Looks like a bunch more happened in this story while I wasnt looking. Some comments on chapters 3-5 (with SPOILERS).
Chapter three:
Loved the hot Lincoln-Lynn action in the shower. But isn't Lynn at all concerned about getting knocked up?
Chapter four:
I've got to admit, I was a little disappointed that Lisa didn't want to get it on with Lincoln, but then I was happy to find out what she wanted to do with him instead.
I loved the bit where Lincoln picks up one twin under each arm to stop them from fighting. That made a great picture in my mind.
Chapter five:
I LOLed at Lisa's description of how she researched the technique of giving a blowjob. And I enjoyed the act itself, of course.
This story is excellent and the plot somehow, both makes sense and is original, which is rare for a story of this type. The idea of them getting superpowers is surprising yet works well especially considering that I could defiantly see it actually happening in the show for an episode, not so much the sex part but the show would totally do the superpower thing.
Will Lana & Lola ask Lincoln for their turn also will Lincoln be making love to Lucy in the next Chpt?
Great to see another chapter, hope to see the other flavors of this story
Worth it, DEFINATELY, worth the wait!!! So Lana and Lola know what's going on with their brother and sisters. Wait where is Lily?
Gotta reread the previous chapters, I might have forgotten a detail or two... and now Lincoln has to help his sad sister Luan sounds like fun to me and Lincoln will put in 110% to accomplish that. Can't wait for Lucy's turn next chapter.
So Lisa is still figuring out what's happening with her brother so far he's gotten stronger, faster, might have developed or had a "natural breeding" evolution, and it looks like he "shares" his evoluting with his "playmates."
So luckily no tentacles, 12 inch tongues, err... maybe enlarged "male pride" (hey I try to be a gentleman stop laughing at me... eh fine I'm silly), but I still hope for Luna time soon and maybe Leni too when everyone comes home? (I did not mean a joke there!)
So again you have achieved what all want, you made me want MORE!!! Keep up the great work and thank you.
Ugh.
I honestly tried to give this another chance, but then you took all the interest I possibly had and shot it execution-style in the back of its head.
Almost everything here looks good (barring the dialogue that needs some work) but you keep trying for this Ronnie Anne and clyde thing, and its hard to support a fic that has such a stupid and nonsensical crack ship.
God dam i really wanna see Lucys turn lol not the happiest that Ronnie Ann is with Clyde but i guess you win some and yoy loose sum lol is Lincoln gonna only hook up with his sister or will he get with other girls like Sam or Nikki
Ronnie maybe out but theirs still so many flavor s to try. Keep up the great work
Ronnie and Clyde?
That's where you lose me this seemed interesting but I'm never reading anything with a dumb crackship like that. Everything you had with Lincoln and sisters was going in the right direction then you added that and killed any further interest I could've had.
Im wondering if being intimate with the girls has the enhancing effect of the bond with lisas experiment spread to them as it seems like lynn has been unnaturally gifted with her competitiveness almost not needing any effort too excell at sports since the encounter with Lincoln and it seems like complete strangers seem compelled to shower her with gifts as evident with the jewellery although i may be reading too much into it but all in all im being thoroughly entertained with this fic so hope you continue to be inspired to work on this tale of intrigue