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June 10, 2023 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly sweet story
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September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
(Originally posted on The Site Which Has Gone POOF! on February 9, 2015)
It's a great little story — very well done. Some good sex and lots of sweetness make it rather poignant on top of erotic. Great work on Isabella's unknown fetish, at Phineas' instigation, then getting really into it for the next time(s). I also like the way she wanted her sexual screams to be only for Phineas. But it was still very cute and almost innocent too. And I guess she knew what bondage was from researching all sorts of knots for that patch. ;) And using a carrot to imagine the carrot-top with was funny. Plus I loved Doofenshmirtz's small print and his reaction once realizing what a mistake it was.
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March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
As always, an impeccable work from you on this particular Fandom, believable, even plausible at some points. Liked a lot the fact that even when he was under her command, he was in charge, and enjoying it while she enjoyed being commanded, which despite her fiery temper, is quite canonical when Phineas is involved.
Act your age even reaffirms this idea, as Isabella went all those years suffering from not being noticed, when she could just have said something, but didn't. Waiting for Phineas to give the first step, an idiocy that she constantly had repeated on the series over and over, apparently never learning that she could also give the first step.
The only part that I disliked of that chapter was the fact that *not even one of their so called friends* dared to even say something, until it was apparently, too late to do something about it.
"Oh, but it was so obvious!"
I hated Baljeet right there... It was also obvious that Phineas wasn't getting the message, but they never cared to clarify that, again, until it was apparently too late to do something about it.
I feel that the half hour chapter was too short, it made the story felt constricted and rushed. An one hour special with more development would have been good, but what we got was at least, to me, enough. Isabella went to say goodbye, obviously trying to know or at least close that chapter on her life, only to find herself surprised.
The fact that Phineas took the initiative and went over to her to kiss her, was the cherry on the top for me. As it corroborates that Isabella its quite the sub, while Phineas as strange as that seems, is the Dom.
Hoping to see more from you and those two.
Act your age even reaffirms this idea, as Isabella went all those years suffering from not being noticed, when she could just have said something, but didn't. Waiting for Phineas to give the first step, an idiocy that she constantly had repeated on the series over and over, apparently never learning that she could also give the first step.
The only part that I disliked of that chapter was the fact that *not even one of their so called friends* dared to even say something, until it was apparently, too late to do something about it.
"Oh, but it was so obvious!"
I hated Baljeet right there... It was also obvious that Phineas wasn't getting the message, but they never cared to clarify that, again, until it was apparently too late to do something about it.
I feel that the half hour chapter was too short, it made the story felt constricted and rushed. An one hour special with more development would have been good, but what we got was at least, to me, enough. Isabella went to say goodbye, obviously trying to know or at least close that chapter on her life, only to find herself surprised.
The fact that Phineas took the initiative and went over to her to kiss her, was the cherry on the top for me. As it corroborates that Isabella its quite the sub, while Phineas as strange as that seems, is the Dom.
Hoping to see more from you and those two.
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February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this is better the act your age please make a squeal or just another story with phineas and isabella
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February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I was a little apprehensive at the BDSM tag, especially after Little Blonde Monster, but that's what's so amazing about you and your writing. You know how to craft the perfect tenor for each of your stories, and you make each idea work within its context. In LBM, Suzy's concept of domination is obviously very different from Phineas' and Isabella's, and you show those differences perfectly. My only complaint would be that we didnt get to see many other peoples reaction to Isabella's queenly aura. I would have liked to see some guy try and make a move on her, only to be stopped by a very protective Phineas. Ah well, it was still a great story, and all I can say is bravo, and I can't wait for whatever you upload next.
Joma
Joma
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February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, talk about ask and you shall receive. This was awesome as always and I'm looking forward to your next story.