This story desperately needs chapters for Luan and Lynn. You are doing an amazing job of bringing real heart and pathos to the characters, the truths about who they really are, and how broken Lincoln is inside. I really want to see the love and the dark side that the comedian and the athlete will shower upon Lincoln and I think you could so some highly astounding work. This story is too wonderful to die, please keep it up!
Really good story i think Lincoln is broken i hope you keep it going im curious on what will happen to him in the end
This is the first story I read in the Loud fics that is both realistic and really erotic. The fic is so good that I signed up to adult-fanfic just to say this.
P.S. Will there be a chapter on Luan?
Her lesson learn, she will not.
I wonder who's the next sister to emotionally scar Lincoln.
This is extremely well written.
i kinda hope it'll have a happy ending after you go through them all or an orgy.
but I really just hope you continue this.