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November 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good and well-written. I had two problems. I really prefer the actual horse ponies, but I have a feeling I'm not gonna win that one.
More serious criticism is that after all that build-up I got nothing with Trixie. I want'd to READ that, not have it mentioned as a one-off line in the sequel. I hope you write that story some time.