as she was licked and bitten all over her most sensitive places. She noticed that Eclipse stopped, but didn’t notice her moving up and out of her slit.

“This adorable little pucker has been winking at me for a while.”

Luna whinnied in surprise when her lover slid her tongue inside her backdoor. Her eyes rolled back into her head and she almost went completely limp, but she did everything she could to keep her rear legs from buckling. She just let herself enjoy, nuzzling Eclipse right where her head rested.

Then a black hoof began rubbing against her clit and occasionally pushing roughly into her lower lips. And, every now and then, pulling her tail as well. That was it.

It was too much to hold for long, and Luna nickered and whinnied loudly as she came, her hind legs failing and dropping her, making Eclipse’s tongue leave her with a loud, sloppy pop. She spurted all over Eclipse’s chest, making a mess of each other’s coats as she rubbed herself to ride the wave of pleasure as long as possible, spreading the wetness even wider on the black fur supporting her.

It didn’t matter though; all that was important was that they really loved each other. Eclipse patted the lovely flanks in front of her, still somewhat tired from her own release.

Luna, however, wasn’t as tired due to the nature of her body, and managed to turn around and lay next to the pony that had bared her soul to her. She hugged that black pony, ignoring the matted fur for the moment, and asked with shaky breath. “W-where did you learn that?”

The black unicorn let out a nervous laugh and returned the hug, closing her eyes. “Would you believe… a library?”

They would have to clean eventually, but for now, they were happy in each others presence. Eclipse quietly thanked… well, everyone involved: Twilight for her immeasurable help, book smarts and knowledge; Arion for his wonderful magical wings, strange but motivating words and timing; Rainbow Dash for her lessons and unique way of showing her support; Celestia for this the best day of her lif-

She cursed softly, almost inaudibly, without opening her eyes.

“What happened?” Asked Luna, quite confused.

“I was in the middle of thanking everyone for this the best day of my life, when I realized something, something that makes me a little ashamed.” She buried her face into Luna’s mane, her ears folded backwards; she was more than just a ‘little’ ashamed.

“What was it?” Luna didn’t know what to think, what was wrong this time?

“We… uh… unless she left, we…” She didn’t know how to say it calmly, so she dropped the bomb. “We made love in front of your sister.”

Now Luna buried her face in the silver-white mane in front of her. She spoke. “So she either left, or turned invisible, or we tuned her out completely.”

None dared to take a look, so Luna asked. “Big sister, are you there?”

“You are such a cute and bold couple.” She was.

“Why didn’t you stop us Cicy?” The younger alicorn pressed further into the mess of hair, inadvertently getting some of it to stick to her still-messy muzzle.

“I didn’t see you do anything when Eclipse thought I was going to kill her for loving you.”

“So that merits letting us have sex in front of you and allow me to call myself the royal slut?” Eclipse had gone through so many different emotions in one day that she decided to just wait until she was absolutely sure that she knew how she should feel. “How screwed am I?”

Luna just pulled her closer, still refusing to look at Celestia, as if not acknowledging her presence would make the embarrassment un-happen. “It’s not that bad, this type of thing doesn’t bother either of us that much.”

“My dear, your face is sticky with my cum, which I tried to lick off. I greatly enjoyed eating your flower, playing with its stem and speaking in such a way as to make the experience a little raunchier. Your mare-honey, delicious as it may be, is going to glue us together if we stay like this any longer. If neither of you are actually bothered by this, then I’ll just let my ‘dark side’ take over without a care in the world.”

“Really, back when we were practicing divination spells, we sometimes caught each other ‘tending to our nee-‘hey!” Luna was interrupted by a long, slow lick across her face and the feel of a magically-charged horn against hers.

“Hush, now I’m here, so I am going to make sure to take care of all of your needs, my princess. Rain or shine, come Hell or high water, no matter what.” Eclipse rubbed their horns together from tip to tip, then scissoring them until the bases met and so did their foreheads, all the while using what little magic she could to tickle her dear princess. Luna’s shape-shifted form made it easier, since her horn was shorter than it normally was.

The experience was short-lived; Eclipse became unable to further ignore her exhaustion and flopped back onto the bed. She was about to speak, but Celestia lowered her head until her horn came to rest on the silver-manned pony’s forehead and, with a soft glimmer of golden light, sent her into peaceful slumber.

“She doesn’t seem to care much about my status now.” Said Celestia, softly as to not interrupt the little filly’s rest, an amused smirk on her face.

“Please don’t be mad at her, sister. I pushed her to act like that… I didn’t want to lose her or scare her over it.” Luna jumped to her little pony’s defense, holding her prone form closer than ever.

The Sun princess chuckled before continuing. “I know that. How could I be mad? She just loves you so much, and you love her, that is all I need to know.”

“You… know? How long have you been spying on us anyways?” She tried to appear hurt, scowl even, but Eclipse had a goofy, satisfied grin and began nuzzling her while asleep; Luna could only feel at peace.

The older sibling looked down and scrapped the floor with her hooves. “W-well… I actually arrived not long after you.”

“What?!”

“You left so suddenly! What was I supposed to do?” The shadows of that past concern showed themselves in her voice despite her soft whispering. “Sit down quietly as my little sister bolts outside the castle, pale as if she had seen a ghost?”

“Sorry big sister, I-I was so worried I just… forgot to warn you.”

Celestia stepped closer to the moon princess, she perceived the smell of excited fillies even more strongly than she already did, but she paid it no mind. “I know now that you were concerned for her safety back then, there is nothing to apologize for.”

“Um… Celly, you standing so close to us in this state is awkward, can we clean up first?”

Tia had to bite down a laugh, scrunching her face somewhat. “Of course! And I know somepony that can help us. Then we can have some lunch with your monochromatic fillyfriend, what do you say?”

Lulu gave her a small, content smile and turned to her sleeping beauty. “With my little princess? I would love it.”
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