rate_review Reviews

Fun story, and totally plausible in the context of the episode that inspired it. I really liked some of your descriptive language (eg, "...her beautiful gown in a pool around her as she sobbed"), and the sex scene is nicely hot. Good use of the bell, too. I noticed a few minor punctuation issues (eg, a couple of sentences that seemed to call for a question mark but ended with a period), but no serious language problems. Very nicely done.

Almost exactly how I thought the episode should have ended for those two. By far my favorite Gravity Falls pairing.

The episode I've been waiting for, the pairing I wanna see. I hope there will more of that pairing in the show's episodes and stories such as yours.
Great one-shot! Hope to read more:)

I know this is a oneshot, a damn good one by the way, but I wouldn't mind more bell ringing in the future.

Great One-shot!