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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you made it a cliff hanger gaaaagghh, please update soon I can't wait to know what happens next.
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, this is so sad, but I like it. I hope that's Ron's voice she heard. Maybe he'll cut Toby's nuts off :-) Continue soon!
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
write more!!! tis good story, butust ust know what happens. so write more! *stares at black canary's cookie* can i have a cookie?
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! Don't stop there! I'm getting so HOT!! U
Oh yeah! Don't stop there! I'm getting so HOT!! Update A.S.A.P. Oh yeah! YEAH!!
Oh yeah! Don't stop there! I'm getting so HOT!! Update A.S.A.P. Oh yeah! YEAH!!
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FINISH!!!! Please? FINISH BEFORE I COME TO UR HOUSE AND BLOW UR BLOODY HEAD OFF! Please? lol but yes, I do REALLy like this! Please finish?
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please please continue i hope ron found her ooo i can't wait please continue and FAST
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh you can't leave there! more now!
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is great. i hope you will update soon.
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping for something different. Instead I got the same old story: competant female heroine is reduced to stupid, cowering victim in order for the rape scenario to work. It's old. It's tired. It shows no imagination. Do better.
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August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aw! Ron's too late! ;.; that's freaky... you're walking home when someone puts a gun to you, forces you into a van, ties you to a chair and then rapes you... geez now I'm all paranoid! my best friend almost got raped but she escaped and came to my house... god it was freaky! anyway, keep it up and I hope Ron kills that Toby bastard!!!!
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