This is a review/comment for chapter 11
I like this chapter, but I just realized if Lisa has a secret underground lab then why doesn't she build one for Lincoln, to expand his room... though now I think the idea of him having an underground sex dungeon would make too much sense. On a separate note, I wonder if lucy will gain different powers than Lincoln, the name is "Grow, Adapt, Overcome" so it changing to give her different powers would make some sense, that and I would love the idea that she has powers that can let her disappear in shadows easier.
Hah, now she knows what she did. Triple helix dna, Lisa you just made a new species! Thanks for the chapter.
Sorry for the late review, honestly thought i had previously had but I didn't, oops...
I greatly enjoyed the role play between them and the passion they and you put into it. Ahh, the Lucy and Lincoln love scene and yes I do mean LOVE, true they are having "relations" but they honestly love each other... And their siblings. Okay with me, cause now Lincoln is cuddling with Lucy and Lynn Jr at the same time. :)
So now the next question is how will Lincoln get his favorite comedian out of that blasted bed of hers and into his? Maybe a little help from his sisters or maybe the lure of good food? Or with the power of SCIENCE (mad scientist lol) and thank you for confirming some more details of Lincoln's change.
Plus the Lisa cuteness at the end of chapter made me smile, I can't wait for more, so MORE PLEASE!!!
Again thank you for a wonderful read and looking forward to more.
P.S. Any chance Carol Pingray can be Ahem "dragged" into some fun and a relationship with Lincoln? You know living with Lincoln while he "cares" for his sisters that live with him till they are "ready to leave"? Just an idea, but still I enjoy your story and keep up the great writing.
Lucy should have went with Lincoln impregnate me
I can't wait for Lana & Lola to have their turn with Lincoln
Another fine chapter! It’s interesting how lincoln was literally made for fertility and I do wonder how this will affect him in future chapters and if his sisters have “Superior genetics”. Oh and remember the twins are better together!
Loved it!
Waiting to see how Luan's chapter goes. I picture her being a squirter for some reason. Probably her prank squirting flower... i think weird stuff when it gets late.
Again, awesome job!
Oh you dirty little tease, but I do suppose quality does take time. Just remember the twins are better together
Oh god that last line....Remind me to send you the hospital bill for broken ribs! This Romantic-Comedy is awesome, but I'm still hungry for more so thank you for another great chapter.
So triple helix huh, well that will give him room to grow genetically, but so far he's growing romantically as well, wait did Lucy get to see Lincoln's pants explode? Huh funny thought is there going to be a halloween chapter?
LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Damn it next chspter is the one I wsnt looks like I'm going to have to wait for it I hope I don't have to wait too long
Will Lana & Lola play the same games with Lincoln?